for ExFriends, Lovers and Brothers11/11/2012 c1 Guest
Is the story over because i wan't more!I think ron should escape from go out for revenge and becom th next dark lord.
Is the story over because i wan't more!I think ron should escape from go out for revenge and becom th next dark lord.
8/1/2012 c7 Guest
harrys an idiot. im so freaking tired of seeing stories about how he always blames himself for everything that happens. i also hate his hero saving crap.
harrys an idiot. im so freaking tired of seeing stories about how he always blames himself for everything that happens. i also hate his hero saving crap.
4/13/2012 c7 kat
Just thought you'd want to know, the Draught of the Living Death puts you into an irreversable sleep, meaning Harry would go to sleep and never wake up. You might want to change that to a Dreamless Sleep or simply a sleeping potion if you want him to wake up.
Just thought you'd want to know, the Draught of the Living Death puts you into an irreversable sleep, meaning Harry would go to sleep and never wake up. You might want to change that to a Dreamless Sleep or simply a sleeping potion if you want him to wake up.
1/29/2012 c1 mandymacca
just thought I'd tell you that the end of this chapter confused me a bit, you say that fred and oliver are together and then later in the last paragraph say that Victor Krum moved to oliver's team and married. It sounds like he married Oliver?
just thought I'd tell you that the end of this chapter confused me a bit, you say that fred and oliver are together and then later in the last paragraph say that Victor Krum moved to oliver's team and married. It sounds like he married Oliver?
1/21/2012 c7 Blueteeth
This final chapter was too short in my opinion. I think there should have been more detail about the goings on in the court room, and perhaps an epilogue, say 6 months later?
This final chapter was too short in my opinion. I think there should have been more detail about the goings on in the court room, and perhaps an epilogue, say 6 months later?
1/21/2012 c7 
7V. L. Crawford
Glad that Ron is paying for his crime, but two short of a chapter. Please update soon.
7V. L. CrawfordGlad that Ron is paying for his crime, but two short of a chapter. Please update soon.
1/17/2012 c4 zac robinshore
that was amazing
please do another chapter
that was amazing
please do another chapter