for A New Enemy Arising: The Cave of Dreams4/10 c6 
19Chinese girl 50
What a great chapter! I can't wait for the next!
And when will Sabina talk with her love interest?
Thanks, and can't wait for the next chapter! :)
19Chinese girl 50What a great chapter! I can't wait for the next!
And when will Sabina talk with her love interest?
Thanks, and can't wait for the next chapter! :)
4/7 c5 Guest
Please CONTINUE this. PLEASE
Please CONTINUE this. PLEASE
3/10 c5 We'll Fight Till The End
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE. MY LIFE DEPENDS ON THIS. PLEASE
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE. MY LIFE DEPENDS ON THIS. PLEASE
1/31 c5 guest
interesting,update soon!
interesting,update soon!
1/31 c5 Chinese girl 50
OMR! This chapter rocks! Char, this is amazing! :D Cant wait for the next chapter!
OMR! This chapter rocks! Char, this is amazing! :D Cant wait for the next chapter!
12/27/2012 c4 Charmes4ever
Thank God I finally got to log in!
Just like my previous anonymous reviews, this is heartbreaking!
Thank God I finally got to log in!
Just like my previous anonymous reviews, this is heartbreaking!
12/8/2012 c4 PercabethRulez18
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!
CHARMES SHOULD PREVAIL!
I hate how Charisse forgot Hermes.
I hate how romantic ChaWill moment is.
I hate how Will loves Charisse and not m-
Anyways, the visions are great! I love how 'Herms' and 'Riz' walked away hand in hand after the guy pushed her to the lake (just like what Hermes did to Charisse). Amazing!
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!
CHARMES SHOULD PREVAIL!
I hate how Charisse forgot Hermes.
I hate how romantic ChaWill moment is.
I hate how Will loves Charisse and not m-
Anyways, the visions are great! I love how 'Herms' and 'Riz' walked away hand in hand after the guy pushed her to the lake (just like what Hermes did to Charisse). Amazing!
12/8/2012 c4 CaduceusRoses
Good review Charmesever&ever. ;) I completely agree with you. Even if the Charmes moment is heartbreaking and ChaWill moment a quite romantic one, this chapter's still good. I'm liking where the story is heading to. ;)
I know there's a valid reason with Charisse's amnesia. I already know that something was wrong from the start and my theory was right.
Like everyone else, I'm requesting for a special chapter in retelling this chapter in Hermes's POV.
Good review Charmesever&ever. ;) I completely agree with you. Even if the Charmes moment is heartbreaking and ChaWill moment a quite romantic one, this chapter's still good. I'm liking where the story is heading to. ;)
I know there's a valid reason with Charisse's amnesia. I already know that something was wrong from the start and my theory was right.
Like everyone else, I'm requesting for a special chapter in retelling this chapter in Hermes's POV.
12/8/2012 c4 Charmeseverever
Guys, GUYS! *shouts at everyone* Come on, give PR328 a break! This is a part of the story, to make it more interesting. It's not because she's cruel and prefers Will over Hermes. She's just adding more drama, and I bet 100 bucks that you all find it interesting and intriguing that Charisse had forgotten Hermes.
Everyone: *nods*
Good.
Anyway, this chapter's great and awesome! I love how it is written! The ChaWill moment is described so well I almost liked Will! Almost. The friendship that had been developed between Charisse and Sabina is good too! But I can't deny the fact that the Charmes moment made me cry in pain. Hermes doesn't deserve such a thing!
The visions are undeniably great! I love how Hermes pushed Charisse, making her see a vision where 'Herms' also pushed 'Riz' in the lake. There's something you're implying in there, right? *wink wink*
I can't wait for the next chapter! But I'd really like to see the POV of Hermes throughout that heartbreaking Charmes moment.
Guys, GUYS! *shouts at everyone* Come on, give PR328 a break! This is a part of the story, to make it more interesting. It's not because she's cruel and prefers Will over Hermes. She's just adding more drama, and I bet 100 bucks that you all find it interesting and intriguing that Charisse had forgotten Hermes.
Everyone: *nods*
Good.
Anyway, this chapter's great and awesome! I love how it is written! The ChaWill moment is described so well I almost liked Will! Almost. The friendship that had been developed between Charisse and Sabina is good too! But I can't deny the fact that the Charmes moment made me cry in pain. Hermes doesn't deserve such a thing!
The visions are undeniably great! I love how Hermes pushed Charisse, making her see a vision where 'Herms' also pushed 'Riz' in the lake. There's something you're implying in there, right? *wink wink*
I can't wait for the next chapter! But I'd really like to see the POV of Hermes throughout that heartbreaking Charmes moment.
12/8/2012 c4 Ilovemysister
*sobs* My heart was just grabbed out of my chest, thrown on the ground and got stomped. Just like everyone else, I grieve for Hermes. It must've hurt a lot to see the one you love not remembering you! *cries* That is just horrible! :"O
The visions are great, I love it!
I hate the circumstances and the problems!
I have so many questions in my mind! Why did Charisse forget Hermes? What's Hermes's reaction? What'll happen now to Charmes?
By the love of Charmes, PR328, I beg you with everything I have and with all my heart, please, PLEASE, end this suffering and just let Charisse remember Hermes! Even just a tiny speck that'll make her realize she doesn't like Will but Hermes!
*sobs* My heart was just grabbed out of my chest, thrown on the ground and got stomped. Just like everyone else, I grieve for Hermes. It must've hurt a lot to see the one you love not remembering you! *cries* That is just horrible! :"O
The visions are great, I love it!
I hate the circumstances and the problems!
I have so many questions in my mind! Why did Charisse forget Hermes? What's Hermes's reaction? What'll happen now to Charmes?
By the love of Charmes, PR328, I beg you with everything I have and with all my heart, please, PLEASE, end this suffering and just let Charisse remember Hermes! Even just a tiny speck that'll make her realize she doesn't like Will but Hermes!
12/8/2012 c4 Ilovestories
THIS. IS. THE. MOST. HEARTBREAKING. CHAPTER. YOU'VE. EVER. WRITTEN!
Charisse should remember Hermes! She has to be! By the love of Charmes, I hope this is not the end of their love! After that first meeting, finding each other again and barely had a conversation, met up again but only for a few minutes and finally saving her- after all of the things they've been through, this is just going to happen?
WAAHHHH! *sobs* Poor Hermes! I can feel his despair!
But, at least, the visions Charisse had about something in the future and the past are totally cool. It made me forget of Charisse's amnesia. At least, for awhile.
PLEASE UPDATE! I want to know more!
THIS. IS. THE. MOST. HEARTBREAKING. CHAPTER. YOU'VE. EVER. WRITTEN!
Charisse should remember Hermes! She has to be! By the love of Charmes, I hope this is not the end of their love! After that first meeting, finding each other again and barely had a conversation, met up again but only for a few minutes and finally saving her- after all of the things they've been through, this is just going to happen?
WAAHHHH! *sobs* Poor Hermes! I can feel his despair!
But, at least, the visions Charisse had about something in the future and the past are totally cool. It made me forget of Charisse's amnesia. At least, for awhile.
PLEASE UPDATE! I want to know more!
12/7/2012 c4 CharmesLover
I'm feeling very angst-y too. What happened to Charmes was horrible and heartbreaking! I can imagine Charmes4ever, forgetting all of the things that we ever had, and then when I'll talk to her after a lot of months not seeing her and expecting everything will turn back to normal, when I'll see I am wrong for the girl I only love never remember me. I can feel what Hermes felt and I'd like to request a special chapter where this chapter was retold in his POV.
Poor Hermes.
I'm feeling very angst-y too. What happened to Charmes was horrible and heartbreaking! I can imagine Charmes4ever, forgetting all of the things that we ever had, and then when I'll talk to her after a lot of months not seeing her and expecting everything will turn back to normal, when I'll see I am wrong for the girl I only love never remember me. I can feel what Hermes felt and I'd like to request a special chapter where this chapter was retold in his POV.
Poor Hermes.
12/7/2012 c4 Charmes4ever
WWWHHHYYY? WWWHHHYYY? WHY MUST YOU DO THIS TO ME PR328? Y-YOU *sniff* ALMOST RUINED CHARMES! How can Charisse forget Hermes? And I hate that ChaWill moment! It should be Hermes, not Will! But my most hated part is when Charisse told Hermes she doesn't know him! My heart was just torn into pieces! *cries*
But the visions of Charisse are really cool! It almost made me happy since there's a chance Charmes will still be together in the end! Well, almost. I'm still in an angst-y mood right now. Thanks for the fact Charisse forgot Hermes and there was a ChaWill moment.
WWWHHHYYY? WWWHHHYYY? WHY MUST YOU DO THIS TO ME PR328? Y-YOU *sniff* ALMOST RUINED CHARMES! How can Charisse forget Hermes? And I hate that ChaWill moment! It should be Hermes, not Will! But my most hated part is when Charisse told Hermes she doesn't know him! My heart was just torn into pieces! *cries*
But the visions of Charisse are really cool! It almost made me happy since there's a chance Charmes will still be together in the end! Well, almost. I'm still in an angst-y mood right now. Thanks for the fact Charisse forgot Hermes and there was a ChaWill moment.
12/7/2012 c3 PercabethRulez18
Just like Ilovestories, Ilovemysister, Charmesever&ever and Caduceus&Roses, I hate the limit and have to change my username from 'Percabeth Rulez 817' to 'PercabethRulez18'.
THIS IS GREAT AND EXCELLENT! SOOOOOOOOOOO GOOOOOOOOOD!
Just like Ilovestories, Ilovemysister, Charmesever&ever and Caduceus&Roses, I hate the limit and have to change my username from 'Percabeth Rulez 817' to 'PercabethRulez18'.
THIS IS GREAT AND EXCELLENT! SOOOOOOOOOOO GOOOOOOOOOD!
12/7/2012 c3 CaduceusRoses
I also agree with Ilovestories, Ilovemysister and Charmesever&ever. I also have to change my username from 'WithCaduceusandPurpleRoses' to 'Caduceus&Roses'.
Just like everyone else said, this is amazing.
I also agree with Ilovestories, Ilovemysister and Charmesever&ever. I also have to change my username from 'WithCaduceusandPurpleRoses' to 'Caduceus&Roses'.
Just like everyone else said, this is amazing.