for My Lady5/30 c7 Guest
i love what i love!
i love what i love!
5/30 c6 shuu
now you made tsurugi love Aoi? damn you! make him love me!
now you made tsurugi love Aoi? damn you! make him love me!
5/17 c7 Guest
awwww... i want more!
awwww... i want more!
8/21/2012 c7 
5shiroi white-phoenix
PFFT! Poor Tsukasa, HAHAHAHAHAHA! That's the revenge cause you almost rape Tenma! HAHAHAHAHAHAHA! But that didn't make my mind change about kill you cause the previous chapter! But wait a minute, what happen with Shindou and Ranmaru then? O.O I'll blame you if you put bad ending on them!
Terumi Aoi: (sweatdrop) But I think they did...
By?
Terumi Aoi: Well, it says that Ranmaru-kun was give up at his love to Shindou-kun...
WHAT THE (BEEP)! NOW I'M GONNA KILL THAT (BEEP) TO (BEEP) OF (BEEP) HELL!
Terumi Aoi: W-wait a minute, Shiro-chan!
5shiroi white-phoenixPFFT! Poor Tsukasa, HAHAHAHAHAHA! That's the revenge cause you almost rape Tenma! HAHAHAHAHAHAHA! But that didn't make my mind change about kill you cause the previous chapter! But wait a minute, what happen with Shindou and Ranmaru then? O.O I'll blame you if you put bad ending on them!
Terumi Aoi: (sweatdrop) But I think they did...
By?
Terumi Aoi: Well, it says that Ranmaru-kun was give up at his love to Shindou-kun...
WHAT THE (BEEP)! NOW I'M GONNA KILL THAT (BEEP) TO (BEEP) OF (BEEP) HELL!
Terumi Aoi: W-wait a minute, Shiro-chan!
8/21/2012 c6 shiroi white-phoenix
DAMMIT HOLY! WHAT THE HELL THAT TSURUGI THINKING OF AOI! I'M GONNA DESTROY YOU AND SOON!
Terumi Aoi: Shiro-chan! That's rude-
Aoi, I know that but you want to see my head explode cause so many stress in my head?
Terumi Aoi: Well, I... No.
So then I! Anyway, I'm thinking this story was flying away from its purpose!
Terumi Aoi: Shiro-chan, please calm down...
Kill this author maybe can help! I'm going to blaming her paired Tsurugi to Aoi Sorano in KyouTenma fanfic!
Terumi Aoi: Um... I make some cupcakes.
Yay! Aoi's cupcakes! X3
DAMMIT HOLY! WHAT THE HELL THAT TSURUGI THINKING OF AOI! I'M GONNA DESTROY YOU AND SOON!
Terumi Aoi: Shiro-chan! That's rude-
Aoi, I know that but you want to see my head explode cause so many stress in my head?
Terumi Aoi: Well, I... No.
So then I! Anyway, I'm thinking this story was flying away from its purpose!
Terumi Aoi: Shiro-chan, please calm down...
Kill this author maybe can help! I'm going to blaming her paired Tsurugi to Aoi Sorano in KyouTenma fanfic!
Terumi Aoi: Um... I make some cupcakes.
Yay! Aoi's cupcakes! X3
8/21/2012 c5 shiroi white-phoenix
.HELL! KyousukeAoi! **! Fluff butt! water head! Ugly zombie! virus!
Terumi Aoi: S-Shiro-chan! Y-you need to stop crushing...
Oh right. But it was KyousukeAoi?! WTF! I thought this is KyouTenma story! Not KyouAoi story! What the hell being switched up! Did you like to shuffle pairs? Then I'll shuffle your body parts!
Terumi Aoi: Shiro-chan, that wasn't very nice...
I know that wasn't nice Aoi, but I think I need let out my emotion before my head going to explode!
Terumi Aoi: Um, cookies?
YAY!
.HELL! KyousukeAoi! **! Fluff butt! water head! Ugly zombie! virus!
Terumi Aoi: S-Shiro-chan! Y-you need to stop crushing...
Oh right. But it was KyousukeAoi?! WTF! I thought this is KyouTenma story! Not KyouAoi story! What the hell being switched up! Did you like to shuffle pairs? Then I'll shuffle your body parts!
Terumi Aoi: Shiro-chan, that wasn't very nice...
I know that wasn't nice Aoi, but I think I need let out my emotion before my head going to explode!
Terumi Aoi: Um, cookies?
YAY!
8/21/2012 c4 shiroi white-phoenix
It did short but HOLLY MOTHER OF GOD KARIYA! DON'T TOUCH RANMARU! What? I like ShindouRanmaru more than KariyaRanmaru! But hold on a second... since when Tsurugi flinched when he heard Aoi's name or the sound of it? It's Taiyou... Forget it. The guy that almost find out Tenma being a girl just for torturing Tsurugi? Um, let me think... I have two or more in this one. First of all, Minamisawa I think cause he suit to be a murder! Second of all, Kurama? Meh I even confuse. Third, maybe... I don't believe to say this, Kariya, probably. CONTINUE!
It did short but HOLLY MOTHER OF GOD KARIYA! DON'T TOUCH RANMARU! What? I like ShindouRanmaru more than KariyaRanmaru! But hold on a second... since when Tsurugi flinched when he heard Aoi's name or the sound of it? It's Taiyou... Forget it. The guy that almost find out Tenma being a girl just for torturing Tsurugi? Um, let me think... I have two or more in this one. First of all, Minamisawa I think cause he suit to be a murder! Second of all, Kurama? Meh I even confuse. Third, maybe... I don't believe to say this, Kariya, probably. CONTINUE!
8/21/2012 c3 shiroi white-phoenix
... I have some guess but I'll explain the sign first; - with/ to, become almost /possibly
1. Kyousuke-Tenma & Aoi-Taiyo Aoi-Kyousuke
2. Shindou-Ranmaru & Hikaru-Kariya Kariya-Ranmaru, Hikaru-Shindou Yamana-Shindou
That's all that I got in this story. But ya lucky I can hold my angry and mad this time because the number 1. But I found there's (not just big) many misunderstanding here at number 2. expect the plus (now you know why I arrange them in number)
... I have some guess but I'll explain the sign first; - with/ to, become almost /possibly
1. Kyousuke-Tenma & Aoi-Taiyo Aoi-Kyousuke
2. Shindou-Ranmaru & Hikaru-Kariya Kariya-Ranmaru, Hikaru-Shindou Yamana-Shindou
That's all that I got in this story. But ya lucky I can hold my angry and mad this time because the number 1. But I found there's (not just big) many misunderstanding here at number 2. expect the plus (now you know why I arrange them in number)
8/21/2012 c2 shiroi white-phoenix
Love triangle? Did ya mean, Kyousuke- Tenma/Yukiko- Shindou? I thought like this because the sentences that said that Tenma/Yukiko (I'll prefer used Tenma to Yukiko) seemed hurt because Shindou was spoke to Kyousuke? Never mind that. But this story wasn't bad either. Pfft! I really got a picture in my mind; Tsurugi Kyousuke blushed when he saw the beautiful girl version of Matsukaze Tenma. BWAHAHAHAHA! He just looked so priceless! Hahaha! But this one wasn't too bad anyway...O.O
Love triangle? Did ya mean, Kyousuke- Tenma/Yukiko- Shindou? I thought like this because the sentences that said that Tenma/Yukiko (I'll prefer used Tenma to Yukiko) seemed hurt because Shindou was spoke to Kyousuke? Never mind that. But this story wasn't bad either. Pfft! I really got a picture in my mind; Tsurugi Kyousuke blushed when he saw the beautiful girl version of Matsukaze Tenma. BWAHAHAHAHA! He just looked so priceless! Hahaha! But this one wasn't too bad anyway...O.O
8/21/2012 c1 shiroi white-phoenix
What the hell since when Tenma turned to a girl? He's a boy as long as I knew and the uke of Tsurugi Kyousuke! But I can't deny Tenma sure match as a girl but I just can't figure it out... OAO Gak! Sorry! To honest! My crazy usually...
What the hell since when Tenma turned to a girl? He's a boy as long as I knew and the uke of Tsurugi Kyousuke! But I can't deny Tenma sure match as a girl but I just can't figure it out... OAO Gak! Sorry! To honest! My crazy usually...
3/25/2012 c7 6Katsura-Tenshi
That was EPIC! I really like ending, and so the whole fic! I enjoyed reading this! :D Thumbs up and keep up the good work!
6Katsura-TenshiThat was EPIC! I really like ending, and so the whole fic! I enjoyed reading this! :D Thumbs up and keep up the good work!
3/24/2012 c7 34Floric1434
Flo: LOLOLOL BUAKAKAKA TAIYOU YOU SLY GUY XD
And stupid Hyoudou 8I
Pfftt poor Takuto again XD
BUAKAKAKA I FEEL SORRY FOR MINAMISAWA OH MY GAWD XD
Epic last chapter is epic XD
And wise words Kurama, wise words .w.
34Floric1434Flo: LOLOLOL BUAKAKAKA TAIYOU YOU SLY GUY XD
And stupid Hyoudou 8I
Pfftt poor Takuto again XD
BUAKAKAKA I FEEL SORRY FOR MINAMISAWA OH MY GAWD XD
Epic last chapter is epic XD
And wise words Kurama, wise words .w.
2/12/2012 c4 15LiLy Mon'Roe
GOMEN MINNA! THE LAST REVIEW FOR CHAPTER 6 HAVE SOME MISTAKE. I'M A HUGE FAN OF TSURUGIXTENMA SO WHEN I READ THE REVIEW AGAIN I WAS BANGING MY HEAD ON THE WALL SEVERAL TIMES BECAUSE I HAD MADE A HUGE MISTAKE! GOMEN!
15LiLy Mon'RoeGOMEN MINNA! THE LAST REVIEW FOR CHAPTER 6 HAVE SOME MISTAKE. I'M A HUGE FAN OF TSURUGIXTENMA SO WHEN I READ THE REVIEW AGAIN I WAS BANGING MY HEAD ON THE WALL SEVERAL TIMES BECAUSE I HAD MADE A HUGE MISTAKE! GOMEN!