for The Rumor4/1 c8 My name is BK-201
thanks for your genius advice, but i love this story! the small talk between natsu and xellos was brilliant!
"You have purple hair."
"Yes, I do. You have pink hair."
LMAO!
thanks for your genius advice, but i love this story! the small talk between natsu and xellos was brilliant!
"You have purple hair."
"Yes, I do. You have pink hair."
LMAO!
8/13/2012 c8 
2SpartanCommander
Oh boy Natsu is seriously underestimating his opponents.
Although I will say that Lina's met weirder than someone who can eat a fire ball.
I am surprised that the retreated like that unless someone has something up their sleeves. I mean as far as capabilities are concerned Lina actually is vastly greater than Nastsu as he is. Lina knows a large variety of magic. Even stuff that could seriously damage Natsu. Goury has been trained since birth to fight Mazuko (also considering what Goury was hit with he's likely just as resilient or even more than Natsu is he's been practically used as a shield for powerful attacks) I am surprised that Amelia didn't jump on to the table and shout in one of her speeches to Natsu that says somethign like, "How dare you accuse us of doing evil when you yourself are a peeping Tom." Then go on for a bit about Justice and how she will smite Natsu with her richious fist's of justace. Then considering Natsu's personality he will likely jump forward and say something about how cool that speech was.
Zelgadus is the only one in the group that wouldn't just jump out and attack immediately...
Also to be honest the shear power Lina has she's likely capable of being on even terms with the Heads of the Magic guilds. Unlike some people Lina likely has the most wide spaced knowlege of magics and has learned some very rare stuff. I bet eventually Lina would figure out what spells are being used and be able to mimic them. in the novels it was shown she was capable of memorizing spells by hearing them clearly once. So if someone uses a spell that Lina can hear she can also use the same spell against her opponent. (found that info on what she can do from a forum when they quoted some pages from a Slayers novel)
2SpartanCommanderOh boy Natsu is seriously underestimating his opponents.
Although I will say that Lina's met weirder than someone who can eat a fire ball.
I am surprised that the retreated like that unless someone has something up their sleeves. I mean as far as capabilities are concerned Lina actually is vastly greater than Nastsu as he is. Lina knows a large variety of magic. Even stuff that could seriously damage Natsu. Goury has been trained since birth to fight Mazuko (also considering what Goury was hit with he's likely just as resilient or even more than Natsu is he's been practically used as a shield for powerful attacks) I am surprised that Amelia didn't jump on to the table and shout in one of her speeches to Natsu that says somethign like, "How dare you accuse us of doing evil when you yourself are a peeping Tom." Then go on for a bit about Justice and how she will smite Natsu with her richious fist's of justace. Then considering Natsu's personality he will likely jump forward and say something about how cool that speech was.
Zelgadus is the only one in the group that wouldn't just jump out and attack immediately...
Also to be honest the shear power Lina has she's likely capable of being on even terms with the Heads of the Magic guilds. Unlike some people Lina likely has the most wide spaced knowlege of magics and has learned some very rare stuff. I bet eventually Lina would figure out what spells are being used and be able to mimic them. in the novels it was shown she was capable of memorizing spells by hearing them clearly once. So if someone uses a spell that Lina can hear she can also use the same spell against her opponent. (found that info on what she can do from a forum when they quoted some pages from a Slayers novel)
5/29/2012 c7 SpartanCommander
So he's going to charge Lina...boy is he in for a surprise. Then again this is natsu he's not known for being smart. I think he may start thinking he needs a new plan of attack after he blow's up for the 5th or 10th time. Unless your extreamly powerful with a ton of magical knowlege in your head or at least something or you have a high resistance to magic a frontal attack against Lina isn't as effective as you might think.
I will say it's surprising that most mages there don't seem to be that bright and seem to know certain spells that go alone with what elements their good at. Unlike lina or mages where she comes from Mages in those guilds don't seem to learn much about other peoples magics or try to see if they can expand their powers using research materials. So far it seem's that having more than 1 type of magic is unheard of. Possibly impossible in their minds. (Not to mention to them healing magic is a lost form of magic picture their surprise that their is an entire Kingdom that just about everyone who lives there knows that spell and its one of the most used of spells where Lina comes from) In fact where Lina comes from I wouldn't be surprised that lost spells were common use.
Also that nut that tried to capture free and control that one Demon. It occured to me that if they found out Zellos they would try to enslave him...(not the smartest move I dought you could and then Zellos just may kill them or ruin a good chunk of their plans for even trying to enslave him)
So he's going to charge Lina...boy is he in for a surprise. Then again this is natsu he's not known for being smart. I think he may start thinking he needs a new plan of attack after he blow's up for the 5th or 10th time. Unless your extreamly powerful with a ton of magical knowlege in your head or at least something or you have a high resistance to magic a frontal attack against Lina isn't as effective as you might think.
I will say it's surprising that most mages there don't seem to be that bright and seem to know certain spells that go alone with what elements their good at. Unlike lina or mages where she comes from Mages in those guilds don't seem to learn much about other peoples magics or try to see if they can expand their powers using research materials. So far it seem's that having more than 1 type of magic is unheard of. Possibly impossible in their minds. (Not to mention to them healing magic is a lost form of magic picture their surprise that their is an entire Kingdom that just about everyone who lives there knows that spell and its one of the most used of spells where Lina comes from) In fact where Lina comes from I wouldn't be surprised that lost spells were common use.
Also that nut that tried to capture free and control that one Demon. It occured to me that if they found out Zellos they would try to enslave him...(not the smartest move I dought you could and then Zellos just may kill them or ruin a good chunk of their plans for even trying to enslave him)
3/16/2012 c6 Jiaying101
okay so i;m ntro signed in. but anyway.. THIS IS AN AWESOME STORY! keep up the good work! As soon as she was like i hear water (in 5) i was like oh man... oh course they were both going there!
the dude with the purple hair is xellos isn't it! YEAH I LOVE XELLOS!
"you have perple hair? Well you have pink hair!"
XD! i Burst our laughing!
REALLY AWESOME JOB! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!
okay so i;m ntro signed in. but anyway.. THIS IS AN AWESOME STORY! keep up the good work! As soon as she was like i hear water (in 5) i was like oh man... oh course they were both going there!
the dude with the purple hair is xellos isn't it! YEAH I LOVE XELLOS!
"you have perple hair? Well you have pink hair!"
XD! i Burst our laughing!
REALLY AWESOME JOB! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!
3/16/2012 c6 2SpartanCommander
Good chapter but you could start making them longer. Try to make some of the pharagraph's a little more descriptive. Like why is everyone seperated, Just how come Lina attacked some pink hair. Did she think it was a bandit?
You could play some of these trick's to make it funnier though.
I don't think Xellos would appreciate being called a celestial spirit. From what I know he's much more powerful than they are.
I also bet that eventually Xellos will start provoking Erza and everyone in fairy tail will show an expression of terror and shock that this guy whoever he is is actually provoking Erza.
Anyway the only problem you have in these chapters is length and explinations on what's going on. You maybe able to get some other things out and funny moments by showing the readers what's going on with everyone's minds better. Like Lina's and why she attacked the pink hair.
That's all for now some more may occur to me later.
2SpartanCommanderGood chapter but you could start making them longer. Try to make some of the pharagraph's a little more descriptive. Like why is everyone seperated, Just how come Lina attacked some pink hair. Did she think it was a bandit?
You could play some of these trick's to make it funnier though.
I don't think Xellos would appreciate being called a celestial spirit. From what I know he's much more powerful than they are.
I also bet that eventually Xellos will start provoking Erza and everyone in fairy tail will show an expression of terror and shock that this guy whoever he is is actually provoking Erza.
Anyway the only problem you have in these chapters is length and explinations on what's going on. You maybe able to get some other things out and funny moments by showing the readers what's going on with everyone's minds better. Like Lina's and why she attacked the pink hair.
That's all for now some more may occur to me later.
3/2/2012 c3 2SpartanCommander
You know looking at the dragon slaying magic that one guy can do it may not work on Dragon slave or at least as well on fire magic powered by Mazoko (or monsters). It's very different to the kind of magical power their ruse to. At the very least a Dragon Slave would likely make him very sick.
I also bet those spirit's the girl summons may get scared if they spot Zellos. I mean he's one of the most powerful Mazuko or monster's on this planet next Sabronigdo's subordinates. That guy will never explain why he's here he would only say it's a secret and manipulate everyone to do his dirty work for him.
It's very unlikely any one in that one country could even scratch Zellos. Luucy may think Zellos is a very powerful Wizard since he can teleport so easily like that with out even using words and likely even stopping attack's with apparently no effort. (Zellos would only interfear if he think's Lina or such couldn't survive the insadent) He's annoying powerful and very unhelpful.
It's unlikely Lina and the group would say right out Zellos is a monster likely because it could cause problems for them.
I also think it would be entertaining if eventually some of the fairy tail group goes to Lina's corner to try to open a branch of the guild there and imagine what happens when they meet Prince philionell. Likely what everyone else did when they saw him their dream's of what a prince is shattered once they see him.
I will also say that I dought Lina, Zelgadus, Goury, or Amelia would ever let themselves get tarooed to join a mages guild since that mean's your a permint member this group isn't the type to join forces with anyone on a perminant bassis especially since most guilds or organizations they deal with has some habbits of double crossing them or getting arrested or even blown up.
I wonder why Mazuko haven't opperated in this country until now.
Also you may want to look in the Slayer's manga in Mangafox slayers_suiriyuuou_no_kishi you can get a good look at some of the Deep Sea Dolpin's subordinates. (Zellow isn't part of Deap Sea Dolpin's forces) though but that one may send one troops if it interest's him.
2SpartanCommanderYou know looking at the dragon slaying magic that one guy can do it may not work on Dragon slave or at least as well on fire magic powered by Mazoko (or monsters). It's very different to the kind of magical power their ruse to. At the very least a Dragon Slave would likely make him very sick.
I also bet those spirit's the girl summons may get scared if they spot Zellos. I mean he's one of the most powerful Mazuko or monster's on this planet next Sabronigdo's subordinates. That guy will never explain why he's here he would only say it's a secret and manipulate everyone to do his dirty work for him.
It's very unlikely any one in that one country could even scratch Zellos. Luucy may think Zellos is a very powerful Wizard since he can teleport so easily like that with out even using words and likely even stopping attack's with apparently no effort. (Zellos would only interfear if he think's Lina or such couldn't survive the insadent) He's annoying powerful and very unhelpful.
It's unlikely Lina and the group would say right out Zellos is a monster likely because it could cause problems for them.
I also think it would be entertaining if eventually some of the fairy tail group goes to Lina's corner to try to open a branch of the guild there and imagine what happens when they meet Prince philionell. Likely what everyone else did when they saw him their dream's of what a prince is shattered once they see him.
I will also say that I dought Lina, Zelgadus, Goury, or Amelia would ever let themselves get tarooed to join a mages guild since that mean's your a permint member this group isn't the type to join forces with anyone on a perminant bassis especially since most guilds or organizations they deal with has some habbits of double crossing them or getting arrested or even blown up.
I wonder why Mazuko haven't opperated in this country until now.
Also you may want to look in the Slayer's manga in Mangafox slayers_suiriyuuou_no_kishi you can get a good look at some of the Deep Sea Dolpin's subordinates. (Zellow isn't part of Deap Sea Dolpin's forces) though but that one may send one troops if it interest's him.
3/2/2012 c1 SpartanCommander
You know what would be also funny if they met a bandit that recognized lina and he shout's, "L-L-Lina Invers! The Bandit Killer, Dragon spooker, the Mortal enemy of all the lives! What are you doing here I eacaped the bandit group you desoroyed took a ship and crashed it here. I thought I was saft from you... No!"
Then he turn's to the others in the camp and shout's, "Everyone beg for mercy it's all we can do because were doomed dead there will be nothing left of us but ash." Then he get's on his hands and knees and grovles at Lina for a quick death.
Face it she has that bad a reputation.
You know what would be also funny if they met a bandit that recognized lina and he shout's, "L-L-Lina Invers! The Bandit Killer, Dragon spooker, the Mortal enemy of all the lives! What are you doing here I eacaped the bandit group you desoroyed took a ship and crashed it here. I thought I was saft from you... No!"
Then he turn's to the others in the camp and shout's, "Everyone beg for mercy it's all we can do because were doomed dead there will be nothing left of us but ash." Then he get's on his hands and knees and grovles at Lina for a quick death.
Face it she has that bad a reputation.
3/2/2012 c4 SpartanCommander
You know knowing how Lina does things no guildw would ever want her as a member she would be a liability with all the damage she would do.
But it won't take them long before Lina get's money. She isn't called the Bandic Killer or Dragon spooker for nothing. She will likely look seek out the roughest toughest bandit camp she can find blast them with a few high level spells and collect the treasure to sell.
It is likely that any dragon's here will likely know Lina's reputation and run away if Lina tells someone in it's preasance that she's Lina Inverse.
You know knowing how Lina does things no guildw would ever want her as a member she would be a liability with all the damage she would do.
But it won't take them long before Lina get's money. She isn't called the Bandic Killer or Dragon spooker for nothing. She will likely look seek out the roughest toughest bandit camp she can find blast them with a few high level spells and collect the treasure to sell.
It is likely that any dragon's here will likely know Lina's reputation and run away if Lina tells someone in it's preasance that she's Lina Inverse.
3/1/2012 c5 SpartanCommander
This will be interesting especially since Lina doesn't have any interest in restraint. Her spell do alot and I mean alot of damage and if she get's ticked off enough she'll use Dragon Slave on anyone even if it's a child.
Dragon Slave may not be her most powerful but other than Ragna blade the most powerful at least Lina know's not to use it.
I bet that those guy's have no idea just what the Slayer team could do. They may not look it but each one of them is very formidable. And the preastiss who acts so gentle and talk's so much about justice. She can fight like a Professional wrestler and merge magic with those moves.
Zelgadus would be also interesting since his skin is stone. Hard to do any damage to him and he is a good swordsman and very skilled in shimanic magic.
Goury...well he's not very smart but he's amazing in a fight not to mention he's been trained to fight Mazoku or monsters since he was a child. He's the best swordsman out of the entire team.
Can't wait to see what happens.
Although I know the group doesn't have any local currancy but knowing Lina she likely has a few bags of gold only she's to stingy to spend it. if she drops them the entire group will likely give her an uncomfortable stair.
This will be interesting especially since Lina doesn't have any interest in restraint. Her spell do alot and I mean alot of damage and if she get's ticked off enough she'll use Dragon Slave on anyone even if it's a child.
Dragon Slave may not be her most powerful but other than Ragna blade the most powerful at least Lina know's not to use it.
I bet that those guy's have no idea just what the Slayer team could do. They may not look it but each one of them is very formidable. And the preastiss who acts so gentle and talk's so much about justice. She can fight like a Professional wrestler and merge magic with those moves.
Zelgadus would be also interesting since his skin is stone. Hard to do any damage to him and he is a good swordsman and very skilled in shimanic magic.
Goury...well he's not very smart but he's amazing in a fight not to mention he's been trained to fight Mazoku or monsters since he was a child. He's the best swordsman out of the entire team.
Can't wait to see what happens.
Although I know the group doesn't have any local currancy but knowing Lina she likely has a few bags of gold only she's to stingy to spend it. if she drops them the entire group will likely give her an uncomfortable stair.
2/27/2012 c5 1dopplerdee
Intresting If lina joins fairy tail... the colateral dammage would be obsered
1dopplerdeeIntresting If lina joins fairy tail... the colateral dammage would be obsered
2/15/2012 c4 Meteor Gin
OHMYGOSH!OHMYGOSH!OHMYGOSH! That-was-AWSOME!
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OHMYGOSH!OHMYGOSH!OHMYGOSH! That-was-AWSOME!
UPDATESOON!UPDATESOON!UPDATESOON!UPDATESOON!
Please~!