for my eternal dark fire1/7/2012 c2 MoonlightPoppins
I have never seen Star Wars so... Umm good work on the Star Wars side? But I think you missed Mary Poppins' character's personality completely... Mary is more prim and proper...Practically Perfect you could say. So... Good job? Well, since I don't really know, good effort:)
I have never seen Star Wars so... Umm good work on the Star Wars side? But I think you missed Mary Poppins' character's personality completely... Mary is more prim and proper...Practically Perfect you could say. So... Good job? Well, since I don't really know, good effort:)
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