for Strawberry manic6/15/2012 c6 
10bringonthespam
I like how his name is staying as "The Moderator", it just kind of adds that quirky feel to his character.
10bringonthespamI like how his name is staying as "The Moderator", it just kind of adds that quirky feel to his character.
6/15/2012 c5 bringonthespam
Shizuma drunk would be hilarious to watch wandering the hallways, hitting on other girls or telling her annoying council members to shove of lol!
Shizuma drunk would be hilarious to watch wandering the hallways, hitting on other girls or telling her annoying council members to shove of lol!
6/14/2012 c4 bringonthespam
It would be pretty interesting to see how one guy would fare at this kind of school. I like how Shizuma's dirty inner thoughts are expressed about the girls there, especially Nagisa. Pretty good so far. Can't wait to see a continuation if that's at all possible.
It would be pretty interesting to see how one guy would fare at this kind of school. I like how Shizuma's dirty inner thoughts are expressed about the girls there, especially Nagisa. Pretty good so far. Can't wait to see a continuation if that's at all possible.
1/19/2012 c1 1La Sanguine
Could use some proof-reading, and have spaces placed in the corrected areas. A space should be used after a new sentence is started. You missed quite a lot of uses with parenthesis ("-these-"), and your pacing is a bit off, shoving too many scenarios forward before establishing them as part of the story and keeping close to the flow of the story.
1La SanguineCould use some proof-reading, and have spaces placed in the corrected areas. A space should be used after a new sentence is started. You missed quite a lot of uses with parenthesis ("-these-"), and your pacing is a bit off, shoving too many scenarios forward before establishing them as part of the story and keeping close to the flow of the story.
12/21/2011 c2 Random
Darrel
Tyson
Chubaka
Mike
Adam
Mikhail
Darrel
Tyson
Chubaka
Mike
Adam
Mikhail