for ForceBalancePush12/1/2012 c44
1Baby Fawn
ohhhhhhh getting good i am waiting for more dragon born farts to come along that song got me laughing clear back in the chapters. and i dont know why but you really made that song more fun
1Baby Fawnohhhhhhh getting good i am waiting for more dragon born farts to come along that song got me laughing clear back in the chapters. and i dont know why but you really made that song more fun
12/1/2012 c44
4White Wolf Writers
Oh my god! Cliffhanger, how I hate thee!
You HAVE to update soon. I love Lianna and her short temper and the hell she's putting Ulfric through. I'll be waiting!
4White Wolf WritersOh my god! Cliffhanger, how I hate thee!
You HAVE to update soon. I love Lianna and her short temper and the hell she's putting Ulfric through. I'll be waiting!
11/30/2012 c44
2HereLies
I think you should write whatever Ulfric & Lianna tell you to write. And if that's where their relationship goes, I think it'd be okay, because it's obviously be part of the story and not just smut for smut's sake. (Not that there's anything wrong with that!)
2HereLiesI think you should write whatever Ulfric & Lianna tell you to write. And if that's where their relationship goes, I think it'd be okay, because it's obviously be part of the story and not just smut for smut's sake. (Not that there's anything wrong with that!)
11/30/2012 c44
2Tinowenn
I think the level of intensity for those things you just said is high enough. Don't go any further... please :)
Interesting, but horny, chapter by the way :)
2TinowennI think the level of intensity for those things you just said is high enough. Don't go any further... please :)
Interesting, but horny, chapter by the way :)
11/30/2012 c44
1SarahMayy
Loveee this story I avidly check ny email everyday for updates, smut smutt :D id love a smut scene. But beautiful writing !
1SarahMayyLoveee this story I avidly check ny email everyday for updates, smut smutt :D id love a smut scene. But beautiful writing !
11/30/2012 c44
4ehlnofex
Great, great chapter! You're so great at putting human emotions into writing. I literally held my breath when Ulfric grabbed Lianna. I also laughed at Fifty Shades of Stormcloak. :) But in regards of the sexuality, I don't think it's getting too smut. You write it in a really classy manor, not like "Ulfric wantd 2 slam Lianna so hrd" or anything like that hahah. Great! Can't wait for the next chapter :)
4ehlnofexGreat, great chapter! You're so great at putting human emotions into writing. I literally held my breath when Ulfric grabbed Lianna. I also laughed at Fifty Shades of Stormcloak. :) But in regards of the sexuality, I don't think it's getting too smut. You write it in a really classy manor, not like "Ulfric wantd 2 slam Lianna so hrd" or anything like that hahah. Great! Can't wait for the next chapter :)
11/30/2012 c44
7BrunetteAuthorette99
Ooh, Ulfric's getting jealous... ("Fifty Shades of Stormcloak" - LOL!) And I have to wonder about that scream... a victim of the Butcher, perhaps?
PS. That is one of my favorite songs!
7BrunetteAuthorette99Ooh, Ulfric's getting jealous... ("Fifty Shades of Stormcloak" - LOL!) And I have to wonder about that scream... a victim of the Butcher, perhaps?
PS. That is one of my favorite songs!
11/24/2012 c43
1SarahMayy
ahhhhhh I ship it so hard, im dying for a lianna/ulfric smut scene now. I love your writing ,keep it up!I just reread the whole thing xD
1SarahMayyahhhhhh I ship it so hard, im dying for a lianna/ulfric smut scene now. I love your writing ,keep it up!I just reread the whole thing xD
11/17/2012 c43
9skyflower51
...?!
Did I just read the words 'How is that possible?' when you asked how 50 thousand people could have looked at this fic? If you seriously are asking that, looks like I'll have to answer... BECAUSE IT'S AMAZING! The characters are perfect, the plot is beautiful, and the writing style is wonderful. That's why 50 thousand people have looked at it: it's one of the best fanfictions ever written. XD
9skyflower51...?!
Did I just read the words 'How is that possible?' when you asked how 50 thousand people could have looked at this fic? If you seriously are asking that, looks like I'll have to answer... BECAUSE IT'S AMAZING! The characters are perfect, the plot is beautiful, and the writing style is wonderful. That's why 50 thousand people have looked at it: it's one of the best fanfictions ever written. XD
11/17/2012 c43
4ehlnofex
Oh my god...so good. I'm literally in awe! Almost in tears for that last dialogue. :))) can't wait for the next!
4ehlnofexOh my god...so good. I'm literally in awe! Almost in tears for that last dialogue. :))) can't wait for the next!
11/17/2012 c43
7BrunetteAuthorette99
Gah! With an ending like that, I need moar chapters!
I seriously love this fanfic and when the alert popped up in my inbox (before work, I might add), I just about died from happiness. :D So thanks for making my day.
PS. Our tastes in music continue to align...
7BrunetteAuthorette99Gah! With an ending like that, I need moar chapters!
I seriously love this fanfic and when the alert popped up in my inbox (before work, I might add), I just about died from happiness. :D So thanks for making my day.
PS. Our tastes in music continue to align...
11/2/2012 c42 Pint-sized She-Bear
Can't wait for the next chapter. I dread what happens when Galmar and Ulfric discover what she is hiding.
Can't wait for the next chapter. I dread what happens when Galmar and Ulfric discover what she is hiding.
