for Assassin's Tango1/19/2012 c3
19valuablenicola
it maybe late (my review that is not your story). I may have already read that story before it was published but . .
YAY! Nice Story
I liked it
Nicola
BTW I have been eating sugar again. Ye be warned. Also I wrote you a story. Go find it or write more. Either is good with me
19valuablenicolait maybe late (my review that is not your story). I may have already read that story before it was published but . .
YAY! Nice Story
I liked it
Nicola
BTW I have been eating sugar again. Ye be warned. Also I wrote you a story. Go find it or write more. Either is good with me
12/28/2011 c3 ja4ever
I know that you didn't promise a happy ending but kinda bummed that Jasper actually killed Alice. I didn't think he would actually do it. Wow. At least he can keep his job and reputation and he didn't die. I just didn't like the ending because Alice died but I should have seen it coming. Amazing job though! Loved it! Keep it up! Can't wait to read more of your stories!
P.S. I hope you had a wonderful Christmas and you have a safe and happy New Year! :)
I know that you didn't promise a happy ending but kinda bummed that Jasper actually killed Alice. I didn't think he would actually do it. Wow. At least he can keep his job and reputation and he didn't die. I just didn't like the ending because Alice died but I should have seen it coming. Amazing job though! Loved it! Keep it up! Can't wait to read more of your stories!
P.S. I hope you had a wonderful Christmas and you have a safe and happy New Year! :)
12/26/2011 c3
1Doolie
My heart was pounding the whole time! (Well, not in a literal sense lol)
Wow, this was an unexpected ending. I thought Alice would have won! But the master is truly "un-bloody-beatable" ^.^ A great twist to the story. Love it!
1DoolieMy heart was pounding the whole time! (Well, not in a literal sense lol)
Wow, this was an unexpected ending. I thought Alice would have won! But the master is truly "un-bloody-beatable" ^.^ A great twist to the story. Love it!
12/20/2011 c2 Rachel654
PLEASE HURRY UP AND WRITE MORE I HAVE BEEEN WAITING AGES! :)
PLEASE HURRY UP AND WRITE MORE I HAVE BEEEN WAITING AGES! :)
12/15/2011 c2 random13432
WRITE MORE.
WRITE MORE.
12/12/2011 c2 ja4ever
I feel stupid for not seeing this coming. LOL. I mean it's in the title! Alice has her own score to settle. I can't believe she cut him! This probably isn't going to end well. Tango indeed! Awesome job! Loved it! Even though it was a little confusing in the middle there. Keep it up!
I feel stupid for not seeing this coming. LOL. I mean it's in the title! Alice has her own score to settle. I can't believe she cut him! This probably isn't going to end well. Tango indeed! Awesome job! Loved it! Even though it was a little confusing in the middle there. Keep it up!
12/10/2011 c2 Sarah v
Just started readin this, love it. But how can jasper be repulsed by Alice? She's so cute!
Just started readin this, love it. But how can jasper be repulsed by Alice? She's so cute!
12/10/2011 c2 deltagirl74
I wasn't expecting Alice to be another assassin who knows Jasper. I thought she just saw the future. I like that she has the upper hand on him since so few ever have it seems.
I wasn't expecting Alice to be another assassin who knows Jasper. I thought she just saw the future. I like that she has the upper hand on him since so few ever have it seems.
11/22/2011 c1 Tolazytologin
Ohh interesting, i can't wait for the next parts
Ohh interesting, i can't wait for the next parts
11/22/2011 c1 RANDOM
WRITE MORE! please :L!
WRITE MORE! please :L!
11/22/2011 c1 ja4ever
Really digging this so far. Dark Jasper is very believable and kinda sexy. LOL. I've only read fanfics when Alice is the assassin so this is really cool. Great plot. Amazing job! Loved it! Keep it up! Can't wait until the next chapter to find out how Alice knows Jasper.
Really digging this so far. Dark Jasper is very believable and kinda sexy. LOL. I've only read fanfics when Alice is the assassin so this is really cool. Great plot. Amazing job! Loved it! Keep it up! Can't wait until the next chapter to find out how Alice knows Jasper.
