for Lyre of Gold8/6/2012 c6 
33BiblioMatsuri
So, Danny's actually speaking in some weird ghost language whenever he's fighting ghosts? That's creepy.
33BiblioMatsuriSo, Danny's actually speaking in some weird ghost language whenever he's fighting ghosts? That's creepy.
1/28/2012 c6 1Lady GryphonInia
Who knew that music would be the downfall of Danny's secret lol? Cool idea. Nice story! And a nice twist with the Ghost language!
1Lady GryphonIniaWho knew that music would be the downfall of Danny's secret lol? Cool idea. Nice story! And a nice twist with the Ghost language!
1/26/2012 c6 49JuneLuxray2
D'aww, so sweet.
One thing:
"You wanted to know how I knew you're secret."
That should be your, not you're.
49JuneLuxray2D'aww, so sweet.
One thing:
"You wanted to know how I knew you're secret."
That should be your, not you're.
1/26/2012 c6 18VampireFrootloopsRule
aaaw! cute little father/son bonding moment there! nicely done. i would like a little bit more explanation of the language thing. how does that work exactly?
18VampireFrootloopsRuleaaaw! cute little father/son bonding moment there! nicely done. i would like a little bit more explanation of the language thing. how does that work exactly?
1/26/2012 c6 18Sincerely The Sign Painter
Oh,
That's how Jack knew!
good bonding chapter.
Is that the last chapter?
Sincerely The Sign Painter
18Sincerely The Sign PainterOh,
That's how Jack knew!
good bonding chapter.
Is that the last chapter?
Sincerely The Sign Painter
1/26/2012 c6 47sapphireswimming
Ah, interesting! I had never thought about the ghosts speaking in another language (except for Wulf's Esperanto which NO ONE understands), but I guess without that, the ghost gabber becomes even more useless than it already was to begin with! XD
I was a little surprised that Danny answered with the 'yes, sir's. He was never quite that respectful in the show... although I guess with his secret revealed, he would want to make sure he isn't stepping out of line.
But his Dad is so great. :3 I'm glad you made him a little less bumbling here.
Sapphireswimming
47sapphireswimmingAh, interesting! I had never thought about the ghosts speaking in another language (except for Wulf's Esperanto which NO ONE understands), but I guess without that, the ghost gabber becomes even more useless than it already was to begin with! XD
I was a little surprised that Danny answered with the 'yes, sir's. He was never quite that respectful in the show... although I guess with his secret revealed, he would want to make sure he isn't stepping out of line.
But his Dad is so great. :3 I'm glad you made him a little less bumbling here.
Sapphireswimming
1/14/2012 c5 18VampireFrootloopsRule
Haha. Jack ws funny! A little ooc, but still good. E would be the one to find ot wouldnt he? Horray for more!
18VampireFrootloopsRuleHaha. Jack ws funny! A little ooc, but still good. E would be the one to find ot wouldnt he? Horray for more!
1/14/2012 c5 18Sincerely The Sign Painter
Jack new the Danny's sedret?
Wow wasn't expecting that.
You should have them use the lyre on Vlad.
Are the Fenton's going to adopt the ghost cat?
This was a good chapter
It's sad that the next chatper is the last :(
Sincerely The Sign Painter
18Sincerely The Sign PainterJack new the Danny's sedret?
Wow wasn't expecting that.
You should have them use the lyre on Vlad.
Are the Fenton's going to adopt the ghost cat?
This was a good chapter
It's sad that the next chatper is the last :(
Sincerely The Sign Painter