for Initiates of the 22nd Nome5/5/2012 c1 Peachs
Initiate Name: Caitlyn Sanders.
Age: 13.
Physical Desrcription: light reddish-brownish mid-back hair, paleish skin with freckles, light blueish-greenish eyes, slightly angular face, about 86 lbs, lean and lithe. Wears easy to move in and comfertable clothes.
Personality: Nice, not afriad to speak her mind, strong willed, trust worthy, persuasive, smart, agial, and leathal.
Likes: Gymnastics, Track, runnung, nature, cats(she has one called Amuna), her friends who she loves dearly, and sleeping.
Dislikes: Bullies, Homework, People who abuse any animal, not getting at least 8 1/2 hours of sleep, and have people she cherishs get hurt.
Hobbies: Gymnastics, Track, Reading fiction books, Learning new fighting tecniques, and playing with her cat.
Type of Magic: Combat magician.
Path of What God: Bast.
Where they came from: Memphis,Tennesse.
Background: Her family was very loving, but her mother died in a carcrash. Her dad became drunk all the time and was abusive, so she ranaway.
Relationship Status: Single.
Other Special Traits: Falls asleep during long talks, loves close combat, loves winning, and she is a very picky eater.
Disabilities: none.
Initiate Name: Caitlyn Sanders.
Age: 13.
Physical Desrcription: light reddish-brownish mid-back hair, paleish skin with freckles, light blueish-greenish eyes, slightly angular face, about 86 lbs, lean and lithe. Wears easy to move in and comfertable clothes.
Personality: Nice, not afriad to speak her mind, strong willed, trust worthy, persuasive, smart, agial, and leathal.
Likes: Gymnastics, Track, runnung, nature, cats(she has one called Amuna), her friends who she loves dearly, and sleeping.
Dislikes: Bullies, Homework, People who abuse any animal, not getting at least 8 1/2 hours of sleep, and have people she cherishs get hurt.
Hobbies: Gymnastics, Track, Reading fiction books, Learning new fighting tecniques, and playing with her cat.
Type of Magic: Combat magician.
Path of What God: Bast.
Where they came from: Memphis,Tennesse.
Background: Her family was very loving, but her mother died in a carcrash. Her dad became drunk all the time and was abusive, so she ranaway.
Relationship Status: Single.
Other Special Traits: Falls asleep during long talks, loves close combat, loves winning, and she is a very picky eater.
Disabilities: none.
5/4/2012 c1 
8blackraven88
Initiate Name (First and last, please): Lena Stengos
Age (between 10 and 17): 15
Physical Description: Long wavy brown hair that goes down to her waist, light blue eyes, lightly tanned skin.
Personality: Kind, sensitive, and nervous to do reckless things. However, when placed in a battle, Lena tries to be internally strong, for everyone. She often does things that will benefit the group instead of just fighting for herself.
Likes/Dislikes: Likes chai tea, chocolate, swimming, the summer, and hanging out with friends. She also likes to play sports like softball and track and field. She doesn't like when people yell at her
Hobbies: Running, swimming, texting.
Type of Magic (Healer, charm-maker, necromancer, etc.): Water Elementalist/Healer. She's also pretty good with Divine Words.
Path of What God: Nephthys
Where they came from: Athens, Greece
Background: She was born to a kind family, and they treated her well. When they knew that she had to be sent away to the 22nd Nome, they were very sad. She tried to remain strong for them, but she broke down eventually. Her family taught her that brutal strength wasn't the only way to fight, and that in the end, inner strength is the most important thing of all.
Relationship Status (optional): Single, and doesn't plan to have romance.
Other Special Traits: None
Disabilities (optional): None
I REALLY hope that Lena isn't a Mary Sue. If she is, PM me and tell me what I should change.
8blackraven88Initiate Name (First and last, please): Lena Stengos
Age (between 10 and 17): 15
Physical Description: Long wavy brown hair that goes down to her waist, light blue eyes, lightly tanned skin.
Personality: Kind, sensitive, and nervous to do reckless things. However, when placed in a battle, Lena tries to be internally strong, for everyone. She often does things that will benefit the group instead of just fighting for herself.
Likes/Dislikes: Likes chai tea, chocolate, swimming, the summer, and hanging out with friends. She also likes to play sports like softball and track and field. She doesn't like when people yell at her
Hobbies: Running, swimming, texting.
Type of Magic (Healer, charm-maker, necromancer, etc.): Water Elementalist/Healer. She's also pretty good with Divine Words.
Path of What God: Nephthys
Where they came from: Athens, Greece
Background: She was born to a kind family, and they treated her well. When they knew that she had to be sent away to the 22nd Nome, they were very sad. She tried to remain strong for them, but she broke down eventually. Her family taught her that brutal strength wasn't the only way to fight, and that in the end, inner strength is the most important thing of all.
Relationship Status (optional): Single, and doesn't plan to have romance.
Other Special Traits: None
Disabilities (optional): None
I REALLY hope that Lena isn't a Mary Sue. If she is, PM me and tell me what I should change.
4/6/2012 c1 C.J. Kiwi
I've already read through the whole thing, so I know chapter 3 isn't coming out anytime soon, but I'm submitting anyway.
Initiate Name:Taryn Thali
Age:15
Appearance:Black hair,hazel eyes,tan,stocky,muscular
Personality:Doesn't trust people,sarcastic,can be nice but usually moody,stays out of the spotlight
Likes:shadows,black,nature,the earth, animals, grey/silver, combat,being sarcastic
Dislikes:being in the spotlight,bright colors,being the center of attention,obvious people
Hobbies:writing,combat training, listing to music
Type of Magic:healer
Path:of Geb
Came From:Anchorage, Alaska
Backround:orphan,slighty bitter about parents' death
Other Traits:impulsive but logical, has ADHD
Okay, well that's it.
I've already read through the whole thing, so I know chapter 3 isn't coming out anytime soon, but I'm submitting anyway.
Initiate Name:Taryn Thali
Age:15
Appearance:Black hair,hazel eyes,tan,stocky,muscular
Personality:Doesn't trust people,sarcastic,can be nice but usually moody,stays out of the spotlight
Likes:shadows,black,nature,the earth, animals, grey/silver, combat,being sarcastic
Dislikes:being in the spotlight,bright colors,being the center of attention,obvious people
Hobbies:writing,combat training, listing to music
Type of Magic:healer
Path:of Geb
Came From:Anchorage, Alaska
Backround:orphan,slighty bitter about parents' death
Other Traits:impulsive but logical, has ADHD
Okay, well that's it.
3/30/2012 c1 gogreen216
Initiate Name: Katie Knapp (hates being called Kathryn)
Age: 14
Physical Description: Dark brown eyes and hair with a streak of red; athletic build.
Personality: She's optimistic, always looks for the bright side of things. Makes jokes a lot, and cheers her friends up if they're depressed. Used to make straight B's in school(except for English, she fails... epicly). And sometimes shy around new people.
Likes: Most people, sports, music, reading, and nights.
Dislikes: Girly girls, makeup, mornings, school, and writing.
Hobbies: Loves eco-friendlyy activities, color guard, and track.
Type of Magic: Healer
Path of What God: Set
Where they came from: New York, New York
Background: Katie lived her first 10 years in an orphanage. The "caretaker" found her on the steps when she was just an infant. Around 11 years old, she was adopted by Nancy Petrilak. Nancy enrolled her to Grafton Middle School and Katie got straight B's three years in a row. That summer, Katie was practicing color guard in her backyard when she saw something red and glowing out of the corner of her eye. She went towards the glow and saw a WAS SEPTER amulet, the symbol of Set she learned in school. Katie put it on and heard a deep male voice telling her to go to Washington. The next day Nancy got a promotion as a Professional Eye Doctor in Seattle. Coincidence? The night Katie and her mom got to their new home, Katie ran away following the voice in her head. Around 3 a.m. she found the 22nd Nome.
Relationship Status: Single, maybe someone in the future.
Other Special Traits: Can create chaos for a limited abount of time.
Disabilities: Umm... She gets distracted a lot and would give up her life for a friend.
Initiate Name: Katie Knapp (hates being called Kathryn)
Age: 14
Physical Description: Dark brown eyes and hair with a streak of red; athletic build.
Personality: She's optimistic, always looks for the bright side of things. Makes jokes a lot, and cheers her friends up if they're depressed. Used to make straight B's in school(except for English, she fails... epicly). And sometimes shy around new people.
Likes: Most people, sports, music, reading, and nights.
Dislikes: Girly girls, makeup, mornings, school, and writing.
Hobbies: Loves eco-friendlyy activities, color guard, and track.
Type of Magic: Healer
Path of What God: Set
Where they came from: New York, New York
Background: Katie lived her first 10 years in an orphanage. The "caretaker" found her on the steps when she was just an infant. Around 11 years old, she was adopted by Nancy Petrilak. Nancy enrolled her to Grafton Middle School and Katie got straight B's three years in a row. That summer, Katie was practicing color guard in her backyard when she saw something red and glowing out of the corner of her eye. She went towards the glow and saw a WAS SEPTER amulet, the symbol of Set she learned in school. Katie put it on and heard a deep male voice telling her to go to Washington. The next day Nancy got a promotion as a Professional Eye Doctor in Seattle. Coincidence? The night Katie and her mom got to their new home, Katie ran away following the voice in her head. Around 3 a.m. she found the 22nd Nome.
Relationship Status: Single, maybe someone in the future.
Other Special Traits: Can create chaos for a limited abount of time.
Disabilities: Umm... She gets distracted a lot and would give up her life for a friend.
2/24/2012 c3 ASTRA IS BETTER THEN YOU
How could you Nat? HOW? HOOOOOOOW?
How could you Nat? HOW? HOOOOOOOW?
12/26/2011 c1 2Daydreamer63
*Whistles* You got a lot of Mary-Sue's in there. (Wondering what a Mary Sue is? It's a overall adjective that describes a "perfect, gorgeous, extrememly powerful, has an abnormal amount of hair, tragic sob past" OC that will usually be a girl.)
Name: Lukas Andersen
Age: Let's make him 16.
Appearance: He's tall. Six foot even, with a swimmer's build. Kinda girly looking for a guy, but neverless, he's got a sort of elusive charm to him. Lukas has dyed black hair that's in the "emo" style. His original hair color was white-blonde. He's got really strange silvery eyes; they almost look like they're glowing. Has well built features, would be eye candy if he was interested in girls. Has a silver earing in one ear.
(I imagine him to look like this photo I randomly found :D: http:/s1000.photobucket.com/albums/af126/coughthepoisonout/?action=view¤t=l_.png)
Personality: Lukas is elusive. He’s the lone wolf of the pack, preferring not to associate with people, which makes it strange that he’s a healer. When Lukas is at work, it’s best to leave him alone and let him work his stuff. He has a way of calming people down with his voice. Lukas is calm, level headed, and very smart; he gets annoyed with dealing with drama queens, however. He prefers not to fight, but rather, negotiate his way out of combat with some well said words. He can seem emotionless, and a bit of a smart alec. Though Lukas does not show it, he has a way with people, and is a smoothtalker. Seemingly never sleeps. Sarcastic as crap and can never be surprised. Fond of raising his eyebrow at you in a sarcastic matter.
Likes: Healing, birds, silence, meditation, moonlight, piano, the night, heavy rock.
Dislikes: Chatterboxes, people in general, coffee, pigeons, heat.
Hobbies: Practicing his healing and mindwork, kite-flying, and practicing piano.
Type of Magic: Healer. Is also a bit of a mind specialist. As a mind specialist, he can influence people’s choices, hypnotize a little, and wreck havoc on the human mind through mental torture. That’s why his eyes are so creepy, yet hypnotizing. As a healer, he specializes in mostly psychological damage, but is skilled at physical wound too.
Path of What God: Khonsu.
Where they came from: Oslo, Norway. His pharaoh blood is quite faint, though still there.
Background: After his dad died when Lukas was eleven, his mom decided to move over to the USA for a fresh start. The fresh start never came though. Nearly two years after, Lukas’ mom just collapsed of stress and overwork and was sent to a mental hospital. Lukas spent the month escaping from foster care homes until he found the 22nd nome. He hopes that one day he’ll be able to fix his mother’s broken mind.
Relationship Status: Single like a Pringle, man. He’s also gay. He’s never had a problem about his sexuality, and thinks you’re low and silly if you make fun of him for it.
Other Special Traits: Uhhhh, when he gets advanced enough, he’ll probably be able to read and control minds. Stuff like that. :D Allergic to sushi. Probably would be friends with Salvatore Suvare. I know I’m probably forgetting something, so if I think of something I’ll tuck it into a review.
Disabilities: Dyslexic, and has insomnia.
2Daydreamer63*Whistles* You got a lot of Mary-Sue's in there. (Wondering what a Mary Sue is? It's a overall adjective that describes a "perfect, gorgeous, extrememly powerful, has an abnormal amount of hair, tragic sob past" OC that will usually be a girl.)
Name: Lukas Andersen
Age: Let's make him 16.
Appearance: He's tall. Six foot even, with a swimmer's build. Kinda girly looking for a guy, but neverless, he's got a sort of elusive charm to him. Lukas has dyed black hair that's in the "emo" style. His original hair color was white-blonde. He's got really strange silvery eyes; they almost look like they're glowing. Has well built features, would be eye candy if he was interested in girls. Has a silver earing in one ear.
(I imagine him to look like this photo I randomly found :D: http:/s1000.photobucket.com/albums/af126/coughthepoisonout/?action=view¤t=l_.png)
Personality: Lukas is elusive. He’s the lone wolf of the pack, preferring not to associate with people, which makes it strange that he’s a healer. When Lukas is at work, it’s best to leave him alone and let him work his stuff. He has a way of calming people down with his voice. Lukas is calm, level headed, and very smart; he gets annoyed with dealing with drama queens, however. He prefers not to fight, but rather, negotiate his way out of combat with some well said words. He can seem emotionless, and a bit of a smart alec. Though Lukas does not show it, he has a way with people, and is a smoothtalker. Seemingly never sleeps. Sarcastic as crap and can never be surprised. Fond of raising his eyebrow at you in a sarcastic matter.
Likes: Healing, birds, silence, meditation, moonlight, piano, the night, heavy rock.
Dislikes: Chatterboxes, people in general, coffee, pigeons, heat.
Hobbies: Practicing his healing and mindwork, kite-flying, and practicing piano.
Type of Magic: Healer. Is also a bit of a mind specialist. As a mind specialist, he can influence people’s choices, hypnotize a little, and wreck havoc on the human mind through mental torture. That’s why his eyes are so creepy, yet hypnotizing. As a healer, he specializes in mostly psychological damage, but is skilled at physical wound too.
Path of What God: Khonsu.
Where they came from: Oslo, Norway. His pharaoh blood is quite faint, though still there.
Background: After his dad died when Lukas was eleven, his mom decided to move over to the USA for a fresh start. The fresh start never came though. Nearly two years after, Lukas’ mom just collapsed of stress and overwork and was sent to a mental hospital. Lukas spent the month escaping from foster care homes until he found the 22nd nome. He hopes that one day he’ll be able to fix his mother’s broken mind.
Relationship Status: Single like a Pringle, man. He’s also gay. He’s never had a problem about his sexuality, and thinks you’re low and silly if you make fun of him for it.
Other Special Traits: Uhhhh, when he gets advanced enough, he’ll probably be able to read and control minds. Stuff like that. :D Allergic to sushi. Probably would be friends with Salvatore Suvare. I know I’m probably forgetting something, so if I think of something I’ll tuck it into a review.
Disabilities: Dyslexic, and has insomnia.
12/24/2011 c1 4Zephyri Magia
I realize this is a bit late, but you said the character submitting was still open, so I made a character ^^ Of course, it's probably my fault for not seeing this earlier, otherwise I would have submitted earlier.
Initiate Name (First and last, please): Salvatore Suvare
Age (between 10 and 17): 15
Physical Description: He’s 5’6’’, with black hair that at the top of his head tends to stand up in small tufts, while at the back he has long enough hair to plait it into a small braid; he has dark brown eyes and tanned skin. He usually tends to wear casual clothes, T-shirts, jeans, and boots.
Personality: Salvatore is rather steady—not much tends to surprise him. He’s quiet, but he’ll speak his mind on his opinion, though he tends to make it a simple statement and move on. He is intensely loyal, and will protect his friends with everything he has. He reserves speaking for more of the weighty conversations, rather than idle chatter. He can be somewhat formal in his speaking patterns.
Likes/Dislikes: Likes—meditating, silence, calm atmosphere, reading, and being able to protect his friends. Dislikes—loud noises, pointless talking, messiness, fighting for no reason other than to fight.
Hobbies: He meditates often, because he likes being calm. He can be found reading or practicing his magic.
Type of Magic (Healer, charm-maker, necromancer, etc.): Earth elementalist; his most powerful attacks are opening up chasms. He can lift boulders, depending on their size, and can bring down walls if they happen to be made of stone or brick.
Path of What God: Geb
Where they came from: Phoenix, Arizona
Background: His parents died when he was seven, so his grandmother raised him, and taught him to be aware of the earth’s changing. Eventually she sent him to the 22nd Nome believing he could learn more about his magic from them.
Relationship Status (optional): Single.
Other Special Traits: Salvatore has been taught to listen to the earth; so if something large is heading his way, he knows of it. He can also create shockwaves by striking his staff against the ground, though usually only one per every seven days because the effort taxes his strength.
Disabilities (optional): He is afraid of heights; he has never flown before in his life, as he doesn’t like losing connection to the earth. At some point, he realizes he will have to face his fear, but for now he avoids it as much as possible.
4Zephyri MagiaI realize this is a bit late, but you said the character submitting was still open, so I made a character ^^ Of course, it's probably my fault for not seeing this earlier, otherwise I would have submitted earlier.
Initiate Name (First and last, please): Salvatore Suvare
Age (between 10 and 17): 15
Physical Description: He’s 5’6’’, with black hair that at the top of his head tends to stand up in small tufts, while at the back he has long enough hair to plait it into a small braid; he has dark brown eyes and tanned skin. He usually tends to wear casual clothes, T-shirts, jeans, and boots.
Personality: Salvatore is rather steady—not much tends to surprise him. He’s quiet, but he’ll speak his mind on his opinion, though he tends to make it a simple statement and move on. He is intensely loyal, and will protect his friends with everything he has. He reserves speaking for more of the weighty conversations, rather than idle chatter. He can be somewhat formal in his speaking patterns.
Likes/Dislikes: Likes—meditating, silence, calm atmosphere, reading, and being able to protect his friends. Dislikes—loud noises, pointless talking, messiness, fighting for no reason other than to fight.
Hobbies: He meditates often, because he likes being calm. He can be found reading or practicing his magic.
Type of Magic (Healer, charm-maker, necromancer, etc.): Earth elementalist; his most powerful attacks are opening up chasms. He can lift boulders, depending on their size, and can bring down walls if they happen to be made of stone or brick.
Path of What God: Geb
Where they came from: Phoenix, Arizona
Background: His parents died when he was seven, so his grandmother raised him, and taught him to be aware of the earth’s changing. Eventually she sent him to the 22nd Nome believing he could learn more about his magic from them.
Relationship Status (optional): Single.
Other Special Traits: Salvatore has been taught to listen to the earth; so if something large is heading his way, he knows of it. He can also create shockwaves by striking his staff against the ground, though usually only one per every seven days because the effort taxes his strength.
Disabilities (optional): He is afraid of heights; he has never flown before in his life, as he doesn’t like losing connection to the earth. At some point, he realizes he will have to face his fear, but for now he avoids it as much as possible.
12/24/2011 c2 EternalDarkness
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Amazing and I'm so glad you used my characters. I love they way you get rid of people in the 22nd Nome and Karma and Keith also made me laugh. Vanessa is amazing and I can't wait to see what happens next an I love try way you Portaded Cali it was amazing hope you update soon .
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Amazing and I'm so glad you used my characters. I love they way you get rid of people in the 22nd Nome and Karma and Keith also made me laugh. Vanessa is amazing and I can't wait to see what happens next an I love try way you Portaded Cali it was amazing hope you update soon .
12/23/2011 c2 KARMAISABADASSVANESSAWATCHOUT
I SOOOOOO Shouldve taken out that punching part! ERG. I KILL YOU.
and Ill be at your party
~Astra
I SOOOOOO Shouldve taken out that punching part! ERG. I KILL YOU.
and Ill be at your party
~Astra
12/23/2011 c2 6Captain Cynthia
Yay! The story finally popped up! :D I am happily happy in the happiest way. HAPPY! :) this story looks amazing so far! :)
6Captain CynthiaYay! The story finally popped up! :D I am happily happy in the happiest way. HAPPY! :) this story looks amazing so far! :)
12/23/2011 c2 1PanicAtTheEpicness
Awesome! That was really good! Did I give mine a flaw? I'm pretty sure I did... Oh yeah, I made her bipolar! Does that count?
Okay, this was a really good chapter! I'm kind of fond of the girl who likes punching people in the face, lol. And this didn't seem to be rushed at all! Great way of explaining stuff, and I really hope you update soon! Cyber cookies for you, my friend!
1PanicAtTheEpicnessAwesome! That was really good! Did I give mine a flaw? I'm pretty sure I did... Oh yeah, I made her bipolar! Does that count?
Okay, this was a really good chapter! I'm kind of fond of the girl who likes punching people in the face, lol. And this didn't seem to be rushed at all! Great way of explaining stuff, and I really hope you update soon! Cyber cookies for you, my friend!
12/23/2011 c2 Daughterof Elmo.Rawr
Good chapter, can't wait for more
Good chapter, can't wait for more