for Sven: Savior of Tomorrow5/1/2012 c6 Princess Rikku
Amazing... AMAZING. Where will the next chapter take us? WHERE?
"for she will play a greater role in seeing as the world you all know becoming a dark desolate galaxy." That girl has got to be taken down...
Here is what kind of fate she'll face...
Rhapsody Brothers: *Behind the Spirit bomb and ready to Launch it* This is for you Princess Amy... It's from the people of PLANET EARTH AND PLANET ARUS... SPIRIT BOMB!
Eat defeat... You EVIL EVIL ROTTEN GIRL... Evil Princess Amy... she killed an innocent girl and She's gonna pay for it. That she will.
Amazing... AMAZING. Where will the next chapter take us? WHERE?
"for she will play a greater role in seeing as the world you all know becoming a dark desolate galaxy." That girl has got to be taken down...
Here is what kind of fate she'll face...
Rhapsody Brothers: *Behind the Spirit bomb and ready to Launch it* This is for you Princess Amy... It's from the people of PLANET EARTH AND PLANET ARUS... SPIRIT BOMB!
Eat defeat... You EVIL EVIL ROTTEN GIRL... Evil Princess Amy... she killed an innocent girl and She's gonna pay for it. That she will.
3/31/2012 c5 Princess Rikku
HaHaHaHaHA! Stop it... You're killing me. i'm busting a gut here with delight. Oh my god... Classic! this just keeps getting better. the Drama is amazing. and King John's been made to try to fend off Lotor and rescue Allura. Sweet. Bring on Chapter 6. i just have to see what is next for them all. AWESOME!
HaHaHaHaHA! Stop it... You're killing me. i'm busting a gut here with delight. Oh my god... Classic! this just keeps getting better. the Drama is amazing. and King John's been made to try to fend off Lotor and rescue Allura. Sweet. Bring on Chapter 6. i just have to see what is next for them all. AWESOME!
3/28/2012 c1 King Lotor Sincline
My goodness this is so cool! You used a lot of people from FB, hahaha! Awesome!
My goodness this is so cool! You used a lot of people from FB, hahaha! Awesome!
3/21/2012 c4 Princess Rikku
I can only imagine what is next for the new made force. The Rhapsody family and them all remembering what all led them to the point that they're in now... They are all itching to fight back and take control again. i can only imagine what the next Chapters will bring on at them. Will the Rhapsody family be able to fight against one of their own? Or will the Evil Princess yet still be too much for them? Can't wait to see what happens next. I am in suspense. where will it go next? *Glued to the seat*
I can only imagine what is next for the new made force. The Rhapsody family and them all remembering what all led them to the point that they're in now... They are all itching to fight back and take control again. i can only imagine what the next Chapters will bring on at them. Will the Rhapsody family be able to fight against one of their own? Or will the Evil Princess yet still be too much for them? Can't wait to see what happens next. I am in suspense. where will it go next? *Glued to the seat*
3/20/2012 c3 Roger Smith
Awesome... I just wish that my stories were this good. but it's only as good as the one who writes it. and you really did a work of art with all this. Placing each of the Rhapsody clan in it. one after the other and making it feel like you were reading a book. it captured my eyes and got me to where i never wanted to leave from reading it. It's brilliant.
Awesome... I just wish that my stories were this good. but it's only as good as the one who writes it. and you really did a work of art with all this. Placing each of the Rhapsody clan in it. one after the other and making it feel like you were reading a book. it captured my eyes and got me to where i never wanted to leave from reading it. It's brilliant.
3/20/2012 c3 Princess Rikku
Oh dear... this is perfect. i was so moved by this Chapter. i can't even begin to express how much i loved this. you placed me and my family in such spark. I am really captivated. truly. i can never express it in any other way than this. Wonderful.
Oh dear... this is perfect. i was so moved by this Chapter. i can't even begin to express how much i loved this. you placed me and my family in such spark. I am really captivated. truly. i can never express it in any other way than this. Wonderful.
3/19/2012 c1 Princess Rikku
Where is the 3rd chapter? when will it be here? I am hanging on to the suspense here... but it's now driving me nuts... what is the next chapter to this? Will there ever be more to read? The suspense is just killing me terribly.
Where is the 3rd chapter? when will it be here? I am hanging on to the suspense here... but it's now driving me nuts... what is the next chapter to this? Will there ever be more to read? The suspense is just killing me terribly.
2/11/2012 c2 Princess Rikku-Angelic Raven
I love this story. You've done Beautifully. make the 3rd chapter. it's coming out beautifully. *Touched*
I love this story. You've done Beautifully. make the 3rd chapter. it's coming out beautifully. *Touched*
1/14/2012 c2 Roger Smith
AWESOME! This is too good. I love it! What's next? Will there be more appearances. Like 4 boys fighting back? Or the Angelic Raven coming to burn the Evil out of The evil girl? I can hardly sit still... please keep writing more and more. Oh good heavens... I am so loving it. *Glued to his seat with eyes buried into the tale* WONDERFUL! EXCELLENT!
AWESOME! This is too good. I love it! What's next? Will there be more appearances. Like 4 boys fighting back? Or the Angelic Raven coming to burn the Evil out of The evil girl? I can hardly sit still... please keep writing more and more. Oh good heavens... I am so loving it. *Glued to his seat with eyes buried into the tale* WONDERFUL! EXCELLENT!
1/10/2012 c1 Roger Smith
Ha Ha Ha! Classic. i read this now and i am so darn moved by it... Wonderful...
"Unfortunately, the tragic loss would be the foreshadowing of what's to come. It wasn't even a week after the funeral, and Doom's Fleet made out a massive assault. Even the Vehicle Voltron Force had come to help out the remaining Lion Voltron Force. King Lotor had decided to take over the galaxy and has captured Princess Allura. Consumed by grief, rage and anger, Princess Rikku Rhapsody's daughter Princess Amy was turned evil and Lotor used this opportunity and swayed her to his side making the battle ahead inevitable.
Lance, pilot of the Red Lion, was the first to try and the first to die. Hunk was the next to fall, then Pidge, then Voltron cadet Daniel, and even most of the Vehicle Voltron Force was destroyed by Doom's forces led by the evil Princess Amy, including Land Team leader Cliff Sutherland and Air Team member Ginger Barba. With all said and done, this had become a new era for the Galaxy Alliance: an era of darkness."
Amazing... that is a wonderful opener... i am so moved. Way to go . WAY TO GO! WOOHOO!
Ha Ha Ha! Classic. i read this now and i am so darn moved by it... Wonderful...
"Unfortunately, the tragic loss would be the foreshadowing of what's to come. It wasn't even a week after the funeral, and Doom's Fleet made out a massive assault. Even the Vehicle Voltron Force had come to help out the remaining Lion Voltron Force. King Lotor had decided to take over the galaxy and has captured Princess Allura. Consumed by grief, rage and anger, Princess Rikku Rhapsody's daughter Princess Amy was turned evil and Lotor used this opportunity and swayed her to his side making the battle ahead inevitable.
Lance, pilot of the Red Lion, was the first to try and the first to die. Hunk was the next to fall, then Pidge, then Voltron cadet Daniel, and even most of the Vehicle Voltron Force was destroyed by Doom's forces led by the evil Princess Amy, including Land Team leader Cliff Sutherland and Air Team member Ginger Barba. With all said and done, this had become a new era for the Galaxy Alliance: an era of darkness."
Amazing... that is a wonderful opener... i am so moved. Way to go . WAY TO GO! WOOHOO!