for ANBU Code Name: Kit1/2/2012 c11 gohan90
Very interesting story so far but this might be the last chapter I read I mean really Hinata but i think that this pairing makes no sense in this story they don't fit together at all since naruto is in anbu he is much more serious then in canon instead of the happy-go-lucky idiot that never gives up that he normally is that is the entire reason for hinatas crush she saw that he never gave up and she wanted to be like that but since so she admired him which led to the crush. he isn't like that in this story it makes no sense for her to like him, so without naruto to like she would find someone else who never gives up to have a crush on or she would be even worst then in canon by being more shy less confident weaker if she couldn't find anyone like that.naruto is an anbu so his personality is not someone who would be interested in hinata she is shy and sweet he is a cold and ruthless killer who only shows his kind side to people he already knows and loves so they would never get close enough for him to show that side to her so it makes absolutely no sense for them to be paired hell it wouldn't even make sense for them to even be friends.
Also I want to know why did you pick hinata for the pairing? she doesn't fit this naruto at all so that can't be your reason,i checked all the reviews and only 2 people said you should make it naruhina and only one of those 2 was for naruhina the other was for naruX(hina,ino,OC) so your reason can't be that the reviewers want her that only leaves one option you chose her because you like her, in your profile it says that naruhina is your favorite pairing so this must be your reason right? I think that is a huge mistake I like naruhina BUT only when it makes sense to the story in this story it doesn't make sense because of naruto being an anbu and colder then in canon and hina not having a crush on him because he is diff from canon. The way you should decide the pairing is to look at narutos character how he act, how he treats people, how he thinks then pick someone that fits him instead of picking a pairing YOU like even when it doesn't make sense.
I am sorry if this review sounds harsh or like a flame that is not my intent so if it comes off that way I am sorry but it is just one of the things I hate the most in fanfic when stories pair 2 characters who don't fit together in that story just because they like that pairing.
Very interesting story so far but this might be the last chapter I read I mean really Hinata but i think that this pairing makes no sense in this story they don't fit together at all since naruto is in anbu he is much more serious then in canon instead of the happy-go-lucky idiot that never gives up that he normally is that is the entire reason for hinatas crush she saw that he never gave up and she wanted to be like that but since so she admired him which led to the crush. he isn't like that in this story it makes no sense for her to like him, so without naruto to like she would find someone else who never gives up to have a crush on or she would be even worst then in canon by being more shy less confident weaker if she couldn't find anyone like that.naruto is an anbu so his personality is not someone who would be interested in hinata she is shy and sweet he is a cold and ruthless killer who only shows his kind side to people he already knows and loves so they would never get close enough for him to show that side to her so it makes absolutely no sense for them to be paired hell it wouldn't even make sense for them to even be friends.
Also I want to know why did you pick hinata for the pairing? she doesn't fit this naruto at all so that can't be your reason,i checked all the reviews and only 2 people said you should make it naruhina and only one of those 2 was for naruhina the other was for naruX(hina,ino,OC) so your reason can't be that the reviewers want her that only leaves one option you chose her because you like her, in your profile it says that naruhina is your favorite pairing so this must be your reason right? I think that is a huge mistake I like naruhina BUT only when it makes sense to the story in this story it doesn't make sense because of naruto being an anbu and colder then in canon and hina not having a crush on him because he is diff from canon. The way you should decide the pairing is to look at narutos character how he act, how he treats people, how he thinks then pick someone that fits him instead of picking a pairing YOU like even when it doesn't make sense.
I am sorry if this review sounds harsh or like a flame that is not my intent so if it comes off that way I am sorry but it is just one of the things I hate the most in fanfic when stories pair 2 characters who don't fit together in that story just because they like that pairing.
1/1/2012 c11 Travis9000
u put ch. 8 up 2 times
u put ch. 8 up 2 times
1/1/2012 c10 Brandon Graham 88
Great chapter, I can't wait for the next one, so I wish u the best of luck with next chapter, the rest of this story, and all ur other stories, until next time, JA NE AND HAPPY NEW YEARS!
Great chapter, I can't wait for the next one, so I wish u the best of luck with next chapter, the rest of this story, and all ur other stories, until next time, JA NE AND HAPPY NEW YEARS!
1/1/2012 c11 
4ForeverWildfire2.0
...? Is this a repeat chapter of chapter 9? If it isn't then something must be wrong with my screen... Great story though!
4ForeverWildfire2.0...? Is this a repeat chapter of chapter 9? If it isn't then something must be wrong with my screen... Great story though!
1/1/2012 c11 Rinn
Did your computer break or something? This is 9th chapters or something, we've already read it. It's still a good chapter, but, you know, it kind of gets repetitive...;-)
Did your computer break or something? This is 9th chapters or something, we've already read it. It's still a good chapter, but, you know, it kind of gets repetitive...;-)
12/24/2011 c10 12Paper-Knights
Wait, is this story based on another fic which is kinda exactly like this one?
I can't remember the name of it, I think it was Ninja of the Pentagram or something, but if you are taking out the plotline of Ninja of the Pentagram, could you tell me whether it is Kiba/Naruto or not, since if it is, I think I will kill myself now...
12Paper-KnightsWait, is this story based on another fic which is kinda exactly like this one?
I can't remember the name of it, I think it was Ninja of the Pentagram or something, but if you are taking out the plotline of Ninja of the Pentagram, could you tell me whether it is Kiba/Naruto or not, since if it is, I think I will kill myself now...
12/24/2011 c10 Sang28
Think u should have the "capture tora "mission in your next chapter granted it's in a lot of stories but maybe in yours have a slight twist to it. I mean it's still a team building mission and they do still need that. Still good story and eagerly waiting for the next chapter however u do it
Think u should have the "capture tora "mission in your next chapter granted it's in a lot of stories but maybe in yours have a slight twist to it. I mean it's still a team building mission and they do still need that. Still good story and eagerly waiting for the next chapter however u do it
12/23/2011 c10 Naru X Ayame or Tayuya
pair him with Ayame or Tayuya and let him move through ranks fast...
pair him with Ayame or Tayuya and let him move through ranks fast...
12/23/2011 c3 Addictive Label
i find it kinda funny that you have the "ANBU" say something like "slow down and speak english" and still you name the missing nins like Ching CHang and Chong... why not Peter Niklas and Lars...
i find it kinda funny that you have the "ANBU" say something like "slow down and speak english" and still you name the missing nins like Ching CHang and Chong... why not Peter Niklas and Lars...