for Shizuru Oneesama7/19/2012 c4 
3CrimsonGaze
An awsome fic, really enjoyed thoroughly!
I thought it was placed really nicely with the main story and you grasped each character very well!
The pace of the story was good and your use of words in many variety was stunning!
All in all, I really enjoyed the read, going to have to read your other stories as well!
Thank you, definitely adding this to favorites!
3CrimsonGazeAn awsome fic, really enjoyed thoroughly!
I thought it was placed really nicely with the main story and you grasped each character very well!
The pace of the story was good and your use of words in many variety was stunning!
All in all, I really enjoyed the read, going to have to read your other stories as well!
Thank you, definitely adding this to favorites!
5/25/2012 c1 2JanJan19
I got confused at the last part of chapter 1.
Because, I don't think Natsuki used the word, "Ara"
That is only used by Shizuru. When you mentioned that ara part, I thought it was Shizuru who overheard their conversation o.o
2JanJan19I got confused at the last part of chapter 1.
Because, I don't think Natsuki used the word, "Ara"
That is only used by Shizuru. When you mentioned that ara part, I thought it was Shizuru who overheard their conversation o.o
4/25/2012 c4 6Akira Sasaki
Hahaha, that was a wonderful story.
Creative and cute!
But I have to point out that I was slightly confused after Shizuru returned from her Haruka flashback to the "soft creamy skin" of Natsuki's. I thought for a second she was talking about Haruka! Hahaha.
Anyway, very cute. Very fun to read!
Was glad Tomoe didn't have any psycho moments... (phew!)
But that hickey... heheheheh!
Thanks!
6Akira SasakiHahaha, that was a wonderful story.
Creative and cute!
But I have to point out that I was slightly confused after Shizuru returned from her Haruka flashback to the "soft creamy skin" of Natsuki's. I thought for a second she was talking about Haruka! Hahaha.
Anyway, very cute. Very fun to read!
Was glad Tomoe didn't have any psycho moments... (phew!)
But that hickey... heheheheh!
Thanks!
2/28/2012 c4 turkey bacon
i loved it the ending was very funny u try to add more humor if possible.
i loved it the ending was very funny u try to add more humor if possible.
12/30/2011 c4 reader
lol! i like the ending. though the story was short, it still made me smile. ;)
lol! i like the ending. though the story was short, it still made me smile. ;)
12/28/2011 c4 bubble.duckie
That is just nice. Dunno if I've mentioned it in my previous reviews but i just love Otome fics. This one is already added to my favorites collection! Woohoo! The hot lemon is an added bonus!
That is just nice. Dunno if I've mentioned it in my previous reviews but i just love Otome fics. This one is already added to my favorites collection! Woohoo! The hot lemon is an added bonus!
12/26/2011 c2 bubble.duckie
Wheee! Shizuru making the moves already. How exciting! Please remove Minami's character from this ad i seriously hate her. Yay!
Wheee! Shizuru making the moves already. How exciting! Please remove Minami's character from this ad i seriously hate her. Yay!
12/26/2011 c4 sephign
okay...that was hilarious hahaha! Wish I can read more of Tomoe's reaction towards it though. Anyway, good job! I did enjoyed it!
okay...that was hilarious hahaha! Wish I can read more of Tomoe's reaction towards it though. Anyway, good job! I did enjoyed it!