for Half of My Heart9/2/2012 c1 
12ShanghaiLily
I love this. You really got into the mind of a tortured teen. I only wish it had been longer!
12ShanghaiLilyI love this. You really got into the mind of a tortured teen. I only wish it had been longer!
8/5/2012 c1 9PrettyinPink33
This is truly a beautiful story. It gives me butterflies. What an amazing writing style.
9PrettyinPink33This is truly a beautiful story. It gives me butterflies. What an amazing writing style.
1/25/2012 c1 Guest
That really was beautiful. Hyde and Jackie are my favorite couple and I really just loved the ending. Thank you do much.
That really was beautiful. Hyde and Jackie are my favorite couple and I really just loved the ending. Thank you do much.
11/24/2011 c1 28TL22
Beautiful story. Well written and original. You have a knack for capturing the characters
28TL22Beautiful story. Well written and original. You have a knack for capturing the characters
11/20/2011 c1 19taylorswiftrox
Again, another amazing story! This story has so much detail and it's all so realistic and very Jackie-like. Love it!
19taylorswiftroxAgain, another amazing story! This story has so much detail and it's all so realistic and very Jackie-like. Love it!
11/19/2011 c1 Authoresque
I gasped at the end, holding my hand to my mouth... That was a BEAUTIFUL story. I don't think there was anything wrong with it- I loved it! Goodness, you are a great writer- please write more about this, it's heartbreaking and lovely.
I gasped at the end, holding my hand to my mouth... That was a BEAUTIFUL story. I don't think there was anything wrong with it- I loved it! Goodness, you are a great writer- please write more about this, it's heartbreaking and lovely.
11/18/2011 c1 CluelessMajor
That was a really sweet one-shot. I simply love the heart metaphors. I think my favorite line was the
"He moved in to kiss her and she felt what was left of her heart rise into her throat and attach to what was left of Steven's."
This one-shot was really well written, I really enjoyed reading it. =)
That was a really sweet one-shot. I simply love the heart metaphors. I think my favorite line was the
"He moved in to kiss her and she felt what was left of her heart rise into her throat and attach to what was left of Steven's."
This one-shot was really well written, I really enjoyed reading it. =)