for The Chronicles of Riddick Old Habits12/1/2012 c10 dksamuri
Loved it, but the last fight was kinda weak. Anti-climactic. But overall good story
Loved it, but the last fight was kinda weak. Anti-climactic. But overall good story
3/21/2012 c10 LolabunnyZ
complete, COMPLETE! oh wat am i gonna read now?
i hope u keep writing more stories about Riddick n Kyra, they're the only ones worth reading.
complete, COMPLETE! oh wat am i gonna read now?
i hope u keep writing more stories about Riddick n Kyra, they're the only ones worth reading.
3/20/2012 c10 Mezza999
Good ending.
I liked how kyra and riddick continue on the travels anywhere to search for trouble and play kyra's favourite game.
And big shock to read riddick say those three words to her.
I was hoping for more chapters
Good ending.
I liked how kyra and riddick continue on the travels anywhere to search for trouble and play kyra's favourite game.
And big shock to read riddick say those three words to her.
I was hoping for more chapters
3/17/2012 c9 Mezza999
It's worth a wait. Pity it's a bit this chapter.
I'm happy Riddick found her.
Please be quick in updating or typing the new chapter.
It's worth a wait. Pity it's a bit this chapter.
I'm happy Riddick found her.
Please be quick in updating or typing the new chapter.
2/28/2012 c9 LolabunnyZ
no worries! don't rush it, i'm sure you'll get inspired sooner or later. i'm sure the new chapter will be worth the wait.
no worries! don't rush it, i'm sure you'll get inspired sooner or later. i'm sure the new chapter will be worth the wait.
2/21/2012 c1 Mezza999
Taps foot rather impatiently. How much longer do we have to wait for more chapters?
Taps foot rather impatiently. How much longer do we have to wait for more chapters?
1/31/2012 c8 Mezza999
Eagerly waiting for the next chapters. Can't wait.
Eagerly waiting for the next chapters. Can't wait.
1/27/2012 c8 LolabunnyZ
"Well fuck…wasn't he a handsome merc?" well hey Xander Cage can kidnap me anytime ;) especially when he has luxury rooms like that vacant.
Can't wait to see wat happens next!
"Well fuck…wasn't he a handsome merc?" well hey Xander Cage can kidnap me anytime ;) especially when he has luxury rooms like that vacant.
Can't wait to see wat happens next!
1/25/2012 c8 bh
Great cant wait till the next chapter :)
Great cant wait till the next chapter :)
1/24/2012 c8 Resisting-Moonlight
I'd really like to know what's up with this Xander fellow. I don't like the sound of him being a collector.
I'd really like to know what's up with this Xander fellow. I don't like the sound of him being a collector.
1/22/2012 c7 Mezza999
Update Update please!
I hope riddick will be able to heal quick to rescue kyra.
Update Update please!
I hope riddick will be able to heal quick to rescue kyra.
1/11/2012 c7 LolabunnyZ
i'm excited to learn more about this xander cage character, and if he's gonna have any similarities to riddick (besides having a name played by the same actor).
smart plan for Toombs, just needed someone to get a good stab @ riddick. then waiting around for when kyra got distracted. "flawless" dame vaako would be proud
great chapter!
i'm excited to learn more about this xander cage character, and if he's gonna have any similarities to riddick (besides having a name played by the same actor).
smart plan for Toombs, just needed someone to get a good stab @ riddick. then waiting around for when kyra got distracted. "flawless" dame vaako would be proud
great chapter!
1/5/2012 c6 LolabunnyZ
action packed chapter, it was amazing! especially Kyra's scene, loved that she can hold her own, and she finished those men just as fast as riddick did, seriously badass!
Toombs is getting smarter tho. liked seeing him evolve here.
and thanx for the shout out... can't wait for the next chapter
action packed chapter, it was amazing! especially Kyra's scene, loved that she can hold her own, and she finished those men just as fast as riddick did, seriously badass!
Toombs is getting smarter tho. liked seeing him evolve here.
and thanx for the shout out... can't wait for the next chapter
1/2/2012 c5 BMSCullen
The Chronicles of Riddick Was recently on TV and it's brought bacn my love for the films, characters and plot. Love your writing style, i loved the prequal and i now LOVE this story, i like the short chapters too, i love a drabble fic :). I loved the underverse seting and chapters in your first story. I hope you keep writing, i'll be here to r&r every chapter! Oh, did you hear about the sequal 'Riddick' ? I'm ultra excited for it! X
The Chronicles of Riddick Was recently on TV and it's brought bacn my love for the films, characters and plot. Love your writing style, i loved the prequal and i now LOVE this story, i like the short chapters too, i love a drabble fic :). I loved the underverse seting and chapters in your first story. I hope you keep writing, i'll be here to r&r every chapter! Oh, did you hear about the sequal 'Riddick' ? I'm ultra excited for it! X