for To give an angel back her wings9/10/2010 c1 yamcha16
i lik it itz jus i tink yamcha and bulma should hav ended up 2 gether in ur story maybe is cuase yamchas my favorit character
i lik it itz jus i tink yamcha and bulma should hav ended up 2 gether in ur story maybe is cuase yamchas my favorit character
7/14/2010 c1 YamchaFan6
sweet, and emotional. i cried, because i've been in a similar situation (except for the dying part), but im a girl and lost my boyfriend, but I can still empathize.
poor Yamcha.
sweet, and emotional. i cried, because i've been in a similar situation (except for the dying part), but im a girl and lost my boyfriend, but I can still empathize.
poor Yamcha.
10/2/2003 c1 
7Jena Skye
I LOVED IT!
Although poor Yumcha really should be with Bulma.
The ending line was perfect!
7Jena SkyeI LOVED IT!
Although poor Yumcha really should be with Bulma.
The ending line was perfect!
11/22/2002 c1 marle
very cute. I cannot help but love a broken-hearted Yamachu fic.
very cute. I cannot help but love a broken-hearted Yamachu fic.
10/21/2002 c1 Majin Danielle
Wow...
*weeps uncontrolably*
I loved this small look into Yamcha's mind. I haven't read the Vow or it's sequel yet, but I plan on doing it now. I have just been searching around for some good stories, and I think I may have found some! I can't read them today, I have so little time, which is why I decided to read this one parter. It was beautiful. It really makes me feel for him, even if he is a cheating bastard. He finally realizes what he has lost.
wow...
-Majin Danielle
Wow...
*weeps uncontrolably*
I loved this small look into Yamcha's mind. I haven't read the Vow or it's sequel yet, but I plan on doing it now. I have just been searching around for some good stories, and I think I may have found some! I can't read them today, I have so little time, which is why I decided to read this one parter. It was beautiful. It really makes me feel for him, even if he is a cheating bastard. He finally realizes what he has lost.
wow...
-Majin Danielle
5/23/2002 c1 Jewell
Hey, this is great! I never would have expected to start crying because of Yamcha´s heartbreak, but - well- I did.. I´m impressed! ; )
Hey, this is great! I never would have expected to start crying because of Yamcha´s heartbreak, but - well- I did.. I´m impressed! ; )
5/6/2002 c1 13Sweet Revolution
Ohhhh. I'm gonna cry! *crys* That was so sad! But very very good! I don't like Yamcha very much, but this story made me feel sorry for him! Very Very Gooooood!
Baby Kakarott
13Sweet RevolutionOhhhh. I'm gonna cry! *crys* That was so sad! But very very good! I don't like Yamcha very much, but this story made me feel sorry for him! Very Very Gooooood!
Baby Kakarott
5/6/2002 c1 7Makoto-and-MooCat
Makoto: VERY VERY ROMANTIC! DEEP!
MooCat: mushy...
Makoto: (hits moocat with a frying pan)
7Makoto-and-MooCatMakoto: VERY VERY ROMANTIC! DEEP!
MooCat: mushy...
Makoto: (hits moocat with a frying pan)
5/6/2002 c1 Sue
This was beautiful. Yamcha was so sincere and so heartbroken that I actually have tears in my eyes. His pov was full of emotion...well, what can I say. I loved it!
This was beautiful. Yamcha was so sincere and so heartbroken that I actually have tears in my eyes. His pov was full of emotion...well, what can I say. I loved it!
5/5/2002 c1 deletedaccount1234
Okay maybe it was just me because the last two days have been an emotional hell for me...but that made me cry. No I am serious. I pictured it all in my head and even before the last line I was crying but aat that last line...Forget control. It was incredible and heart wrenching. Poor Yamcha. I didn't think you bashed at all! In fact it was very sympetic towards him. Giving her up for love and all. I think you should (on your siter at least) make this a full fledged mini-series. Although I am a dedicated GoB shipper I can't help but love the Vow series, and this Y/B ties in perfectly. Look at this I have rambled on for ever now, guess I will go.
Love ya
Misty **
Okay maybe it was just me because the last two days have been an emotional hell for me...but that made me cry. No I am serious. I pictured it all in my head and even before the last line I was crying but aat that last line...Forget control. It was incredible and heart wrenching. Poor Yamcha. I didn't think you bashed at all! In fact it was very sympetic towards him. Giving her up for love and all. I think you should (on your siter at least) make this a full fledged mini-series. Although I am a dedicated GoB shipper I can't help but love the Vow series, and this Y/B ties in perfectly. Look at this I have rambled on for ever now, guess I will go.
Love ya
Misty **
5/5/2002 c1 24Vegeta Goddess
I can't believe that I'm actually saying this...but...but...I LOVED IT! It was sweet and emotional and nice...man! This rocked! I've never read a Y/B but I figured that since you were writing it it would turn out ok, and it did! Yippee!
24Vegeta GoddessI can't believe that I'm actually saying this...but...but...I LOVED IT! It was sweet and emotional and nice...man! This rocked! I've never read a Y/B but I figured that since you were writing it it would turn out ok, and it did! Yippee!
5/5/2002 c1 no name
this was so sad yet so beautiful and romantic. i usually hate romantic stories but i really liked this one
this was so sad yet so beautiful and romantic. i usually hate romantic stories but i really liked this one