for November '752/20/2012 c2 Mino239
Great story! (: I love Donna and Hyde! Sucks how they never got together! Thanks for writing such a good one! I did notice some spelling errors, but seriously, this story is so good it doesn't really matter, right? Keep writing Donna and Hyde fics!
Great story! (: I love Donna and Hyde! Sucks how they never got together! Thanks for writing such a good one! I did notice some spelling errors, but seriously, this story is so good it doesn't really matter, right? Keep writing Donna and Hyde fics!
11/24/2011 c2 
19taylorswiftrox
awww this story was so sweet! the first chapter was perfectly detailed, but i found the beginning of the 2nd one really slow. even though the makeout part was a little awkward, i completely get what you're trying to say in the story. i have a suggestion for you,though, i think you should read your stories out loud because i found a lot of errors in this story. but once again, amazing!
19taylorswiftroxawww this story was so sweet! the first chapter was perfectly detailed, but i found the beginning of the 2nd one really slow. even though the makeout part was a little awkward, i completely get what you're trying to say in the story. i have a suggestion for you,though, i think you should read your stories out loud because i found a lot of errors in this story. but once again, amazing!
11/21/2011 c2 47Marla's Lost
Though not big Hyde/Donna fan, I could be as this was so well written - you captured the young Stephen so well - his hesitancy, his awkwardness before he learned Zen.
I could totally see the kiss coming and evolving and his respect for her kept him at a distance...so nice.
Great job! Thanks to TL22 for pointing this out to me!
47Marla's LostThough not big Hyde/Donna fan, I could be as this was so well written - you captured the young Stephen so well - his hesitancy, his awkwardness before he learned Zen.
I could totally see the kiss coming and evolving and his respect for her kept him at a distance...so nice.
Great job! Thanks to TL22 for pointing this out to me!
11/20/2011 c2 28TL22
That was intense. I really liked the second chapter. In my opinion you captured Donna and Hyde perfectly
Very nicely done
28TL22That was intense. I really liked the second chapter. In my opinion you captured Donna and Hyde perfectly
Very nicely done
11/17/2011 c1 gabs
great start! your story is interesting and i was pulled in. What happens next? :)
great start! your story is interesting and i was pulled in. What happens next? :)