for Aono's Kaleidescope5/20 c8 Arkisenn
I think you may have dedicated too much time to the fight scene. I ended up skipping the last third of it. It was great and all, but it just kept going on and on. Try to take that into consideration with future fight scenes.
I think you may have dedicated too much time to the fight scene. I ended up skipping the last third of it. It was great and all, but it just kept going on and on. Try to take that into consideration with future fight scenes.
5/9 c11 
2KuyouFox
Uhh.. Buddy?
PoF isn't out yet you tard haha
It's BLitDS lmao!
And I am an orange fox, not a ferret you jabroni!
Anyways, good chappie haha.
2KuyouFoxUhh.. Buddy?
PoF isn't out yet you tard haha
It's BLitDS lmao!
And I am an orange fox, not a ferret you jabroni!
Anyways, good chappie haha.
4/28 c12 KuyouFox
I love everyone's guessing haha!
I want to say who it is so badly yet I don't want to give it away lmao... And don't worry about the OC's identity too much hehe. You'll like the character and it'll be a good shock to y'all. Inu... put chapters up faster! You're leading these reviewers on hahahaha! D
Anyways, a damn good chapter with a few spelling mistakes (sensie, sensei etc.).
I love everyone's guessing haha!
I want to say who it is so badly yet I don't want to give it away lmao... And don't worry about the OC's identity too much hehe. You'll like the character and it'll be a good shock to y'all. Inu... put chapters up faster! You're leading these reviewers on hahahaha! D
Anyways, a damn good chapter with a few spelling mistakes (sensie, sensei etc.).
4/28 c5 Forget Logic. Punch Stuff
That honestly wasn't a half bad fight scene. It could be improved, but then again, one's writing can always be improved, you don't really have as big an issue with fights as it sounds like you think you do... then again that is just my own opinion, so take it with a grain of salt.
Keep up the good writing.
That honestly wasn't a half bad fight scene. It could be improved, but then again, one's writing can always be improved, you don't really have as big an issue with fights as it sounds like you think you do... then again that is just my own opinion, so take it with a grain of salt.
Keep up the good writing.
4/27 c1 TheLaughingMan1
Good so far. Too few Sharingan fics are well written for me to make a judgement right now.
Good so far. Too few Sharingan fics are well written for me to make a judgement right now.
4/25 c12 4SilverFlameHaze
Pagos guess: a descendent of Naruto and Hinata?... My knowledge right now is focused on the Narutoverse because of recent reads so I hope it's of that.
4SilverFlameHazePagos guess: a descendent of Naruto and Hinata?... My knowledge right now is focused on the Narutoverse because of recent reads so I hope it's of that.
4/25 c12 Ressan
Nice chapter, tought it looked there was some foreshadowing with Tsukune tempting fate with the paramilitary comment , hope he attains EMS so he can attain a diverse skillset besides his corrent tainjtsu ( where hes weaker than s class) and minor illusions,'the EMS can give its 3'skills that are based differently ( Susano is physical, Tsukyomi as the strongest illusion and Amateratsu as "energy/magical" attack ,not counting how awesome they are.
Nice chapter, tought it looked there was some foreshadowing with Tsukune tempting fate with the paramilitary comment , hope he attains EMS so he can attain a diverse skillset besides his corrent tainjtsu ( where hes weaker than s class) and minor illusions,'the EMS can give its 3'skills that are based differently ( Susano is physical, Tsukyomi as the strongest illusion and Amateratsu as "energy/magical" attack ,not counting how awesome they are.
4/25 c12 Skullders
Nice chapter.
Nice chapter.