for The One That Never Was Book One
34/27 c73 Angie's Twilight
There is still a lot unresolved between Edward and Bella. And what about Paul? I know Jacob was trying to be honest, but he's kind of gotten on my nerves though I don't know why...
There is still a lot unresolved between Edward and Bella. And what about Paul? I know Jacob was trying to be honest, but he's kind of gotten on my nerves though I don't know why...
4/27 c66 Angie's Twilight
This is a really good story so far, and you're a fantastic writer :) I really hope Bella isn't buying Edward's bullshit excuses because I'm not... I guess I have to read more to find out
This is a really good story so far, and you're a fantastic writer :) I really hope Bella isn't buying Edward's bullshit excuses because I'm not... I guess I have to read more to find out
1/18 c99 angel1215
It's so sad. Tears! And, more tears. I feel so sorry for both of them. I still say she should have talked w/him before she left. Now what happens? Can't wait to see. I hope it won't be too sad.
It's so sad. Tears! And, more tears. I feel so sorry for both of them. I still say she should have talked w/him before she left. Now what happens? Can't wait to see. I hope it won't be too sad.
1/18 c90 angel1215
"Never believe anything you hear and, only half of what you see". That's an old saying my Mom told me once. Anyway, Bella should have talked w/Edward to hear his version before she made any rash decisions. Sometimes things aren't always what they seem even though it may look really bad. And Angela putting her two cents worth in just fueled B's anger. I think E's used to being a flirt and loves the attention. That doesn't mean he's using B and doesn't care about her. I hope B doesn't regret this. Love this story.
"Never believe anything you hear and, only half of what you see". That's an old saying my Mom told me once. Anyway, Bella should have talked w/Edward to hear his version before she made any rash decisions. Sometimes things aren't always what they seem even though it may look really bad. And Angela putting her two cents worth in just fueled B's anger. I think E's used to being a flirt and loves the attention. That doesn't mean he's using B and doesn't care about her. I hope B doesn't regret this. Love this story.
1/4 c56 MsLiss
oh great not only did she not say no - she's unprotected from the manwhore - great just great
oh great not only did she not say no - she's unprotected from the manwhore - great just great
11/25/2012 c99 Kelli Rose 828
I absolutely love your writing. I just discovered your stories- how can that be?
i have to say, I adored your random tidbits about yourself. I didn't find them detracting from the story at all! Don't listen to those who complain. In my opinion, writing is truly an art that takes talent and a very, very personal thing. Just by putting it here on ffn, I have learned people assume they have every right to criticize without taking into consideration there is a person on the other end. The Internet is like that- and I believe these people to be cowards hiding behind a computer.
That said, your writing is amazing, your stories are wonderful & in my opinion, you ought to be published. Thank you for sharing your amazing talent! Off to read EPOV. Can't wait!
P.S. My random #: I loved calculus! Diff EQ was my favorite math, I actually have a math minor and became a structural engineer in my last life before kiddos. I always sucked at humanities, English & writing, unless its a technical report. Too math minded I suppose. Wish I had 1/2 your talent!
I absolutely love your writing. I just discovered your stories- how can that be?
i have to say, I adored your random tidbits about yourself. I didn't find them detracting from the story at all! Don't listen to those who complain. In my opinion, writing is truly an art that takes talent and a very, very personal thing. Just by putting it here on ffn, I have learned people assume they have every right to criticize without taking into consideration there is a person on the other end. The Internet is like that- and I believe these people to be cowards hiding behind a computer.
That said, your writing is amazing, your stories are wonderful & in my opinion, you ought to be published. Thank you for sharing your amazing talent! Off to read EPOV. Can't wait!
P.S. My random #: I loved calculus! Diff EQ was my favorite math, I actually have a math minor and became a structural engineer in my last life before kiddos. I always sucked at humanities, English & writing, unless its a technical report. Too math minded I suppose. Wish I had 1/2 your talent!