for Enough4/22 c13 Guest
this is my favorite fic ever would really love to see it finished
this is my favorite fic ever would really love to see it finished
1/31 c13 
6Crimson and Chrome 42
This has been an amazing read...the emotions that you have brought out (they were always there, just as long as someone was paying attention, which you obviously were) not only jump off the screen, are written in such a way that the reader feels them as if they are that character. Good job! I would love to read an update soon.
6Crimson and Chrome 42This has been an amazing read...the emotions that you have brought out (they were always there, just as long as someone was paying attention, which you obviously were) not only jump off the screen, are written in such a way that the reader feels them as if they are that character. Good job! I would love to read an update soon.
9/29/2012 c1 Beck
Please update this story. I know its been some time since your last update but please pretty please.
Please update this story. I know its been some time since your last update but please pretty please.
8/6/2012 c13 1ROCKTHEWORLD300
Wow just finished you have so far and I can't wait for the next chapter...hope it comes out soon
1ROCKTHEWORLD300Wow just finished you have so far and I can't wait for the next chapter...hope it comes out soon
7/29/2012 c13 2wprincessannw
so glad you updated! and I look forward to seeing Hyde try!
btw - the couple that should have been the endgame are always screwed up w/ greedy people keep shows going on to long or (in my opinion, on that 70's show) are afraid of having their characters evolve. Sucks but thats why fanfic are so much better!
2wprincessannwso glad you updated! and I look forward to seeing Hyde try!
btw - the couple that should have been the endgame are always screwed up w/ greedy people keep shows going on to long or (in my opinion, on that 70's show) are afraid of having their characters evolve. Sucks but thats why fanfic are so much better!
7/23/2012 c13 6schottzie
So glad to see you updated! I loved Kitty and Leo's advice to Hyde. He was terrible to Jackie and he needs to make it up to her. The line about forgetting what he needed is so true. Can't wait for more!
6schottzieSo glad to see you updated! I loved Kitty and Leo's advice to Hyde. He was terrible to Jackie and he needs to make it up to her. The line about forgetting what he needed is so true. Can't wait for more!
7/22/2012 c13 kayjay
I so agree with you. I can't read a fic that is not in character and couldn't have happened withing the confines of the show. Why bother calling it a JH fic if Hyde is a super hero or Jackie is an actress. That could be anybody. I especially don't like when writers insert new characters ( usually themselves) into Point Place. It's just wrong. That's why there's only a very few fics that I read, mostly you and Shanghai Lily right now. That said...
I love this fic. You write so beautifully and really get inside the characters heads and reveal their motivations. The end product for true JH shippers is reuniting them and I can't wait for your version of events.
Hope your personal situations work themselves out.
I so agree with you. I can't read a fic that is not in character and couldn't have happened withing the confines of the show. Why bother calling it a JH fic if Hyde is a super hero or Jackie is an actress. That could be anybody. I especially don't like when writers insert new characters ( usually themselves) into Point Place. It's just wrong. That's why there's only a very few fics that I read, mostly you and Shanghai Lily right now. That said...
I love this fic. You write so beautifully and really get inside the characters heads and reveal their motivations. The end product for true JH shippers is reuniting them and I can't wait for your version of events.
Hope your personal situations work themselves out.
7/21/2012 c13 Guest
Great update! I know the reconcilation isn't going to happen over night, but when it does, I have a feeling it will be epic:)
Great update! I know the reconcilation isn't going to happen over night, but when it does, I have a feeling it will be epic:)
7/21/2012 c13 17Dramamamapwnsall
Well, it's about damn time!
Anyways, I want to find out what happens next, so update soon, 'kay?
17DramamamapwnsallWell, it's about damn time!
Anyways, I want to find out what happens next, so update soon, 'kay?
7/21/2012 c13 Marla's Lost
"You know, Steven," she began. "The opposite of love isn't hate. It's indifference." Loved this line
"You know, Steven," she began. "The opposite of love isn't hate. It's indifference." Loved this line
7/21/2012 c13 Guest
Yay another awesome chapter after an extended hiatus. Loved it. Can't wait till next time. Hope and pray your personal stuff gets better.
Yay another awesome chapter after an extended hiatus. Loved it. Can't wait till next time. Hope and pray your personal stuff gets better.
7/6/2012 c12 Guest
Please please update soon! I love this story such! You're an amazing writer. I love how in depth you go to express the characters feeling and thoughs.
Please please update soon! I love this story such! You're an amazing writer. I love how in depth you go to express the characters feeling and thoughs.