for A Little Magic2/2/2012 c2
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This is freakin hilarious! Next time Christmas you should continue this!
1die-hard-4-animeThis is freakin hilarious! Next time Christmas you should continue this!
12/25/2011 c2 St. Iggy the Pyro
The rhyming...
...confuses me...
I find myself having
To go back and see
Just exactly
What rhymes with what
If everything lines up
Or if it does not.
So many questions
And answers so little
(like Ed...)
Will Al show Roy how to play fiddle?
Or will he show Roy his past
And then leave him alone
Is it just me
Or will Ed be the next ghost?
Will you ever tell us
Why a Christmas Carol you off you did rip?
Will Edward get to play
Small Tiny Tim?
For Christmas like me
Does Al want a cat?
Ok I'm random
But I guess you knew that
What i'm trying to say
In this endless review
That I think this is good; please continue
Now I have one more thing to say
Just for you; to spite
Merry Christmas to all
And to all a good night!
The rhyming...
...confuses me...
I find myself having
To go back and see
Just exactly
What rhymes with what
If everything lines up
Or if it does not.
So many questions
And answers so little
(like Ed...)
Will Al show Roy how to play fiddle?
Or will he show Roy his past
And then leave him alone
Is it just me
Or will Ed be the next ghost?
Will you ever tell us
Why a Christmas Carol you off you did rip?
Will Edward get to play
Small Tiny Tim?
For Christmas like me
Does Al want a cat?
Ok I'm random
But I guess you knew that
What i'm trying to say
In this endless review
That I think this is good; please continue
Now I have one more thing to say
Just for you; to spite
Merry Christmas to all
And to all a good night!
12/23/2011 c1 mangagirl135
Hi! Nice job with the first chapter. Very nice job. I think this is going to be a great story and I can't wait to read more. I usually don't like to read a story with rhyming, but you pulled it off. Great job!
Write on!
~MC
Hi! Nice job with the first chapter. Very nice job. I think this is going to be a great story and I can't wait to read more. I usually don't like to read a story with rhyming, but you pulled it off. Great job!
Write on!
~MC
