for Ghost Hunt: The SPR and HIM4/5 c10 
3JigokuTenshi834
Oh no! He doesn't remember Mai! And now thet're being chased by a crazy woman! :O
3JigokuTenshi834Oh no! He doesn't remember Mai! And now thet're being chased by a crazy woman! :O
4/5 c10 12Treelow955
Whoah, this was epic!
I hope they get away from the crazy lady!
I can't wait for the next chapter as this one was amazing!
Keep up the awesome work!
12Treelow955Whoah, this was epic!
I hope they get away from the crazy lady!
I can't wait for the next chapter as this one was amazing!
Keep up the awesome work!
4/2 c1 Ayame Hyuuga28
I really really like this story! D
please update more!
I like it when Mai keeping a secret to Naru ,it looks like that she knows something
that Naru doesn't know ..
I really really like this story! D
please update more!
I like it when Mai keeping a secret to Naru ,it looks like that she knows something
that Naru doesn't know ..
3/4 c9 JingleBelleRock
That was great! Please continue updating! (just a little bit quicker than last time, k?)
That was great! Please continue updating! (just a little bit quicker than last time, k?)
3/3 c9 12Treelow955
Wow, John laughed at someone!
This was great, I loved it!
Keep it up, I can't wait for more!
12Treelow955Wow, John laughed at someone!
This was great, I loved it!
Keep it up, I can't wait for more!
7/15/2012 c8 8Chrysanthia-Sunshine
uuh ... so cliffy ... but still, nice chapter
update soon please :)
8Chrysanthia-Sunshineuuh ... so cliffy ... but still, nice chapter
update soon please :)
7/13/2012 c8 12Treelow955
Wow! Awesome chapter!
I love the last part where she comes to the realization she loves him!
First she can't believe it, then she doesn't want to admit she's fallen for a jerk and finally she just accepts the inevitable!
Really brilliant chapter! Update soon!
12Treelow955Wow! Awesome chapter!
I love the last part where she comes to the realization she loves him!
First she can't believe it, then she doesn't want to admit she's fallen for a jerk and finally she just accepts the inevitable!
Really brilliant chapter! Update soon!
5/31/2012 c7 Treelow955
Wow! Mystery! I hope she does find him! That would be great!
I wanna find out what happens next!
Update soon! Pretty please! It's so good! I can't wait!
Wow! Mystery! I hope she does find him! That would be great!
I wanna find out what happens next!
Update soon! Pretty please! It's so good! I can't wait!
5/31/2012 c6 Treelow955
This was great again!
No worries about the skipping stuff, that bit went on forever anyway!
I like how well timed her fainting was, that's classic!
I can't wait to find out where this is going!
You're doing a great job! Keep it up!
This was great again!
No worries about the skipping stuff, that bit went on forever anyway!
I like how well timed her fainting was, that's classic!
I can't wait to find out where this is going!
You're doing a great job! Keep it up!
5/31/2012 c5 Treelow955
Ooh, intrigue! I can pretty much guess what they'll say next, I read the last manga. I'm guessing you did too and decided to tweak the parts that needed it!
Gene dying! Huh! Nuts to that!
I say he lives! Okay, maybe not in my current fic (Although, technically yes!), maybe in the future though, right?
Keep going, this is great!
Ooh, intrigue! I can pretty much guess what they'll say next, I read the last manga. I'm guessing you did too and decided to tweak the parts that needed it!
Gene dying! Huh! Nuts to that!
I say he lives! Okay, maybe not in my current fic (Although, technically yes!), maybe in the future though, right?
Keep going, this is great!
5/31/2012 c4 Treelow955
OMG! I have to read on! That ending was awesome!
I am totally paying attention now! Seriously, this is great!
OMG! I have to read on! That ending was awesome!
I am totally paying attention now! Seriously, this is great!
5/31/2012 c3 Treelow955
Wow! This is getting better and better! Another cliffhanger, cool!
When Naru started crying I just wanted to hug him! Also the stuff with the others was funny and so like them!
Keep going!
Wow! This is getting better and better! Another cliffhanger, cool!
When Naru started crying I just wanted to hug him! Also the stuff with the others was funny and so like them!
Keep going!
5/31/2012 c2 Treelow955
Ooh, a slight cliffhanger! Like it!
This was quite a good chapter! I have to admit I'm hooked!
Ooh, a slight cliffhanger! Like it!
This was quite a good chapter! I have to admit I'm hooked!
5/31/2012 c1 Treelow955
Hiya! I thought I'd review yours since you review mine!
Okay, here's what I think! Most of your grammatical errors stem from using the wrong tense. This chapter, although quite short, is written well and the plot looks good, I want to continue reading!
So far, although I've only read the first chapter, I find this story intriguing! Keep up the good work!
Hiya! I thought I'd review yours since you review mine!
Okay, here's what I think! Most of your grammatical errors stem from using the wrong tense. This chapter, although quite short, is written well and the plot looks good, I want to continue reading!
So far, although I've only read the first chapter, I find this story intriguing! Keep up the good work!