for Brought Together, Forced Apart1/23 c6 Zomg
Eppppiiiiiiiiiiccccccccccccc c! Okay now this right here is the best story in history like literally ! Oh could you make max and storm a couple? Cause it would make sax eww scratch that morm no that sounds wrong hmmmm ohh I know ! Stax yup gotta luv the Sfax! Well look at me what a chatterbox well if you count it is1:47 at night well any ways please update sooon! .
Eppppiiiiiiiiiiccccccccccccc c! Okay now this right here is the best story in history like literally ! Oh could you make max and storm a couple? Cause it would make sax eww scratch that morm no that sounds wrong hmmmm ohh I know ! Stax yup gotta luv the Sfax! Well look at me what a chatterbox well if you count it is1:47 at night well any ways please update sooon! .
1/8 c1 Katiebaby
You should really add more to this. It's really good and I seriously want Max and Storm to get together. Forget Fang. LOL
You should really add more to this. It's really good and I seriously want Max and Storm to get together. Forget Fang. LOL
3/21/2012 c6 
5BubbleWrapAndCupcake
Ok i seariosly need u to.update. please. Do they have there experation dates! Ooooooooh this going be good
5BubbleWrapAndCupcakeOk i seariosly need u to.update. please. Do they have there experation dates! Ooooooooh this going be good
3/18/2012 c6 1smartypants86
wow this is a really good story, and by the way, will there be any romantic pairings? like max+storm/fang? cuz max and fang used to be together, but then in ch. 1 or something, max said her "heart skipped a beat" when storm said something... or something... i dont really remember. and i was so sad when the original flock couldnt tell the difference between jade and max. i thought they knew (and loved!) her better than that... :'( anyway. really good story (again!) and UPDATE SOON IF U WANT TO LIVE... jk... maybe... :D watevs, u get the idea
1smartypants86wow this is a really good story, and by the way, will there be any romantic pairings? like max+storm/fang? cuz max and fang used to be together, but then in ch. 1 or something, max said her "heart skipped a beat" when storm said something... or something... i dont really remember. and i was so sad when the original flock couldnt tell the difference between jade and max. i thought they knew (and loved!) her better than that... :'( anyway. really good story (again!) and UPDATE SOON IF U WANT TO LIVE... jk... maybe... :D watevs, u get the idea
2/28/2012 c5 Brook
OMG this story is amazing! Please upaste soon!
Write on,
Brook
OMG this story is amazing! Please upaste soon!
Write on,
Brook
12/27/2011 c5 KITTYKATKARMA
hey this is great plz more i beg on my my knees and will the flock find out bout Max actually being Max and Jade being Jade not Max ?
hey this is great plz more i beg on my my knees and will the flock find out bout Max actually being Max and Jade being Jade not Max ?