for Forever7/3/2012 c3 
28itsLALA
You need to update again. This is really good although your third chapter is all **ed up. It stops half way through & repeats everything it said in the second one.
28itsLALAYou need to update again. This is really good although your third chapter is all **ed up. It stops half way through & repeats everything it said in the second one.
12/4/2011 c1 8iolaaa
Okay, first of all this story is actually pretty good but I have some constructive critisicim to say. First off the rating for your story is K when because of the cussing and bad language you should make it M or T. Secondly, you should use spellcheck, I skimmed through this first chapter and there's alot of words not spelled right. Okay, that's all but this is pretty good.
8iolaaaOkay, first of all this story is actually pretty good but I have some constructive critisicim to say. First off the rating for your story is K when because of the cussing and bad language you should make it M or T. Secondly, you should use spellcheck, I skimmed through this first chapter and there's alot of words not spelled right. Okay, that's all but this is pretty good.
12/2/2011 c1 bFishstix
I love this!
Gordo's middle name is Zephyr. They said it in an episode. But I like the name Andrew too. lol! :D
Anyways, off to read the next chapter.
I love this!
Gordo's middle name is Zephyr. They said it in an episode. But I like the name Andrew too. lol! :D
Anyways, off to read the next chapter.
11/23/2011 c3 12BronzeNifler168
This is really good... I like your bad ** Gordo :P that's cool!
Keep writing!
Iolande..xx
12BronzeNifler168This is really good... I like your bad ** Gordo :P that's cool!
Keep writing!
Iolande..xx
11/21/2011 c2 HilaryDroxursox
Wow, this was truly excellent! I would really love to see this continued. I would move your rating up to "T," though, because of the strong language. It's not suitable for young kids. :)
Please, please, PLEASE update this! It's truly amazing so far!
Wow, this was truly excellent! I would really love to see this continued. I would move your rating up to "T," though, because of the strong language. It's not suitable for young kids. :)
Please, please, PLEASE update this! It's truly amazing so far!