for What the4/23/2012 c15 SuzyQ32
I just finished your story, it was so great! I loved the plot and I loved the kids. Can't wait to read more from you. Keep up the good work.
I just finished your story, it was so great! I loved the plot and I loved the kids. Can't wait to read more from you. Keep up the good work.
1/4/2012 c15 Blue Sky 62
I wasn't so sure when I first started reading this story as the first few chapters had no paragraphs but stayed and then was relieved when the style of each chapter changed for the better.
It was a good story and this was the first of many, many ! stories I had read where Charlie is also changed which I thought was a nice touch.
I wasn't so sure when I first started reading this story as the first few chapters had no paragraphs but stayed and then was relieved when the style of each chapter changed for the better.
It was a good story and this was the first of many, many ! stories I had read where Charlie is also changed which I thought was a nice touch.
12/26/2011 c13 Kaorilamb
I LOVED THE FREAKING STORY! Brilliant and to the point. no hanging angst. brilliant again. just one thing, i was kinda hoping no wolfs especially jacob but i see your point just pls no imprint
I LOVED THE FREAKING STORY! Brilliant and to the point. no hanging angst. brilliant again. just one thing, i was kinda hoping no wolfs especially jacob but i see your point just pls no imprint
12/22/2011 c12 jazzed40
Wtf!Ok so I hope someone rips Tanya apart ,Or you could have Tanya and Edward realize they are in love and Then Bella would be free to fall in love with Jasper...Just kidding(not really).Don't wait too long for next update pls I hate cliffies. xo
Wtf!Ok so I hope someone rips Tanya apart ,Or you could have Tanya and Edward realize they are in love and Then Bella would be free to fall in love with Jasper...Just kidding(not really).Don't wait too long for next update pls I hate cliffies. xo
12/19/2011 c10 jazzed40
Oh I am sooooo proud of you for posting your first story!I don't normally read E/B stories as you know(unless they are Darkward)Because my heart belongs to the Major...Maybe one of these days you will write on for me!Keep posting I have been waiting for so long...Your Big Sista xo
Oh I am sooooo proud of you for posting your first story!I don't normally read E/B stories as you know(unless they are Darkward)Because my heart belongs to the Major...Maybe one of these days you will write on for me!Keep posting I have been waiting for so long...Your Big Sista xo
12/14/2011 c9 
2jadedghost22
Oh yes, the wonders of child birth. the hell you go through to have that beautiful little miracle. then they put the sweet baby on your so you can see your little one for the first time and what does that child do the very first time? Pees on ya, oh wait that didn't happen in this story, just to me. Loved this version of the bith compared to the real story. This is just more real to me than the book/ movie. Plus hated the fake baby in the movie, and the fact that it's eyes were cleaned off when before they did any cleaning.
2jadedghost22Oh yes, the wonders of child birth. the hell you go through to have that beautiful little miracle. then they put the sweet baby on your so you can see your little one for the first time and what does that child do the very first time? Pees on ya, oh wait that didn't happen in this story, just to me. Loved this version of the bith compared to the real story. This is just more real to me than the book/ movie. Plus hated the fake baby in the movie, and the fact that it's eyes were cleaned off when before they did any cleaning.