for Dark Energy 2: Trail of Shadows5/20 c28 Crescantre
Hm, definitely just a teensy change in the Shadow Broker's death *grin* Good take on it.
Hm, definitely just a teensy change in the Shadow Broker's death *grin* Good take on it.
5/18 c69 Guest
Small mention of smexy on chapter 69 lol I know I'm dirty..
Small mention of smexy on chapter 69 lol I know I'm dirty..
5/4 c27 Crescantre
Well, Liara didn't kick it but Shepard deserves a kick.
Love the fact that Garrus carried her out.
Well, Liara didn't kick it but Shepard deserves a kick.
Love the fact that Garrus carried her out.
5/3 c25 Crescantre
One thing about Shepard, she always knows how to make an entrance be it in Liara's apartment or the Dracon.
Interesting start to the chapter and curious question Kelly poses. Gotta wonder what you're seeding ;)
One thing about Shepard, she always knows how to make an entrance be it in Liara's apartment or the Dracon.
Interesting start to the chapter and curious question Kelly poses. Gotta wonder what you're seeding ;)
5/2 c24 Crescantre
So good. Definitely didn't disappoint. Interesting that Miranda ends up glueing everything together.
So good. Definitely didn't disappoint. Interesting that Miranda ends up glueing everything together.
5/2 c23 Crescantre
Hectic what happened to Shepard. Really good. Did Miranda's loyalty mission justice. Couldn't have her be more awkward in the end :)
Hectic what happened to Shepard. Really good. Did Miranda's loyalty mission justice. Couldn't have her be more awkward in the end :)
74/29 c22 Crescantre
Definitely not dinner material. Very interested to read more. I love Shep's identification. Nice.
Definitely not dinner material. Very interested to read more. I love Shep's identification. Nice.
4/28 c21 Crescantre
Interesting that Hock managed to get one up on Shepard, sly the guy was. But that he was waiting for Kasumi was also rather interesting. Guess it takes a thief to catch a thief... although the description of him should actually be quite a bit worse.
Gellian's death was very hard. Well done. I wonder how that will shape both Eir and Thug.
Interesting that Hock managed to get one up on Shepard, sly the guy was. But that he was waiting for Kasumi was also rather interesting. Guess it takes a thief to catch a thief... although the description of him should actually be quite a bit worse.
Gellian's death was very hard. Well done. I wonder how that will shape both Eir and Thug.
4/28 c20 Crescantre
Very interesting little situation Eir finds herself in. Mother is going to be supremely pissed, yesh she is.
Afrikaans. South Africa.
I read that. Reread that. Reread it again. Then promptly freaked out. Couldn't help myself. Represent!
Oh wait he's a bastard. Er... not so much represent then brudda.
I love Shepard's reaction to Finn Janu and her thoughts. That made me laugh out loud.
As did the giggle. Loved it all.
Very interesting little situation Eir finds herself in. Mother is going to be supremely pissed, yesh she is.
Afrikaans. South Africa.
I read that. Reread that. Reread it again. Then promptly freaked out. Couldn't help myself. Represent!
Oh wait he's a bastard. Er... not so much represent then brudda.
I love Shepard's reaction to Finn Janu and her thoughts. That made me laugh out loud.
As did the giggle. Loved it all.
4/25 c64 march4fun
Great party. Kinda reminds me of the Citadel DLC. Good to know that the relationship between Liara and Del is going just fine. I was hoping we would get to actually see the crew being taken, but whatever. This is still my favorite series on fanfic.
P.S. - Shepard can dance? BLASPHEMY!
Great party. Kinda reminds me of the Citadel DLC. Good to know that the relationship between Liara and Del is going just fine. I was hoping we would get to actually see the crew being taken, but whatever. This is still my favorite series on fanfic.
P.S. - Shepard can dance? BLASPHEMY!
4/22 c19 Crescantre
I really enjoy Del's responses to Jack. She seems to be speaking the same language and not just the same type ;) Lots of things in this chapter one could comment on. Kasumi's voice is very clear and unique from everyone else's. Mordin's rhythm is well captured. Love the description of the dress.
The fight at the end between Shrive and Eir was very well done. One could see what's happening - not an easy feat when it comes to fights and movement.
I really enjoy Del's responses to Jack. She seems to be speaking the same language and not just the same type ;) Lots of things in this chapter one could comment on. Kasumi's voice is very clear and unique from everyone else's. Mordin's rhythm is well captured. Love the description of the dress.
The fight at the end between Shrive and Eir was very well done. One could see what's happening - not an easy feat when it comes to fights and movement.
4/22 c58 march4fun
(Throws head back and screams) NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO-
(derp inhale)
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!
(Throws head back and screams) NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO-
(derp inhale)
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!