6/13/2012 c1 10pacificbluegirl
Ahhh again, this deserves more than 3 reviews! This is so good! The pace is great, the way you write is wonderful and I really like the way you wrote Tony in this. Really enjoyed it! The writers were pretty mean for not giving us a sneak peak of how that night in Paris went down but this made up for it. ;) Thanks!

12/17/2011 c1 121Anonymous033
Hello! :D I'm taking a break from writing at the moment.

I liked!

I think Ziva was a bit OOC at some parts, but it's mostly a very sweet story, and I like that she trusts him enough to break down in front of him. And, of course, the little Tiva shipper in me loves that he held her :D and I thought it was cute that he thought she looked like a sweet, harmless puppy.

"Vance can bite me." Haha, that's hilarious! Protective Tony, I love him...

And I especially loved the ending :) I mean, I know we actually saw the scene and all, but I love how you've described it.

Good job!

~Soph