for Terrible Love11/20/2012 c3 
32Iris Musicia
I'm never a huge fan of authors transcribing conversations directly from the movies, and this chapter is sadly no exception. I think it's plagiarism, but then again, isn't all fan fiction? However, what stands out nicely here is the details you've put into Loki's thought process. Getting inside his head is a great view for the readers. :)
32Iris MusiciaI'm never a huge fan of authors transcribing conversations directly from the movies, and this chapter is sadly no exception. I think it's plagiarism, but then again, isn't all fan fiction? However, what stands out nicely here is the details you've put into Loki's thought process. Getting inside his head is a great view for the readers. :)
11/20/2012 c1 Iris Musicia
This is so dramatic, and I love the dynamic Loki and Thor have going here. It's much better than in most stories of this type.
This is so dramatic, and I love the dynamic Loki and Thor have going here. It's much better than in most stories of this type.
6/25/2012 c5 nichi
pz me gusto todo el fic pero me hubiera encantado que rememoraran mas al primer bebe perdido de loki ...
pz me gusto todo el fic pero me hubiera encantado que rememoraran mas al primer bebe perdido de loki ...
6/15/2012 c5 31Wing of Darkness
oh my oh my! such a sweet story! although i can't help but wonder how Loki delivers the baby. heheheh .
anyway! love the story! and Loki! :))
31Wing of Darknessoh my oh my! such a sweet story! although i can't help but wonder how Loki delivers the baby. heheheh .
anyway! love the story! and Loki! :))
5/15/2012 c5 carbonitedoubleohneg
I liked this one too. Angsty but with a happy resolution. Poor Loki, what a tough life. He really needs more happy endings like this one 3
I liked this one too. Angsty but with a happy resolution. Poor Loki, what a tough life. He really needs more happy endings like this one 3
2/20/2012 c5 24I'll Be Your Lie
A truely wonderful end to an amazing story~ Thank you for sharing this with us readers.
-I'll Be Your Lie
24I'll Be Your LieA truely wonderful end to an amazing story~ Thank you for sharing this with us readers.
-I'll Be Your Lie
1/1/2012 c5 Dl
So cute and a little sad.
Good job!
So cute and a little sad.
Good job!
12/26/2011 c5 bermellon
uhm ... Good story, your writing is
great. although I do not like incest.
The slash is my love, although
technically there is no incest. But
what about a Tony / Loki?
uhm ... Good story, your writing is
great. although I do not like incest.
The slash is my love, although
technically there is no incest. But
what about a Tony / Loki?
12/24/2011 c5 4Must.Love.Zombies
. That was the most intense, most adorable, most . . . . grandest thing I have ever read - ever. I was all gushy at the end ^^
4Must.Love.Zombies. That was the most intense, most adorable, most . . . . grandest thing I have ever read - ever. I was all gushy at the end ^^
12/6/2011 c5 30SandXDemonX13
I stumbled upon this by complete chance, and I'm so happy I did! I loved this so much and just wanted to let you know that. :) I thought you did a great job with characterization and dealing with the emotions. I'm very happy I came across this. :)
30SandXDemonX13I stumbled upon this by complete chance, and I'm so happy I did! I loved this so much and just wanted to let you know that. :) I thought you did a great job with characterization and dealing with the emotions. I'm very happy I came across this. :)