for My Beautiful Storm5/17 c5 Guest
Hilarious. Love drunk Edward.
Hilarious. Love drunk Edward.
5/12 c2 Guest
"No, you stink at basketball and at talking. You should walk home,"
Best. Line. Ever
"No, you stink at basketball and at talking. You should walk home,"
Best. Line. Ever
5/4 c1 GoldenAffair
So I finished reading this story as well and once again, your story is simply superb. Loved the sweet and totally adorable Edward and the quirky yet funny Bella. They were the perfect match for each other thanks to your brilliant idea of Bella rambling of weather facts is completely unique, seriously I learned A LOT! Beautiful storm was heart-warming and fluffy, it was a good read which I thoroughly enjoyed, hope you keep on coming with these spending stories:)
So I finished reading this story as well and once again, your story is simply superb. Loved the sweet and totally adorable Edward and the quirky yet funny Bella. They were the perfect match for each other thanks to your brilliant idea of Bella rambling of weather facts is completely unique, seriously I learned A LOT! Beautiful storm was heart-warming and fluffy, it was a good read which I thoroughly enjoyed, hope you keep on coming with these spending stories:)
4/28 c20 sillyvamp
Loved this story. So much sweetness.
I also loved the fact that this was a HS fic and you didn't feel the need to make them cuss like sailors. :)
Thank you for sharing this with us.
Loved this story. So much sweetness.
I also loved the fact that this was a HS fic and you didn't feel the need to make them cuss like sailors. :)
Thank you for sharing this with us.
4/20 c20 sosueme
I've loved this fic a lot. Your edward was sweet, but determined, and bella was smart, sassy, and independent. Jake was the funny as hell! For a little kid with a bit part, he had the best lines. Thanks for sharing!
I've loved this fic a lot. Your edward was sweet, but determined, and bella was smart, sassy, and independent. Jake was the funny as hell! For a little kid with a bit part, he had the best lines. Thanks for sharing!
4/18 c20 Holidai
Eep! This was one of the best stories I have ever read, my goodness I loved it - so, so good. :D
Eep! This was one of the best stories I have ever read, my goodness I loved it - so, so good. :D
4/18 c7 Holidai
I liked this chapter. Their fight was cute but realistic and nice too. I'm glad they made up. Thank you for not leaving us hanging.
I liked this chapter. Their fight was cute but realistic and nice too. I'm glad they made up. Thank you for not leaving us hanging.
4/18 c6 Holidai
I am glad the whole jealousy thing was fairly short lived. Thank you for not dragging it out and for giving them the first (of many) kisses!
I am glad the whole jealousy thing was fairly short lived. Thank you for not dragging it out and for giving them the first (of many) kisses!
4/18 c5 Holidai
I really like how well you paint a picture. In this last chapter I especially noticed it in the locker scene where they got invited to the party in the first place. In this one, I noticed it just about everywhere. This chapter was top notch. Edward is darling and Bella is a sweetheart.
I really like how well you paint a picture. In this last chapter I especially noticed it in the locker scene where they got invited to the party in the first place. In this one, I noticed it just about everywhere. This chapter was top notch. Edward is darling and Bella is a sweetheart.
4/18 c3 Holidai
I like your Edward. He has convictions and he sticks to them. It is neat seeing Bella suddenly aware of the other kids. I hope she does not let their opinions mean anything to her for very long though. :)
I like your Edward. He has convictions and he sticks to them. It is neat seeing Bella suddenly aware of the other kids. I hope she does not let their opinions mean anything to her for very long though. :)
4/18 c2 Holidai
This chapter was so sweet. I like stories about kids who don't quite fit the mold. :)
This chapter was so sweet. I like stories about kids who don't quite fit the mold. :)