for Lonely Is the Night5/17 c13 SPN Mum
Well, that was pretty stupid behavior for Lynn! After all of the stuff going on, especially with her saying she thought she saw her deceased mother, she just disappears without contacting anyone? O.o Pretty dumb. She really shouldn't have been surprised that they came looking for her. As to what Maria was telling Lynn, it's only useful a little bit. It doesn't appear that she knows very much. I think they are going to have a lot of trouble finding out what came through.
Well, that was pretty stupid behavior for Lynn! After all of the stuff going on, especially with her saying she thought she saw her deceased mother, she just disappears without contacting anyone? O.o Pretty dumb. She really shouldn't have been surprised that they came looking for her. As to what Maria was telling Lynn, it's only useful a little bit. It doesn't appear that she knows very much. I think they are going to have a lot of trouble finding out what came through.
5/16 c13 musiciansnerd
I love logging on - thinking that I'd just see who updated - and then commence the freaking out when I see you updated. And then reading through the whole thing. Twice.
I adore this story. It's one of the few Supernatural stories that I follow on here, and I love it so much. It's definitely one of my top favorite fanfictions ever. So yeah.
Thanks for this.
I love logging on - thinking that I'd just see who updated - and then commence the freaking out when I see you updated. And then reading through the whole thing. Twice.
I adore this story. It's one of the few Supernatural stories that I follow on here, and I love it so much. It's definitely one of my top favorite fanfictions ever. So yeah.
Thanks for this.
5/16 c13 SwAlLoWiNg DaNtE
As always you do the work of supernatural justice. Steve reminds me of my brother. An annoying little smart aleck. The relationship of Dean and Jayne still gets to me. Can't wait for more.
As always you do the work of supernatural justice. Steve reminds me of my brother. An annoying little smart aleck. The relationship of Dean and Jayne still gets to me. Can't wait for more.
5/16 c13 WinchesterSalvatoreLover
GREAT CHAPTER! It was really interesting digging through Lynn's mom of the family. Maria seems super loco though. As for Dean and Jayne's relationship...it seems like Deans moving fast but Jayne wants to take it slow. (Is Dean gonna tell Jayne he loves her soon! I wanna know how she reacts especially since Jayne told him she loved him but she thought he was dead, but he heard when he was a spirit or whatever) anyways also loved Sam and how he was such a nerd in this chapter and kept trying to defend himself. Loved the awkwardness with everyone too. UPDATE SOON PRETTY PLEASE!
GREAT CHAPTER! It was really interesting digging through Lynn's mom of the family. Maria seems super loco though. As for Dean and Jayne's relationship...it seems like Deans moving fast but Jayne wants to take it slow. (Is Dean gonna tell Jayne he loves her soon! I wanna know how she reacts especially since Jayne told him she loved him but she thought he was dead, but he heard when he was a spirit or whatever) anyways also loved Sam and how he was such a nerd in this chapter and kept trying to defend himself. Loved the awkwardness with everyone too. UPDATE SOON PRETTY PLEASE!
5/16 c13 
4Spelllesswonder29
ugh! I wasn't paying attention to the scroll bar on the side because I was so engrossed and before I knew it I was at the bottom and severely disappointed that there wasn't more to read. hurry with the next one! Love it!
4Spelllesswonder29ugh! I wasn't paying attention to the scroll bar on the side because I was so engrossed and before I knew it I was at the bottom and severely disappointed that there wasn't more to read. hurry with the next one! Love it!
5/16 c13 ColtFan165
Awesome update, as usual - but evil, evil cliffhanger! Am hanging out for chapter fourteen now, I really want to know what the hell is going on with Lynn's family and her dead mom. And loved the Jayne/Dean stuff like always, those two are awesome. Like always I can't wait for the next update (and I think that the length of your chapters more than makes up for the pauses between updates, they're so long, it's really great).
Awesome update, as usual - but evil, evil cliffhanger! Am hanging out for chapter fourteen now, I really want to know what the hell is going on with Lynn's family and her dead mom. And loved the Jayne/Dean stuff like always, those two are awesome. Like always I can't wait for the next update (and I think that the length of your chapters more than makes up for the pauses between updates, they're so long, it's really great).
5/15 c13 miranmary
i must admit i jumped a little when i saw this. yes i had a little fangirl moment but it is completely acceptable cause i missed Jayne and Dean sooooo much! this story is just too perfect! please dont ever give up!
i must admit i jumped a little when i saw this. yes i had a little fangirl moment but it is completely acceptable cause i missed Jayne and Dean sooooo much! this story is just too perfect! please dont ever give up!
5/15 c13 1AshlynPaige92
I'm so excited you updated.. I loved that chapter it was worth waiting for. Can't wait for the next update. Good luck writing! : )
1AshlynPaige92I'm so excited you updated.. I loved that chapter it was worth waiting for. Can't wait for the next update. Good luck writing! : )
5/10 c1 Rossingol
Let me start by saying, about 95% of the time I hate original characters. Most end up the way of the Mary Sue. But I was bored one day and found your story. So I tossed caution to the wind and gave it a go. I was late to work twice, "forgot" to do my homework once, and refused to make dinner one night all because I was so engrossed in your story. I love Jayne and Lynn. You blended them into the show in such a fun and realistic way. Now my problem is that I'm all caught up and you haven't updated in a few months. I am not above using bribes for more chapters. Keep writing. You are fantastic
Let me start by saying, about 95% of the time I hate original characters. Most end up the way of the Mary Sue. But I was bored one day and found your story. So I tossed caution to the wind and gave it a go. I was late to work twice, "forgot" to do my homework once, and refused to make dinner one night all because I was so engrossed in your story. I love Jayne and Lynn. You blended them into the show in such a fun and realistic way. Now my problem is that I'm all caught up and you haven't updated in a few months. I am not above using bribes for more chapters. Keep writing. You are fantastic
5/6 c12 Anon
Please update soon! This is my favorite story!
Please update soon! This is my favorite story!
5/5 c1 Guest
This is one of the best stories I have ever read on this site. I would really like it if an update was coming in the near future because this story is too amazing to give up on now. You are a gifted writer and I really hope to see an update from you soon
This is one of the best stories I have ever read on this site. I would really like it if an update was coming in the near future because this story is too amazing to give up on now. You are a gifted writer and I really hope to see an update from you soon
4/29 c12 Guest
PLEASE UPDATE! I LOVE YOU!
PLEASE UPDATE! I LOVE YOU!