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2/2/2012 c2 1die-hard-4-anime
This is freakin hilarious! Next time Christmas you should continue this!
12/25/2011 c2 St. Iggy the Pyro
The rhyming...

...confuses me...

I find myself having

To go back and see

Just exactly

What rhymes with what

If everything lines up

Or if it does not.

So many questions

And answers so little

(like Ed...)

Will Al show Roy how to play fiddle?

Or will he show Roy his past

And then leave him alone

Is it just me

Or will Ed be the next ghost?

Will you ever tell us

Why a Christmas Carol you off you did rip?

Will Edward get to play

Small Tiny Tim?

For Christmas like me

Does Al want a cat?

Ok I'm random

But I guess you knew that

What i'm trying to say

In this endless review

That I think this is good; please continue

Now I have one more thing to say

Just for you; to spite

Merry Christmas to all

And to all a good night!
12/23/2011 c1 mangagirl135
Hi! Nice job with the first chapter. Very nice job. I think this is going to be a great story and I can't wait to read more. I usually don't like to read a story with rhyming, but you pulled it off. Great job!

Write on!

~MC

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