for Moon4/21 c14 
1Sloan Kirkenslager
So I feel like this review might be a bit too blunt and I'm sorry, I just wanted to let you know in advance I can be harsh. You do not have to read this.
In the beginning of the story I liked it. I wanted to read more, to see how Celeste and Farkas' relationship developed and it was cute. Him being an oaf and her having that shy but slightly playful nature. But you kept all hints of anything being odd out for too long. And then when you had Celeste going to meet the Companions and she was getting all weird it was just to wrong. I didn't like her whole secret history or her sudden changes in nature. To me, her lies and then not being anything like what Farkas had fallen in love with made it too bizarre when he is ok with it. Farkas is kind and sweet but I don't know if anyone would be so ok with that sort of sideways betrayal. So many times he loved that she had "never harmed a fly". I think I might have just had a problem with the liberties you took with Skyrim. I respect that this is your own work but I felt like you made it a different universe and it was weird to have the characters I know in such a different place.
I didn't finish reading because I just didn't like it enough. I'm so sorry. I know that an author's story means the world to them and you write well, it just wasn't my cup of tea. Best of luck in future endeavors and may the Gods watch over your battles friend.
1Sloan KirkenslagerSo I feel like this review might be a bit too blunt and I'm sorry, I just wanted to let you know in advance I can be harsh. You do not have to read this.
In the beginning of the story I liked it. I wanted to read more, to see how Celeste and Farkas' relationship developed and it was cute. Him being an oaf and her having that shy but slightly playful nature. But you kept all hints of anything being odd out for too long. And then when you had Celeste going to meet the Companions and she was getting all weird it was just to wrong. I didn't like her whole secret history or her sudden changes in nature. To me, her lies and then not being anything like what Farkas had fallen in love with made it too bizarre when he is ok with it. Farkas is kind and sweet but I don't know if anyone would be so ok with that sort of sideways betrayal. So many times he loved that she had "never harmed a fly". I think I might have just had a problem with the liberties you took with Skyrim. I respect that this is your own work but I felt like you made it a different universe and it was weird to have the characters I know in such a different place.
I didn't finish reading because I just didn't like it enough. I'm so sorry. I know that an author's story means the world to them and you write well, it just wasn't my cup of tea. Best of luck in future endeavors and may the Gods watch over your battles friend.
11/3/2012 c9 13Hiddengrace
I'm really liking it so far and I'm not big into werewolf stories. Pretty good writing, but I wish you were more constant with tenses.
13HiddengraceI'm really liking it so far and I'm not big into werewolf stories. Pretty good writing, but I wish you were more constant with tenses.
11/2/2012 c14 4mALX
This story was spectacular! I couldn't stop reading from the time I started. You have a gift of being able to manipulate emotions and mood in a flash from one paragraph to the next, and in such a smooth transition that the reader is swept along. Awesome write!
On top of that is your world building with the werewolves - the bond, the actions and behavioral meanings - Huge Write! I absolutely LOVE this story!
4mALXThis story was spectacular! I couldn't stop reading from the time I started. You have a gift of being able to manipulate emotions and mood in a flash from one paragraph to the next, and in such a smooth transition that the reader is swept along. Awesome write!
On top of that is your world building with the werewolves - the bond, the actions and behavioral meanings - Huge Write! I absolutely LOVE this story!
3/29/2012 c13 lynn-writer
"Fine," She said, in the way only a woman can say it- in which the word doesn't actually mean 'fine', but 'fuck you!'
LMAO
"Fine," She said, in the way only a woman can say it- in which the word doesn't actually mean 'fine', but 'fuck you!'
LMAO
1/23/2012 c13 1SsjAndromeda
GAAH, now I'm hooked! I can't wait for the next update. (Poor Farkas. I can just visualize him at this point trying to pack her up, carry her home and say "Stay!" Where its safe of course.)
1SsjAndromedaGAAH, now I'm hooked! I can't wait for the next update. (Poor Farkas. I can just visualize him at this point trying to pack her up, carry her home and say "Stay!" Where its safe of course.)
1/13/2012 c13 27HopelessRomantic1818
...-_- Cliff hanger person! Grrr!~ :P Fine, you can put a cliff hanger there, but don't drive me nuts with it XD
27HopelessRomantic1818...-_- Cliff hanger person! Grrr!~ :P Fine, you can put a cliff hanger there, but don't drive me nuts with it XD