for Dead and Unburied10/25/2012 c1 
17Penny Shepard
Aw that's such a sweet wee one-shot. Seriously though, they couldn't have got back together? LOL I loved it though xxx
17Penny ShepardAw that's such a sweet wee one-shot. Seriously though, they couldn't have got back together? LOL I loved it though xxx
7/12/2012 c1 21IluvMonkeys
I think that this is proabably my favorite of your stories even if it is quite sad. Very well written though, great emotions. This was a great addition to the ending of that episode. I was partial to a little further exploration of that conversation too :)
21IluvMonkeysI think that this is proabably my favorite of your stories even if it is quite sad. Very well written though, great emotions. This was a great addition to the ending of that episode. I was partial to a little further exploration of that conversation too :)
7/10/2012 c1 21OrtonsMistress
OMG! That makes me want to cry. Very well written, and I loved the plot to this. I've always wondered if Gibbs had told her the truth about Shannon and Kelly, would it have made a difference to Jenny. Would she have let herself love him the way she did and would she have left him. Great job on this. Still makes me want to cry, but I think it's a fantastic little one-shot.
*amanda*
21OrtonsMistressOMG! That makes me want to cry. Very well written, and I loved the plot to this. I've always wondered if Gibbs had told her the truth about Shannon and Kelly, would it have made a difference to Jenny. Would she have let herself love him the way she did and would she have left him. Great job on this. Still makes me want to cry, but I think it's a fantastic little one-shot.
*amanda*
4/5/2012 c1 29NCISVU
Love the mind games they play with each other in the beginning. That was so them. And the answers for why she left him in Paris - WOW! I realize after reading this I've never contemplated why she left. I love how you worked it all out in this story! It's brilliant and makes perfect sense. This scene totally should've made it onto that episode. It's beautiful... even if it is sad =D
29NCISVULove the mind games they play with each other in the beginning. That was so them. And the answers for why she left him in Paris - WOW! I realize after reading this I've never contemplated why she left. I love how you worked it all out in this story! It's brilliant and makes perfect sense. This scene totally should've made it onto that episode. It's beautiful... even if it is sad =D
1/28/2012 c1 136madame.alexandra
This is literally the most perfect thing I have ever read and I really don't think there's anything else I can say about it.
Honestly.
136madame.alexandraThis is literally the most perfect thing I have ever read and I really don't think there's anything else I can say about it.
Honestly.
12/12/2011 c1 2VioletAkuamoebe0396
Ummmm...not yo fault on this one but. Make them get back together is a plot line I much rather like to read. Its was good don't get me wrong. But I kept waiting for it to happen.
2VioletAkuamoebe0396Ummmm...not yo fault on this one but. Make them get back together is a plot line I much rather like to read. Its was good don't get me wrong. But I kept waiting for it to happen.
12/7/2011 c1 20TheBreakfastGenie
Sorry this took so long. :/
Great angst. Naturally I prefer happy endings, but this was very realistic and in-character. That conversation really needed to be expanded upon. (I've actually been working on-and-off for a couple weeks on a story based on that scene too, but don't worry, it's different. :) ) I like Jenny's thoughts at the beginning. "Did she really owe him anything?" So many people, even Jenny fans, seem to think she did for some reason. It's nice to see her with some self-esteem, since that was so quickly eroded on the show. Nice job. :)
20TheBreakfastGenieSorry this took so long. :/
Great angst. Naturally I prefer happy endings, but this was very realistic and in-character. That conversation really needed to be expanded upon. (I've actually been working on-and-off for a couple weeks on a story based on that scene too, but don't worry, it's different. :) ) I like Jenny's thoughts at the beginning. "Did she really owe him anything?" So many people, even Jenny fans, seem to think she did for some reason. It's nice to see her with some self-esteem, since that was so quickly eroded on the show. Nice job. :)
12/4/2011 c1 11Talldi
Well done. But I like the one where they met on vacation better. Better ending! LOL di
11TalldiWell done. But I like the one where they met on vacation better. Better ending! LOL di
12/4/2011 c1 29dimplesgirl
Wow. This was beautiful, really raw and emotional. I really enjoyed it. Thank you. MOre soon I hope? :)
xx
29dimplesgirlWow. This was beautiful, really raw and emotional. I really enjoyed it. Thank you. MOre soon I hope? :)
xx
12/3/2011 c1 maggie
how can I put to words what I felt while reading this story? I probably can't... it's too good... really...
how can I put to words what I felt while reading this story? I probably can't... it's too good... really...
12/2/2011 c1 itzcheeseball
great story! I wish they would have gotten together :)
Looking forward to an update for "A Life Reclaimed".
great story! I wish they would have gotten together :)
Looking forward to an update for "A Life Reclaimed".
12/2/2011 c1 7Romantic Southerner
Wow, that was so sad yet beautifully written. Great imagery and such a wonderful way to convey their emotions. I was hoping for a happy ending, but this is so fitting for how things were with them. Keep up the amazing job. I can't wait to see more one shots in the future. ;)
I love your writing and I am the biggest slacker in the world for not reading/reviewing your other story. My life has been so crazy lately and the dust seems like it could settle, but now with the holidays in full force and me working in retail, things will never slow down for me. Sorry for being MIA. I need to work on this, but I need to figure out where I left off last. :(
7Romantic SouthernerWow, that was so sad yet beautifully written. Great imagery and such a wonderful way to convey their emotions. I was hoping for a happy ending, but this is so fitting for how things were with them. Keep up the amazing job. I can't wait to see more one shots in the future. ;)
I love your writing and I am the biggest slacker in the world for not reading/reviewing your other story. My life has been so crazy lately and the dust seems like it could settle, but now with the holidays in full force and me working in retail, things will never slow down for me. Sorry for being MIA. I need to work on this, but I need to figure out where I left off last. :(
12/2/2011 c1 129Mrs. Elizabeth Gibbs
Ugh. You went with the break-my-heart ending- and it was perfect and beautiful. It fits them, and completely defines their relationship- not knowing all the details until after the fact.
I loved this- but you knew that already :) I love everything you write!
"Damn." She quickly wiped away the offending drops, embarrassed by her loss of control. She saw the confusion in his eyes. "We could have really had something, couldn't we?" -Excuse me while I go Jenny in crying.
"Her hand on his face healed so many hurts inside of him. He closed his eyes, drinking in her touch - knowing it would have to last a lifetime." -PERFECTION.
Ugh I loved everything about this. And you. I love our conversations. Oh- and I may have the first chapter of the story I told you about ready to look over on Sunday. Possibly. BUT I digress- I love these one-shots, they're wonderful :) Excellent work! xoxo
129Mrs. Elizabeth GibbsUgh. You went with the break-my-heart ending- and it was perfect and beautiful. It fits them, and completely defines their relationship- not knowing all the details until after the fact.
I loved this- but you knew that already :) I love everything you write!
"Damn." She quickly wiped away the offending drops, embarrassed by her loss of control. She saw the confusion in his eyes. "We could have really had something, couldn't we?" -Excuse me while I go Jenny in crying.
"Her hand on his face healed so many hurts inside of him. He closed his eyes, drinking in her touch - knowing it would have to last a lifetime." -PERFECTION.
Ugh I loved everything about this. And you. I love our conversations. Oh- and I may have the first chapter of the story I told you about ready to look over on Sunday. Possibly. BUT I digress- I love these one-shots, they're wonderful :) Excellent work! xoxo