for Memories of the past, Problems of the future3/24 c9 Anonymous
PLS CONTINUE THIS CHAPTER PLS I'M BEGGING YOU THIS STORY IS SO GOOD
PLS CONTINUE THIS CHAPTER PLS I'M BEGGING YOU THIS STORY IS SO GOOD
11/19/2012 c9 timothy monsibais
Nice story. Keep writing please if u don't I don't now what I'll read
Nice story. Keep writing please if u don't I don't now what I'll read
11/17/2012 c9 
3Fellowship of Avengers
They are all fools to think that she would do something like that. :(
3Fellowship of AvengersThey are all fools to think that she would do something like that. :(
11/17/2012 c3 Guest
Your story is good. As one of this website's purpose is to improve writing, I have to say that some of your sentences are
run-ons. These can be corrected
with a complex sentence, FANBOYS, semi-colon, or turning it into simple sentences.
Your story is good. As one of this website's purpose is to improve writing, I have to say that some of your sentences are
run-ons. These can be corrected
with a complex sentence, FANBOYS, semi-colon, or turning it into simple sentences.
3/2/2012 c7 2ILoveReadingAndWriting
O.O NOOOOO! I don't want her to die! Ugh, those Berkians are asking for it! How could they think such a thing! Whoever set her up is gonna get it! RAWR! FEAR MY VIKING WRATH!
Your loyal fan,
~Mari
2ILoveReadingAndWritingO.O NOOOOO! I don't want her to die! Ugh, those Berkians are asking for it! How could they think such a thing! Whoever set her up is gonna get it! RAWR! FEAR MY VIKING WRATH!
Your loyal fan,
~Mari
3/2/2012 c7 3Fellowship of Avengers
It's sad that he didn't believe her. Oh dear. That's a nasty wound. Uh-oh.
3Fellowship of AvengersIt's sad that he didn't believe her. Oh dear. That's a nasty wound. Uh-oh.
2/26/2012 c6 schoolgirl
nooo, it was just getting good!
did she play a part in the defeat of the queen like the movie? or more in the book?
nooo, it was just getting good!
did she play a part in the defeat of the queen like the movie? or more in the book?
2/26/2012 c5 schoolgirl
yes!
good luck rowanne!
I bet it was astrid that did it? or perhaps another oc?
yes!
good luck rowanne!
I bet it was astrid that did it? or perhaps another oc?
2/12/2012 c6 Bookworm181
Cool story...update soon? :)
Cool story...update soon? :)
2/11/2012 c6 Fellowship of Avengers
W-wow. Oh dear. How sad! Oh no!
COOKIES! X3 *glomps you* Arigato!
W-wow. Oh dear. How sad! Oh no!
COOKIES! X3 *glomps you* Arigato!
2/11/2012 c6 17The Red Dove
Yay! I love cookies AND updates!
This is the best day of my life...sniff.
Please update again soon!
17The Red DoveYay! I love cookies AND updates!
This is the best day of my life...sniff.
Please update again soon!