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9/19/2012 c1 2neogoki
nice set up, can become all or nothing, but there is potential
6/3/2012 c10 8Kuroui
No Uma! Damn you Negral! Now I just hate him even more! I hope they make it in time, if not one of the Ghosts might lose it.

Question, what happened to all the escaped warriors? Wouldn't they be most likely to join forces with Miria's group?

Kuroui
5/30/2012 c9 Kuroui
Well Vidia won't be slapping Heath again anytime soon XD Go Miri! Xp
The reunion though not exactly what I hoped for was much in character. It makes sense it happened the way it did so great job on that!
Karel is mysterious. Man I wanna know more about this guy! Clare's quick-temper and rashness may prove fatal in her upcoming training. I hope all goes well for her.

Still hoping Ilena is alive!
Oh and just a note, I've noticed you spell Ilena with TWO Ls intead of One. Its Ilena not Illena. But that's nothing big just a little heads up.
Great job! Looking forward to the next one!
P.S which Fire Emblem is this?
Kuroui
5/24/2012 c8 Kuroui
Omg this is so interesting! I'm hooked! Please continue this! I want to see how they deal with a Dark Druid once more with the added power of Claymores and Awakened ones.

I'm looking forward to Clare's reaction and Miria and Heath's full reunion. Oh this would be even more wonderful if Ilena showed up. Man I can't wait!

Update soon!

Kuroui
1/29/2012 c7 3Sieben Nightwing
Need more FIRE EMBLEM! seriously, It rocks, and Heath is just badass. I appreciate all your hard work that has gone into this story and I hope to see more soon. Keep up the great work, and I hope to see you next chapter.

P.S. I didn't find anything to give advice on in the story up to this point, so I'm not going to make any suggestions. However, I would enjoy seeing a few more detailed battle scenes.
12/16/2011 c4 isaacmarkerkiller
will Heath have a bigger role in the story then in the game? also will he get one of the legendary weapons?

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