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12/20/2012 c1 3Rhyme13kh14Xion8
I just saw common mistakes such as spelling and I think that's about it. Well I liked the story and it is very funny. I hope you get Tue next chapter up I'm curious to know what Josh is going to do!
11/16/2012 c1 RANDOM PERSON
GREAT! That was funny! Will you bring other characters such as: Rhyme, Neku, Shiki, and Beat? I think it would make it funnier if you could! I hope to see more chapters from you soon! By the way I love the part where Mr. H tells Joshua he was just kidding! The one part that made me laugh so hard!
2/27/2012 c1 5TWEWYfan1
Not bad, but you should work on capitalization.

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