for A New Life4/23 c9 Techno117
Very nice, i have just started to read these and liked how u threw in the time when Blu was a chick.
Very nice, i have just started to read these and liked how u threw in the time when Blu was a chick.
4/14 c19 Guest
I loved this story. I think now this is just my opinion but maby u should try a lemon. u did amazing on the emotion, the love etc (BUT IT IS YOUR CHOISE) cant what to read the other story if its there . I will read this story over and over again with no intention of it getting boaring. i don't much tell people this but when i read a story that I like I can make a movie of it in my head. u made a exilent story. peace :)
I loved this story. I think now this is just my opinion but maby u should try a lemon. u did amazing on the emotion, the love etc (BUT IT IS YOUR CHOISE) cant what to read the other story if its there . I will read this story over and over again with no intention of it getting boaring. i don't much tell people this but when i read a story that I like I can make a movie of it in my head. u made a exilent story. peace :)
1/9 c1 
2Reno ajah
Blu fought Jolo like a hero, he fought him to protect and the eggs, as well. this story makes me freakin, outstanding story. keep up the good work.
2Reno ajahBlu fought Jolo like a hero, he fought him to protect and the eggs, as well. this story makes me freakin, outstanding story. keep up the good work.
12/30/2012 c17 3century99
Freakin awsome this whole chapter is sooo suspensful blu is going mad... with rage this whole time im chanting sry for the cuss (
** kicking ** kicking ** kicking)
3century99Freakin awsome this whole chapter is sooo suspensful blu is going mad... with rage this whole time im chanting sry for the cuss (
** kicking ** kicking ** kicking)
5/22/2012 c19 krystalking
Wow. This is an excellent story,but my main gripe,and its a big one,is the spelling and flow of words. The story just doesnt really move fluidly,making it something of a pain to read. I am willing to edit the story if you want me to, I wouldnt change much, just the spelling and flow of words. Just reply if you want,as I have written minor novels before. All in all,keep up the good work.
Wow. This is an excellent story,but my main gripe,and its a big one,is the spelling and flow of words. The story just doesnt really move fluidly,making it something of a pain to read. I am willing to edit the story if you want me to, I wouldnt change much, just the spelling and flow of words. Just reply if you want,as I have written minor novels before. All in all,keep up the good work.
5/14/2012 c19 4Blu100-Jewel100
Great story can't wait for the sequel not sure if I've read the sequel if I haven't I'll read and review it ASAP.
4Blu100-Jewel100Great story can't wait for the sequel not sure if I've read the sequel if I haven't I'll read and review it ASAP.
5/14/2012 c19 1Jinx the Galade blade
hell yea cant belive the little ones are finally here, axelent story i will look foward to see the sequel and i will continue to suport you wiith that story and you spyro ones as well i ll see you soon
1Jinx the Galade bladehell yea cant belive the little ones are finally here, axelent story i will look foward to see the sequel and i will continue to suport you wiith that story and you spyro ones as well i ll see you soon
5/14/2012 c18 Jinx the Galade blade
hell yea take that jollo, Jonas you did the right thing i ll see the last chapter right away ,this story... ah men its incredible
hell yea take that jollo, Jonas you did the right thing i ll see the last chapter right away ,this story... ah men its incredible
5/13/2012 c19 9Kraft58
Beautiful end to a beautiful story.
I enjoyed reading it, and hope for a sequel (after you finish the rest of your stories for your other categories) congratulations for finishing the fanfic :)
9Kraft58Beautiful end to a beautiful story.
I enjoyed reading it, and hope for a sequel (after you finish the rest of your stories for your other categories) congratulations for finishing the fanfic :)
5/13/2012 c19 2mw4fan
(My idea on the egg haching scene)awww i can just picture it *cough*so cute.that was my cousin:P i really enjoyed this story:) until next time..we'll be waiting;)
2mw4fan(My idea on the egg haching scene)awww i can just picture it *cough*so cute.that was my cousin:P i really enjoyed this story:) until next time..we'll be waiting;)
5/13/2012 c19 1BluJet The MacawHawk
what a great ending to New Life, but come on when the kids were 5 or something Blu and Jewel will be 21 years old before they make love, ilike it better when they're under 20 cause it's alot fun when they're still teens and alot cuter that way.
1BluJet The MacawHawkwhat a great ending to New Life, but come on when the kids were 5 or something Blu and Jewel will be 21 years old before they make love, ilike it better when they're under 20 cause it's alot fun when they're still teens and alot cuter that way.
5/12/2012 c18 2mw4fan
fight scene...10 out of 10.chapter 10 out of 10.looking forward for the last chapter..keep up the good work:)
2mw4fanfight scene...10 out of 10.chapter 10 out of 10.looking forward for the last chapter..keep up the good work:)
5/12/2012 c18 9Kraft58
Once again nice chapter.
I love the fight scene it gets you pumped up and really excited. I would add the five senses though, so we can feel each punch, taste the blood from the wounds, hear the bone shattering impact of the punches, or someone bouncing off the pavement.
I can't wait for the finale :)
P.S. We seem to have the same problem, we have lots of readers but not many reviewers
9Kraft58Once again nice chapter.
I love the fight scene it gets you pumped up and really excited. I would add the five senses though, so we can feel each punch, taste the blood from the wounds, hear the bone shattering impact of the punches, or someone bouncing off the pavement.
I can't wait for the finale :)
P.S. We seem to have the same problem, we have lots of readers but not many reviewers