for Dig Me Up From Under6/5/2012 c3 MonLetCer
Great so far. I am looking forward to seeing what is going on with Jake and Alice. And the development between Edward and Bella.
Great so far. I am looking forward to seeing what is going on with Jake and Alice. And the development between Edward and Bella.
5/22/2012 c3 Jlyons0424
Love the titles of your stories. Incubus fan? Brandon Boyd is one of my free passes. So totally get it. I look forward to seeing where this story goes. :)
Love the titles of your stories. Incubus fan? Brandon Boyd is one of my free passes. So totally get it. I look forward to seeing where this story goes. :)
5/13/2012 c3
1MalloryKnoxx
Why do I want to punch the shit out of Jake all the time? *sigh It's mentally exhausting really. And "Mase" is making my bits tingle and my mouth water, js.
1MalloryKnoxxWhy do I want to punch the shit out of Jake all the time? *sigh It's mentally exhausting really. And "Mase" is making my bits tingle and my mouth water, js.
5/6/2012 c3
3Maplestyle
I found your other story on someones favourites list and breezed through all 26 chapters (is there going to be more of that one?) Then I came to read this one..can't wait for more!
3MaplestyleI found your other story on someones favourites list and breezed through all 26 chapters (is there going to be more of that one?) Then I came to read this one..can't wait for more!
5/5/2012 c3
13evilnat
This chapter was killer. I can see Mase is going to be intense. He's so sure of himself and yes almost bossy like Bella said. And yes he's damn hot. the way she describes him, there really is something about him!
Always here for you, no matter what your penname is.
LOVE
xxxxxx
13evilnatThis chapter was killer. I can see Mase is going to be intense. He's so sure of himself and yes almost bossy like Bella said. And yes he's damn hot. the way she describes him, there really is something about him!
Always here for you, no matter what your penname is.
LOVE
xxxxxx
5/3/2012 c3
24Rochelle Allison
i love the ust...yummy. also "apple butter" is a perfect original description for edward/mase's hair. love!
24Rochelle Allisoni love the ust...yummy. also "apple butter" is a perfect original description for edward/mase's hair. love!
5/3/2012 c3 Nicffwhisperer
YOU GOTTA DO MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORE! I love this! WTF is Jake up to and what kind of friend is Alice for not saying anything to her yet? You write so fucking well that I"m like chanting over here! MORE MORE MORE.
Love you so much pretty xo
YOU GOTTA DO MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORE! I love this! WTF is Jake up to and what kind of friend is Alice for not saying anything to her yet? You write so fucking well that I"m like chanting over here! MORE MORE MORE.
Love you so much pretty xo
5/3/2012 c3 LuckiLuci
Love this fic, cant wait to find out what Jake has done. Glad it's not Alice they just wrong together xx
Love this fic, cant wait to find out what Jake has done. Glad it's not Alice they just wrong together xx
5/3/2012 c3 mephis1
Ah-ah! And phew. Coming out of lurking to say that I'm relieved to learn that there's more to the note she found in Jake's possession. No doubt, all will be revealed and by the way, I like your writing style.
Ah-ah! And phew. Coming out of lurking to say that I'm relieved to learn that there's more to the note she found in Jake's possession. No doubt, all will be revealed and by the way, I like your writing style.
5/2/2012 c3 Erikajo
Just write it and they will come. . .
Haha! Great job! I am totally enjoying the story. :)
Just write it and they will come. . .
Haha! Great job! I am totally enjoying the story. :)
5/2/2012 c1 reds-red
Apparently I didn't review the first chapter so I will just add somethingnin here. I thought Alice was hitting on Jake too at first but Jake the snake gave that away by "being able to explain what she saw". ...arrogant guys need to be taken down a peg with a junk punch...just saying. Anyone who tramples on another's heart haphazardly is there with the arrogant boys. Please tray and update this fic regularly. : ). You'll get more reviews too because then I can pimp it in Edwardville on LJ
Apparently I didn't review the first chapter so I will just add somethingnin here. I thought Alice was hitting on Jake too at first but Jake the snake gave that away by "being able to explain what she saw". ...arrogant guys need to be taken down a peg with a junk punch...just saying. Anyone who tramples on another's heart haphazardly is there with the arrogant boys. Please tray and update this fic regularly. : ). You'll get more reviews too because then I can pimp it in Edwardville on LJ
5/2/2012 c3 reds-red
Nice! Thank you for the update. Mase is quite the smooth talker now isn't he. Attentively flirty - swoon worthy.
Please work on this fic too and I will go read your other story...deal?
Nice! Thank you for the update. Mase is quite the smooth talker now isn't he. Attentively flirty - swoon worthy.
Please work on this fic too and I will go read your other story...deal?
