for Collared4/19 c19 Lola
While I enjoyed this story I really don't think it should have been listed as a romance at all let alone primarily as a romance. The amount of romance in this is insignificant and could have been left out of this story with no ill affect.
While I enjoyed this story I really don't think it should have been listed as a romance at all let alone primarily as a romance. The amount of romance in this is insignificant and could have been left out of this story with no ill affect.
4/9 c4 EvilBoyzR2Cute
I laughed so loud at your mathematical explanations.
Perfect way to teach an assassin how to add, and subtract.
I laughed so loud at your mathematical explanations.
Perfect way to teach an assassin how to add, and subtract.
1/6 c19 KohanaHitachiin
Gahhh! I was starting to think it was going to turn into a HibarixJade story xD! ''What a twist!'' (wonder if anyone gets that :p)
Anyway I love everything about this story and I just read all the comments for this last chapter and I have to say I also cried like a baby when she was saying goodbye to everyone...I kinda even cried a little when she rejected Hibari just like with Alaude..so very sad, but so very cute with her and bel. Squee!
Great fic..might come back to read it again some time.
*much love*
Koh
Gahhh! I was starting to think it was going to turn into a HibarixJade story xD! ''What a twist!'' (wonder if anyone gets that :p)
Anyway I love everything about this story and I just read all the comments for this last chapter and I have to say I also cried like a baby when she was saying goodbye to everyone...I kinda even cried a little when she rejected Hibari just like with Alaude..so very sad, but so very cute with her and bel. Squee!
Great fic..might come back to read it again some time.
*much love*
Koh
1/6 c13 KohanaHitachiin
Kya! 3
This story is so friggen crazy! I love it!
Squalo,Jade,Bel,Mammon are my fav characters wewt! I love how your writing them. 3
Kya! 3
This story is so friggen crazy! I love it!
Squalo,Jade,Bel,Mammon are my fav characters wewt! I love how your writing them. 3
7/15/2012 c19 
1Ragdoll-KIt
OH MY GOD! i cried at this chapter! and i don't normally cry when reading stories like this! i could feel the emotion from your words. Beautifully written!
1Ragdoll-KItOH MY GOD! i cried at this chapter! and i don't normally cry when reading stories like this! i could feel the emotion from your words. Beautifully written!
7/10/2012 c19 Wutzit2yah
OMG I'm in love with this story!
The plot, the character development! It just gives me tingles. haha
I feel sad for Alaude. I hope he and Flavia are together in the spirit world.
Their relationship was well developed for the short amount of time in the background/flashback/whatever, you had writing.
Summary: ZETA EPIC STORY COMPLETELY AWESOME!
*totally going to read again*
OMG I'm in love with this story!
The plot, the character development! It just gives me tingles. haha
I feel sad for Alaude. I hope he and Flavia are together in the spirit world.
Their relationship was well developed for the short amount of time in the background/flashback/whatever, you had writing.
Summary: ZETA EPIC STORY COMPLETELY AWESOME!
*totally going to read again*
5/22/2012 c19 7Leo-in-Wonderland
I cried when she was saying good-bye to the Varia. It was so sad, I'm still tearing up right now. I love this story. Thank you for writing it.
7Leo-in-WonderlandI cried when she was saying good-bye to the Varia. It was so sad, I'm still tearing up right now. I love this story. Thank you for writing it.
5/22/2012 c19 3purplebunny93
that was an awesome story :D (normally i'd do the smiley with an equal sign but last time i reviewed soomething they didnt show -3-) even though i was really lookin forward to seeing more Bel, i was still quite satisfied with the ending :) imma read your other story now -w-
3purplebunny93that was an awesome story :D (normally i'd do the smiley with an equal sign but last time i reviewed soomething they didnt show -3-) even though i was really lookin forward to seeing more Bel, i was still quite satisfied with the ending :) imma read your other story now -w-
5/22/2012 c19 3Indyctator
"how she was secretly jealous of his hair."
Okay, that KILLED me XDDD
That was a really good, excellent final chapter!
Loved the ending *_* omg... to be honest, I had totally forgotten about the Varia OTL I was like "oooh yeaaaaaah she was with them at the beginning!" 'D So it was a really good idea to end with them \o/
kufufufufuf I will now read the new fic YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY
Athena FTW \o/
THIS IS JAPANESE LUNCH TIME RUSH!
3Indyctator"how she was secretly jealous of his hair."
Okay, that KILLED me XDDD
That was a really good, excellent final chapter!
Loved the ending *_* omg... to be honest, I had totally forgotten about the Varia OTL I was like "oooh yeaaaaaah she was with them at the beginning!" 'D So it was a really good idea to end with them \o/
kufufufufuf I will now read the new fic YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY
Athena FTW \o/
THIS IS JAPANESE LUNCH TIME RUSH!
5/14/2012 c18 ChieShireCat17
OMG! I LOVE YOUR STORY! its exciting and follows the plot perfectly. i like how you blended the background to make it match the plot in the real anime. i cant wait until the next chpter
OMG! I LOVE YOUR STORY! its exciting and follows the plot perfectly. i like how you blended the background to make it match the plot in the real anime. i cant wait until the next chpter