for Strange Ride2/11/2012 c1 
94nine miles to go
oh my god, i loved this. every little moment of it was so perfect. you captured them beautifully. thank you thank you thank you :)
94nine miles to gooh my god, i loved this. every little moment of it was so perfect. you captured them beautifully. thank you thank you thank you :)
12/1/2011 c1 1ailaalive
awh... so cute. Jim usually acts like he's 16. (;
Though he has matured a bit in recent years.
1ailaaliveawh... so cute. Jim usually acts like he's 16. (;
Though he has matured a bit in recent years.
12/1/2011 c1 16Sunnykisses
Ughhh too cute. Just watched this week's episode when Jim was talking about how much he wished Pam was with him and I had to read some fanfics, so thanks for this. :)
16SunnykissesUghhh too cute. Just watched this week's episode when Jim was talking about how much he wished Pam was with him and I had to read some fanfics, so thanks for this. :)
11/26/2011 c1 4fishe153
Wow! Very well done. You gave us a lot of good Jim/Pam drama without stretching beyond the realm of realism, as many of these sort've stories do. You truly made me relate to their situations. The tension left at the end is perfectly reminiscent of the bitter-sweet tones of the office for the first three seasons.
Thanks for reminding me why I come onto this site every now and again ;)
Here were some of my thoughts as I was reading your fic:
'The light was cold and harsh and illuminated Pam's face.'
Nice imagery!
'a face that showed no reflection of her thoughts.'
Once again, nice imagery. I like this line.
'"Jim I'm sorry for kissing you."'
Ah! Here we go. Some very nice drama. I'm really excited to see how this works out.
'Jim's throat nearly closed.'
I like this line too!
'He wanted to say something, to ease her flustered backtracking, but he wanted to hear… more.'
Very relateable! Love this line.
4fishe153Wow! Very well done. You gave us a lot of good Jim/Pam drama without stretching beyond the realm of realism, as many of these sort've stories do. You truly made me relate to their situations. The tension left at the end is perfectly reminiscent of the bitter-sweet tones of the office for the first three seasons.
Thanks for reminding me why I come onto this site every now and again ;)
Here were some of my thoughts as I was reading your fic:
'The light was cold and harsh and illuminated Pam's face.'
Nice imagery!
'a face that showed no reflection of her thoughts.'
Once again, nice imagery. I like this line.
'"Jim I'm sorry for kissing you."'
Ah! Here we go. Some very nice drama. I'm really excited to see how this works out.
'Jim's throat nearly closed.'
I like this line too!
'He wanted to say something, to ease her flustered backtracking, but he wanted to hear… more.'
Very relateable! Love this line.
11/20/2011 c1 3Captain Crunk
You use really simple language and give it all this really cool kick with interesting word selection. I dig.
3Captain CrunkYou use really simple language and give it all this really cool kick with interesting word selection. I dig.