for Thu'um of A Distant Utopia5/11 c4 
8Lucas Bane
Was that ending some type of omake? I was very confused, and did that Prince fella turn into Servant Emiya?
8Lucas BaneWas that ending some type of omake? I was very confused, and did that Prince fella turn into Servant Emiya?
5/10 c2 Lucas Bane
Man, Saber even as a non-servant kicked ass. Being a dragonborn is very fitting for her.
Man, Saber even as a non-servant kicked ass. Being a dragonborn is very fitting for her.
5/6 c4 SashaSeer
So Sheogorath is Deadpool now, only with reality warping powers instead of guns? Best. Plot-twist. Ever,
So Sheogorath is Deadpool now, only with reality warping powers instead of guns? Best. Plot-twist. Ever,
4/30 c4 adrian11
Love this story. Here's a spelling mistake: You forgot the I in IS
will take all things for what they are. This s a wondrous world our maker has created and we must show our appreciation to our father thus
Love this story. Here's a spelling mistake: You forgot the I in IS
will take all things for what they are. This s a wondrous world our maker has created and we must show our appreciation to our father thus
4/30 c3 adrian11
Oh! I thought, somewhat naively, that the dragon they had killed was Alduin. Well, this is much better, leaves more space for a story. I love how you write Arturia. Also, when does this take place? I mean, does it happen after the fourth war or the fifth? 'Cause I kind of hope there's some romance. It seems like it'd be amusing to read about Arturia trying to have a romance, though I'm not sure if it would be better that she wait to get herself sorted out or have one while she's still somewhat off balance.
You have a spelling mistake here: THEY shoul be THE
They soldiers knew that they must dig through each wreckage, because each could potentially contain a survivor, trapped under piles of stone and wood.
Oh! I thought, somewhat naively, that the dragon they had killed was Alduin. Well, this is much better, leaves more space for a story. I love how you write Arturia. Also, when does this take place? I mean, does it happen after the fourth war or the fifth? 'Cause I kind of hope there's some romance. It seems like it'd be amusing to read about Arturia trying to have a romance, though I'm not sure if it would be better that she wait to get herself sorted out or have one while she's still somewhat off balance.
You have a spelling mistake here: THEY shoul be THE
They soldiers knew that they must dig through each wreckage, because each could potentially contain a survivor, trapped under piles of stone and wood.
4/30 c2 adrian11
I can't believe no one's done this before, you are awesome! I'm eager to know what you plan on doing now, with Alduin defeated. I admit, Saber was never one of my favorite characters, mostly because I prefer underdogs and she's really overpowered, but reading about her like this, unsure, weakened but standing strong in the face of a monster like Alduin is so engaging! Also, I really hope she keeps on this path of kingship, if that is in fact what she's doing, that's reminiscent of Riders rather than her own apathetic style. I loved the tear, you really bring her to life!
And even if she wasn't my favorite, I never get tired of a small girl throwing around monsters and men 5 times her size...
I can't believe no one's done this before, you are awesome! I'm eager to know what you plan on doing now, with Alduin defeated. I admit, Saber was never one of my favorite characters, mostly because I prefer underdogs and she's really overpowered, but reading about her like this, unsure, weakened but standing strong in the face of a monster like Alduin is so engaging! Also, I really hope she keeps on this path of kingship, if that is in fact what she's doing, that's reminiscent of Riders rather than her own apathetic style. I loved the tear, you really bring her to life!
And even if she wasn't my favorite, I never get tired of a small girl throwing around monsters and men 5 times her size...
4/28 c4 Raven Hawkeyes
You aren't going to continue that one? It's sad because it was really good. I don't know if you will answer but if I may ask, what were your plan? Were you going to give Arturia a new kingdom with Skyrim? Anyway, take care and thank you for sharing your story!
You aren't going to continue that one? It's sad because it was really good. I don't know if you will answer but if I may ask, what were your plan? Were you going to give Arturia a new kingdom with Skyrim? Anyway, take care and thank you for sharing your story!
4/2 c4 A different wall
YOU BROKE THE FORTH WALL!
YOU BROKE THE FORTH WALL!
3/17 c4 Guest
I just realized...
TES is a setting where the level of technology hasn't progressed after a millennia. It's rather fitting that a modern day person inserted into this world, with the ability to introduce actual progress, ends up being considered mad/struck mad by the deities/become the mad god himself.
I just realized...
TES is a setting where the level of technology hasn't progressed after a millennia. It's rather fitting that a modern day person inserted into this world, with the ability to introduce actual progress, ends up being considered mad/struck mad by the deities/become the mad god himself.
3/3 c4 Crash Overdrive
Oh god... What unspeakable horrors have you unleashed upon the world. The only way it could possibly be worse is if you somehow made a contrivance to add Deadpool.
Oh god... What unspeakable horrors have you unleashed upon the world. The only way it could possibly be worse is if you somehow made a contrivance to add Deadpool.
3/2 c4 1Matron
It's extremely well written and I can't wait for the next chapter. One thing though, you had a part that said "Interlude, end" it would probably be good for your readers if you labeled when the Interlude started asides from the line, because you have used the line for other things such as separating a chapter, while your note sections are an automatic to the readers the line after does not indicate whether it is apart of the text before or not. Thanks!
1MatronIt's extremely well written and I can't wait for the next chapter. One thing though, you had a part that said "Interlude, end" it would probably be good for your readers if you labeled when the Interlude started asides from the line, because you have used the line for other things such as separating a chapter, while your note sections are an automatic to the readers the line after does not indicate whether it is apart of the text before or not. Thanks!
2/25 c4 1Burn Note
What the fuck was that last part?
A murder attempt through mood whiplash?
I guess it's kind of funny, but it doesn't fit at all.
1Burn NoteWhat the fuck was that last part?
A murder attempt through mood whiplash?
I guess it's kind of funny, but it doesn't fit at all.
2/19 c1 6DruidFWY
Please for the love of Akatosh, Talos, Arkay, Julianos, Mara, Dibella, Stendarr, Zenithar and Kynareth, THE NINE DIVINES, UPDATE THIS STORY! You have a large number of supporters for this story and I personally love it so much and cannot wait for your update!
I will even summon the Daedric Princes to appeal to you!
Druid
6DruidFWYPlease for the love of Akatosh, Talos, Arkay, Julianos, Mara, Dibella, Stendarr, Zenithar and Kynareth, THE NINE DIVINES, UPDATE THIS STORY! You have a large number of supporters for this story and I personally love it so much and cannot wait for your update!
I will even summon the Daedric Princes to appeal to you!
Druid