for My Little Kitsune3/18 c15 
2Rinnala
hmm did you get lost on the road of life and forgot to redo the rest of the existing chapters?
I really wan't to know what happens after this chapter, so if you decide, that the next chapter don't need a redo then meybe you could coontinue instead?
2Rinnalahmm did you get lost on the road of life and forgot to redo the rest of the existing chapters?
I really wan't to know what happens after this chapter, so if you decide, that the next chapter don't need a redo then meybe you could coontinue instead?
12/28/2012 c15 kc
Just re-read this story. It seemed more complex then the first time I read it. I can see where you expanded some of the parts (I think). I would like to see you post new chapters. Hopefully your depression is getting better ... I know how sucky it can be.
Just re-read this story. It seemed more complex then the first time I read it. I can see where you expanded some of the parts (I think). I would like to see you post new chapters. Hopefully your depression is getting better ... I know how sucky it can be.
6/21/2012 c8 myself
This is definitely my 2nd favorite Naruto story! I actually like the OC, and look forward to your finished revision. Voting is probably over by now, but my suggestion is GaiXCrystal (Kakashi is a flake) and Naruto X competant kunoichi -which, to my knowledge, is maybe less than five in his immediate age group.
This is definitely my 2nd favorite Naruto story! I actually like the OC, and look forward to your finished revision. Voting is probably over by now, but my suggestion is GaiXCrystal (Kakashi is a flake) and Naruto X competant kunoichi -which, to my knowledge, is maybe less than five in his immediate age group.
5/31/2012 c16 shapeshifter1
wow I love your story please come out with another chapter soon I've been waiting for like ever for the next chapter. Please hurry!
wow I love your story please come out with another chapter soon I've been waiting for like ever for the next chapter. Please hurry!
5/19/2012 c16 shapeshifter1
I really like this story and I have been waiting for a looooong time for you to make another chapter. Please hurry I am getting impatient.
I really like this story and I have been waiting for a looooong time for you to make another chapter. Please hurry I am getting impatient.
5/19/2012 c16 shapeshifter1
I really like this story and I have been waiting for a looooong time for you to make another chapter. Please hurry I am getting impatient.
I really like this story and I have been waiting for a looooong time for you to make another chapter. Please hurry I am getting impatient.
5/1/2012 c16 mangagirl64
Love the story. I'm sad that its on hold and I won't see any further interaction between Gai and Crystal and Naruto and Crystal for a while.
Love the story. I'm sad that its on hold and I won't see any further interaction between Gai and Crystal and Naruto and Crystal for a while.
4/16/2012 c4 10Mystic 777
I rather enjoyed this story when I stumbled upon it a month ago. I'm enjoying the added details in the rewrites as well. The only problem is some of your Japanese is wrong. Son is "musko", "sono" is kind of like a directional "that" as in "that thing in your hands". Do you have a Japanese language beta/dictionary? That would probably help. Sorry if this comes off preachy, I just want to help. ^_^
10Mystic 777I rather enjoyed this story when I stumbled upon it a month ago. I'm enjoying the added details in the rewrites as well. The only problem is some of your Japanese is wrong. Son is "musko", "sono" is kind of like a directional "that" as in "that thing in your hands". Do you have a Japanese language beta/dictionary? That would probably help. Sorry if this comes off preachy, I just want to help. ^_^
4/1/2012 c16 5CrescentMelody
I'm curious; is Raven Itachi? anyway, It's really does not matter to me who she ends up with as long as this fic remains a monogamy. Although, at the moment, I'm voting for Raven.
As for Naruto pairing, I'm leaning towards Naru/Haku or Naru/Sasuke.
5CrescentMelodyI'm curious; is Raven Itachi? anyway, It's really does not matter to me who she ends up with as long as this fic remains a monogamy. Although, at the moment, I'm voting for Raven.
As for Naruto pairing, I'm leaning towards Naru/Haku or Naru/Sasuke.