for The Hawk and the Moon2/14 c1 KGC112
The first chapter seemed EXTREMLY rushed. Why were Hawk and Lunar accepted so quickly by Thunderclan? And don't medicine cat apprentices get to choose to be a medicine cat?
The first chapter seemed EXTREMLY rushed. Why were Hawk and Lunar accepted so quickly by Thunderclan? And don't medicine cat apprentices get to choose to be a medicine cat?
1/4 c3 
14frostedbloodinthedark
OMG, you don't know! They are exactally right! Dovewing and Ivypool! Did you just guess?
14frostedbloodinthedarkOMG, you don't know! They are exactally right! Dovewing and Ivypool! Did you just guess?
1/3 c30 4Looking For Something New
OH MY GODS! You ish back! YAY! Pwease pwease pwetty [wease wiv a chewwy ontop dont kill hakwy!
4Looking For Something NewOH MY GODS! You ish back! YAY! Pwease pwease pwetty [wease wiv a chewwy ontop dont kill hakwy!
1/3 c15 12Icetail of WindClan - Meta-If
Why the heck do I keep thinking Lunartalon instead of Lunarpaw?
12Icetail of WindClan - Meta-IfWhy the heck do I keep thinking Lunartalon instead of Lunarpaw?
1/2 c22 Riverstorm
This is cool
This is cool
12/30/2012 c30 Lunarwing
Hope you enjoy the camp and have a good christmas and awesome new year
Hope you enjoy the camp and have a good christmas and awesome new year
12/28/2012 c29 2SteelLark
Lmfao! Oh god Pancakes. I never thought a simple breakfast food could make me laugh so hard.
2SteelLarkLmfao! Oh god Pancakes. I never thought a simple breakfast food could make me laugh so hard.
12/28/2012 c30 1Lilysplash
Yes that jerk Onestar finally understands! Foxleap is my favorite alongside with Jayfeather! The pancake part, priceless! Update soon!
1LilysplashYes that jerk Onestar finally understands! Foxleap is my favorite alongside with Jayfeather! The pancake part, priceless! Update soon!
12/28/2012 c30 Robinpaw
OH NO!
Hawktalon is having her kits!
Sorry, in my last review, I meant that I often read a story and get small ideas from them, like two Medicine Cat's being mates or something.
Anyway, I have waited so long for more of this story!
Robinpaw
OH NO!
Hawktalon is having her kits!
Sorry, in my last review, I meant that I often read a story and get small ideas from them, like two Medicine Cat's being mates or something.
Anyway, I have waited so long for more of this story!
Robinpaw
12/27/2012 c30 samredlamb7
Too lazy to log in...
I hate Mapleshade.
Kill her please.
Too lazy to log in...
I hate Mapleshade.
Kill her please.