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6/4/2012 c59 Midnight Angels Say GoodNight
Great chapter and story. Im in love with it i cant wait for the next chapter. Update soon please :)
5/24/2012 c22 deanna127
This is really quite good, very creative. However, you should have someone beta or pre-read to assist you with some of the grammatical issues.
5/23/2012 c12 deanna127
still interesting.
5/23/2012 c6 deanna127
was he watching his mother as some type of inanimate being. Taking a physical form after she gave birth? Or was he watching or all knowing in the womb? I'm kind of confused.
5/23/2012 c5 deanna127
not so interesting... hopefully it adds substance
5/23/2012 c3 deanna127
interesting
5/23/2012 c4 deanna127
this is very interesting. the short vignettes are very intriguing
5/17/2012 c59 mommymac0508
I loved it so so so good go Bella stand your ground and sneaky Charlie hehe I cat wait to the dinner update soon
5/16/2012 c59 1suzie55
Hey BB, miss seeing your pretty face around. Loved the chapter. They were talking to you and all had a lot to say. It was a fun chapter. Can't wait to see what happens at this dinner.

Thank you for writing this story and for sharing it. :)
4/27/2012 c59 1Fullofpassion09
Just jumped on board for the ride and so glad I did! It has been an amazing journey and you've captured the fantastical in a tangible way... Truly lookin forward to the next update.
4/23/2012 c59 csuter
Wow, that was a hell of a chapter, loved it!
4/22/2012 c59 alc1002
Good chapter
4/22/2012 c59 Barbr9
Hmmmmmm Wonder how Jake is going to take the news of the proposal? I hope he doesn't ruin the moment.

I feel for poor Leah.

Mwah

Barb
4/22/2012 c59 3MrsEdwardCullenP
Do I hear wedding bells? I think I do... lol
4/22/2012 c17 pudget12
LOL, what a cliff hanger, thank goodness I am new to the story and can just keep on reading..well until I have to clock in from lunch!
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