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7blueeyedcherry
Ahh! Edward seems so playful compared to Jake. And I love that Rose is Bella's sister in this story. And that she has dark hair. I enjoy characters falling a bit out of their canon roles. :)
This is beautifully written. I feel like I'm there watching them as I read.
7blueeyedcherryAhh! Edward seems so playful compared to Jake. And I love that Rose is Bella's sister in this story. And that she has dark hair. I enjoy characters falling a bit out of their canon roles. :)
This is beautifully written. I feel like I'm there watching them as I read.
4/11 c3 blueeyedcherry
I don't typically condone cheating, in a fic or otherwise, but I have some empathy for your Bella here. I know we haven't gotten a full story and we don't know the extent of Jake's abuse, but just the fact that she's been in an abusive relationship for some time softens my heart toward her.
The night she shared with Edward sounds beautiful. I hope you share more about it was the story goes on. :)
I don't typically condone cheating, in a fic or otherwise, but I have some empathy for your Bella here. I know we haven't gotten a full story and we don't know the extent of Jake's abuse, but just the fact that she's been in an abusive relationship for some time softens my heart toward her.
The night she shared with Edward sounds beautiful. I hope you share more about it was the story goes on. :)
4/11 c2 blueeyedcherry
Hmm. How much does Jake know? Just from the glances in the mirror I'd guess he's suspicious of something.
Edward doesn't seem too concerned about the flirtatious behavior in the backseat. Perhaps that's just the weed? I guess I'll find out more as I continue and learn these characters. :)
Hmm. How much does Jake know? Just from the glances in the mirror I'd guess he's suspicious of something.
Edward doesn't seem too concerned about the flirtatious behavior in the backseat. Perhaps that's just the weed? I guess I'll find out more as I continue and learn these characters. :)
4/11 c1 blueeyedcherry
I'm intrigued. I can't wait to learn more about how things got to where they are with Bella and Jake.
I'm intrigued. I can't wait to learn more about how things got to where they are with Bella and Jake.
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3/26 c15 Heatherl8367
Shocker of an ending,but oh so beautiful. It works...it really does. I enjoyed this so so much. I won't forget these two...:)
And I loved this:
"Ten fingers reach out to touch hers and I'm taken over. One soul hijacked by another; we are now two made one."
Gorgeous! xoxoxox
Shocker of an ending,but oh so beautiful. It works...it really does. I enjoyed this so so much. I won't forget these two...:)
And I loved this:
"Ten fingers reach out to touch hers and I'm taken over. One soul hijacked by another; we are now two made one."
Gorgeous! xoxoxox
3/26 c14 Heatherl8367
Definitely a transitional chapter. These two needed space. Glad you gave it to them. Felt very realistic and true. Loved it.
Definitely a transitional chapter. These two needed space. Glad you gave it to them. Felt very realistic and true. Loved it.
3/26 c13 Heatherl8367
Amazing chapter...and can I just say that I loved this...
I want to say, "If you consider getting up in your girlfriend's guts last night, good, then yeah. I'm fucking great," But I spare pretty boy the truth. I just answer his question with another one.
Brilliant! :)
Amazing chapter...and can I just say that I loved this...
I want to say, "If you consider getting up in your girlfriend's guts last night, good, then yeah. I'm fucking great," But I spare pretty boy the truth. I just answer his question with another one.
Brilliant! :)
3/25 c12 Heatherl8367
Each chapter is better than the last. HOMG the intensity of this. I love it. Right up my alley.
Each chapter is better than the last. HOMG the intensity of this. I love it. Right up my alley.
3/25 c11 Heatherl8367
Fucking beautiful. I'm just in awe...wow. It's after midnight here and baby is crying...duty calls. Finishing this story first thing tomorrow. Just want you to know how much I'm loving this. Amazing.
Fucking beautiful. I'm just in awe...wow. It's after midnight here and baby is crying...duty calls. Finishing this story first thing tomorrow. Just want you to know how much I'm loving this. Amazing.
3/25 c9 Heatherl8367
My best friend dated Brandon Boyd in junior high...I remember that boy clear as a bell. :) loved that peek into E's mind. He's one sexy MF. Wow.
My best friend dated Brandon Boyd in junior high...I remember that boy clear as a bell. :) loved that peek into E's mind. He's one sexy MF. Wow.