for When loved ones leave1/27/2012 c17 Jill
I just found this story and I am really enjoying it. I am so glad they are finally together.
I just found this story and I am really enjoying it. I am so glad they are finally together.
1/26/2012 c17 sweetkid45
So jane and maura are moving in together that's good I hope.the story is getting better with each chapter.I cann't wait for the next one.great chapter,nice job
So jane and maura are moving in together that's good I hope.the story is getting better with each chapter.I cann't wait for the next one.great chapter,nice job
1/21/2012 c16 J
Angela at the end was a nice touch... An oh shit moment. I always laugh at stories where she catches Jane red handed (so to speak). However, it made sense since I would picture Jane screaming loud enough to wake the dead. Good job so far. Like the story very much. Keep it up!
Angela at the end was a nice touch... An oh shit moment. I always laugh at stories where she catches Jane red handed (so to speak). However, it made sense since I would picture Jane screaming loud enough to wake the dead. Good job so far. Like the story very much. Keep it up!
1/20/2012 c16 sweetkid45
just why did you have angela come at that time,they where I'm guessing in maura's room.the story is getting better.
just why did you have angela come at that time,they where I'm guessing in maura's room.the story is getting better.
1/15/2012 c15 sweetkid45
it's sex time I hope it's blow by blow it's fun to them like that nkce chapter though
it's sex time I hope it's blow by blow it's fun to them like that nkce chapter though
1/15/2012 c15 Rachel
Please say you continue this scene? Please! Update soon!
Please say you continue this scene? Please! Update soon!
1/15/2012 c15 
1CrimeShowLoverr
Stop it before the smutty part? Why?
Promise to keep it up where you left it!
1CrimeShowLoverrStop it before the smutty part? Why?
Promise to keep it up where you left it!
1/15/2012 c15 10rebelliousflower89
worst spot to stop at! update soon where it left off? please? I'm curious. :D
10rebelliousflower89worst spot to stop at! update soon where it left off? please? I'm curious. :D