for Dragon Slaying Pirate?5/21 c30
6animagirl
Yukio is so cool! I love her personality. She is perfect for Sanji! XD. I love to see more scenes. Even scenes where Sanji is jealous. I love that Yukio flirts with girls' its hilarious. Update soon!
6animagirlYukio is so cool! I love her personality. She is perfect for Sanji! XD. I love to see more scenes. Even scenes where Sanji is jealous. I love that Yukio flirts with girls' its hilarious. Update soon!
5/20 c6
6NeitherDeadAndAlive
Story's great, but chapters are too short. You should've made it like 1000 words a chapter. But anyway, i never read something like this! Interesting. :)
6NeitherDeadAndAliveStory's great, but chapters are too short. You should've made it like 1000 words a chapter. But anyway, i never read something like this! Interesting. :)
5/19 c30 jonathanpmanrique
I still kinda want a picture of her... If u don't mind. Will there be more magic users in the One Piece world? Why does she still wear bandages if the whole crew knows she's a girl?
I still kinda want a picture of her... If u don't mind. Will there be more magic users in the One Piece world? Why does she still wear bandages if the whole crew knows she's a girl?
5/19 c29 jonathanpmanrique
I read lots of these stories before, usually there's lots of anomalies and they change few things in the storyline. Will you add some?
I read lots of these stories before, usually there's lots of anomalies and they change few things in the storyline. Will you add some?
5/19 c28 jonathanpmanrique
I love your progression, it started off pretty bad and now it's an awesome story! And since your a fellow reader of "Magician on board", do u know why he hasn't updated in months?
I love your progression, it started off pretty bad and now it's an awesome story! And since your a fellow reader of "Magician on board", do u know why he hasn't updated in months?
5/19 c25 jonathanpmanrique
I asked u earlier how Yukio looked, you think you could draw up a picture for all the readers?
I asked u earlier how Yukio looked, you think you could draw up a picture for all the readers?
4/21 c30 Ninuhuju
Don't worry about your updating. At least it was shorter that 1337box's time for his next update and at least you updated hasn't updated for 7 FRIGGIN MONTHS! I'm starting to thing he may have died... *sweatdrops* I hope I'm wrong.
This chapt was great and the part where Yukio changes in front of Vivi was funny. See you next update!
Don't worry about your updating. At least it was shorter that 1337box's time for his next update and at least you updated hasn't updated for 7 FRIGGIN MONTHS! I'm starting to thing he may have died... *sweatdrops* I hope I'm wrong.
This chapt was great and the part where Yukio changes in front of Vivi was funny. See you next update!
4/18 c30 FlyingTurtleduck
You updated! That's good. And the chapter wasn't bad, don't get me wrong, but it felt somewhat... half-assed. Your lack of inspiration does affect your writing, and personally, I would rather wait out a long hiatus and then read a breathtaking story than read forced chapter, no matter how often they are posted. Quality is worth waiting. Don't force yourself to write this if that muse is in no mood to go on right now.
I do appreciate your dedication to your readers and the effort this chapter must have taken (writing wothout inspiration is *hard*), though.
You updated! That's good. And the chapter wasn't bad, don't get me wrong, but it felt somewhat... half-assed. Your lack of inspiration does affect your writing, and personally, I would rather wait out a long hiatus and then read a breathtaking story than read forced chapter, no matter how often they are posted. Quality is worth waiting. Don't force yourself to write this if that muse is in no mood to go on right now.
I do appreciate your dedication to your readers and the effort this chapter must have taken (writing wothout inspiration is *hard*), though.
4/16 c30
3Meatbun Attack
You updated! Yahooo! :D Will there be any changes on little garden? I wonder... :) Please update as soon as you can!
3Meatbun AttackYou updated! Yahooo! :D Will there be any changes on little garden? I wonder... :) Please update as soon as you can!
4/15 c30
113-BlackCat-2020
I hope you finish the story, it's really interesting. I also have to finish mine, but school had been in the way. Actually your story was the first fanfiction story I read, it also inspired me to write my own. I will try to read your other stories. I know how hard it is to continue a story she when you are in the middle of it. You might become interested again in your story when you are in Alabaster with Crocodile or when Robin is with the Strawhats and ask what did you mean by change the story plot. Then again you might not me so interested in writing about Ace's death. It will still be your opinion and yeah good look on what ever you choose to do! .
113-BlackCat-2020I hope you finish the story, it's really interesting. I also have to finish mine, but school had been in the way. Actually your story was the first fanfiction story I read, it also inspired me to write my own. I will try to read your other stories. I know how hard it is to continue a story she when you are in the middle of it. You might become interested again in your story when you are in Alabaster with Crocodile or when Robin is with the Strawhats and ask what did you mean by change the story plot. Then again you might not me so interested in writing about Ace's death. It will still be your opinion and yeah good look on what ever you choose to do! .
