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11SonadowStories
YES! I KNEW IT! I TOTALLY KNEW IT! Well, no, i didn't know, but i was hoping it. XD
11SonadowStoriesYES! I KNEW IT! I TOTALLY KNEW IT! Well, no, i didn't know, but i was hoping it. XD
5/21 c13 Guest
I did not see that coming! Can't wait for the next chapter!
I did not see that coming! Can't wait for the next chapter!
5/21 c13 3AJ the Hedgehog
so this is a restart for shadow and sonic? that is brilliant! please continue! :)
3AJ the Hedgehogso this is a restart for shadow and sonic? that is brilliant! please continue! :)
5/21 c13 29MNLMFangirl
Whoa a twist O-o I was expecting Shadow to run off and never be seen again or something. Not that it was a dream. O-o *still in shock.* great story! Continue? Please!
29MNLMFangirlWhoa a twist O-o I was expecting Shadow to run off and never be seen again or something. Not that it was a dream. O-o *still in shock.* great story! Continue? Please!
5/21 c13 4suicuneluvr
OMG mind twist! Shadow has been given a second hance to fix everything! Ahhhh! *faints from mind beig blown lol* keep up the good work!
4suicuneluvrOMG mind twist! Shadow has been given a second hance to fix everything! Ahhhh! *faints from mind beig blown lol* keep up the good work!
5/21 c13 12Yolandah-da-Hedgehoggu
It was all a dream?! Breaking dawn much? I'm so confused... Its a good story, but now I'm just confuzzled.
12Yolandah-da-HedgehogguIt was all a dream?! Breaking dawn much? I'm so confused... Its a good story, but now I'm just confuzzled.
5/7 c12 Makeanotherone
Ok I can see two directions this stories going A shadow commits suicide or B sonics comes to shadow to tell him to move on
Ok I can see two directions this stories going A shadow commits suicide or B sonics comes to shadow to tell him to move on
5/6 c12 Guest
Good story. I don't like that the main character died, but the story is not a tragedy. Please kill Sonic's father, by the way. It would make me feel better about the whole thing. Good work with Shadow's emotions, by the way. Just like he lost the love of his life. I wonder if you're going to make him die, or find someone new, or go on as a lonely hedgehog who never dates. I wonder...
Good story. I don't like that the main character died, but the story is not a tragedy. Please kill Sonic's father, by the way. It would make me feel better about the whole thing. Good work with Shadow's emotions, by the way. Just like he lost the love of his life. I wonder if you're going to make him die, or find someone new, or go on as a lonely hedgehog who never dates. I wonder...
5/2 c2 29MNLMFangirl
The father abuse reminded me sooooo much of my friends fathers abuse. O-o I thought I was reading a story about her for a second while reading it. Luckily she got rid of her father but still. Its like I'm reading her story all over again.
29MNLMFangirlThe father abuse reminded me sooooo much of my friends fathers abuse. O-o I thought I was reading a story about her for a second while reading it. Luckily she got rid of her father but still. Its like I'm reading her story all over again.
4/29 c12 3AJ the Hedgehog
this was a powerful update you're a good story teller this chapter alone make me want to cry...
3AJ the Hedgehogthis was a powerful update you're a good story teller this chapter alone make me want to cry...
4/27 c12 12Yolandah-da-Hedgehoggu
What?! How could she just die?! Nooooooo! Someone needs to call in Elise like now... Cause the main character never dies! Unless they are revived... So sad... I feel like the story is over. :( Waiting for the next chappie though... She might come back...
12Yolandah-da-HedgehogguWhat?! How could she just die?! Nooooooo! Someone needs to call in Elise like now... Cause the main character never dies! Unless they are revived... So sad... I feel like the story is over. :( Waiting for the next chappie though... She might come back...