for Calvin and hobbes 48 Hour HOUSE PARTY!9/19/2012 c1 
5ChaosDestruction
Hey, man. I love this story but it's in danger of being deleted because of script format, self-insertion, and being interactive. My advice is to edit the story. I hope this helps.
5ChaosDestructionHey, man. I love this story but it's in danger of being deleted because of script format, self-insertion, and being interactive. My advice is to edit the story. I hope this helps.
8/18/2012 c3 33crazyone256
Calvin...I AM a girl...*Eyes start twitching*
Erik: Now Co calm down...
Co: *growls and take another one's of Colin chips*
Erik: *sighs*
GIr: TACOS!
Co: *starts kolling like Russia from Hetalia, with the same creepy purple aura that can even scare 99.9% on the planet. (Minus Belarus...*shivers she scares me*)
33crazyone256Calvin...I AM a girl...*Eyes start twitching*
Erik: Now Co calm down...
Co: *growls and take another one's of Colin chips*
Erik: *sighs*
GIr: TACOS!
Co: *starts kolling like Russia from Hetalia, with the same creepy purple aura that can even scare 99.9% on the planet. (Minus Belarus...*shivers she scares me*)
7/14/2012 c1 MrGoodyTwoShoes
Entries not allowed:
1. Non-stories: lists, bloopers, polls, previews, challenges, author notes, and etc.
2. One or two liners.
3. MST: comments inserted in between the flow of a copied story.
4. Stories with non-historical and non-fictional characters: actors, musicians, and etc.
5. Any form of interactive entry: choose your adventure, second person/you based, Q&As, and etc.
6. Chat/script format and keyboard dialogue based entries.
Your story is not allowed under section 6 of the guidelines.
Try writing your story like a traditional story and not in script/chat format as stories written like that are not allowed here. Even if you went with 'Calvin said' and 'Dad said' with quotation marks ("") around the dialogue it would be enough to fix it.
MGTS of Fanfiction Renaissance
Entries not allowed:
1. Non-stories: lists, bloopers, polls, previews, challenges, author notes, and etc.
2. One or two liners.
3. MST: comments inserted in between the flow of a copied story.
4. Stories with non-historical and non-fictional characters: actors, musicians, and etc.
5. Any form of interactive entry: choose your adventure, second person/you based, Q&As, and etc.
6. Chat/script format and keyboard dialogue based entries.
Your story is not allowed under section 6 of the guidelines.
Try writing your story like a traditional story and not in script/chat format as stories written like that are not allowed here. Even if you went with 'Calvin said' and 'Dad said' with quotation marks ("") around the dialogue it would be enough to fix it.
MGTS of Fanfiction Renaissance
6/2/2012 c3 NarniaCrazyGirls
Me: Can i join?
Calvin: But you're a girl.
Me: A girl with electric powers and a high temper.
Calvin: no!
Me: I brought my wii and violent video games.
Calvin: I meant NO, come in.
(takes a cookie from GIR)
GIR: Wahhh! my cookie!11
me: Hey have some cake.
GIR: Cake,okay but enxt time ask.
Me: Now where is Scoobycool9?(whispers) and my dad Twiggy
Me: Can i join?
Calvin: But you're a girl.
Me: A girl with electric powers and a high temper.
Calvin: no!
Me: I brought my wii and violent video games.
Calvin: I meant NO, come in.
(takes a cookie from GIR)
GIR: Wahhh! my cookie!11
me: Hey have some cake.
GIR: Cake,okay but enxt time ask.
Me: Now where is Scoobycool9?(whispers) and my dad Twiggy
6/2/2012 c3 17Scoobycool9 and Luckycool9
Can i come? I was at WG'S aprty...come On twiggy/Nightclaw and Lucky and you too Scooby... for my physical description I am perviuan, black hair spiked up, black eeys, a blue tshirt and jeans...Lucky is basically the same just throw on a 30 year old look...Twiggy has blond hair,blue eyes,wears blue, green pants, tall and musclar... and he is a wereowlf as nighclaw with dark fur and blond hair... Well can I sing for the talent show?
17Scoobycool9 and Luckycool9Can i come? I was at WG'S aprty...come On twiggy/Nightclaw and Lucky and you too Scooby... for my physical description I am perviuan, black hair spiked up, black eeys, a blue tshirt and jeans...Lucky is basically the same just throw on a 30 year old look...Twiggy has blond hair,blue eyes,wears blue, green pants, tall and musclar... and he is a wereowlf as nighclaw with dark fur and blond hair... Well can I sing for the talent show?
5/23/2012 c3 Porygon212
Mind if I can join?I can bring everyone their favorite Pokemon and
if mMoe comes...
Moe: Hi there,Tw..
Me: HAXXXX
Moe:( Turns around,see a computer screen coming to him)
Moe: AGHH(Runs away,gets hit by Computer screen)
Mind if I can join?I can bring everyone their favorite Pokemon and
if mMoe comes...
Moe: Hi there,Tw..
Me: HAXXXX
Moe:( Turns around,see a computer screen coming to him)
Moe: AGHH(Runs away,gets hit by Computer screen)
4/12/2012 c3 chorniclesofghosts88
(doorbell rings)
colin: ansered the door to revile teen dress in black "You are?"
cog: I'm chornicleofghosts88 and I broght PIZZA! (huge mountian of pizza in background)
calvin: w00t!
(doorbell rings)
colin: ansered the door to revile teen dress in black "You are?"
cog: I'm chornicleofghosts88 and I broght PIZZA! (huge mountian of pizza in background)
calvin: w00t!
2/3/2012 c2 13Luigi Rocks
A food fight sounds awesome. I can imagine Ed throwing buttered toast and gravy, Double-D freaking out every time he gets dirty and Eddy trying to cheat in some way.
13Luigi RocksA food fight sounds awesome. I can imagine Ed throwing buttered toast and gravy, Double-D freaking out every time he gets dirty and Eddy trying to cheat in some way.
1/31/2012 c2 11darkgirl43255
Hey could I join the party?
Calvin- why would we let you join?
Because I have nachos?
Calvin-good point. :P
11darkgirl43255Hey could I join the party?
Calvin- why would we let you join?
Because I have nachos?
Calvin-good point. :P
1/16/2012 c2 33crazyone256
Co-Gir, why are you making waffles? *Looking at Gir*
Gir-*Turns to Co* BE-CAUSE WAFFLES ARE GOOD!
Co-True buy WHY?
Gir-I LIKE TACOS! *Continues to make waffles*
Co-...*Steals another chip from Colin* Thanks. *Walks away*
Erik-*Rolls eyes that their immaturity*
Co-Any who, I vote we...
Gir-HAVE A FOOD FIGHT! *Throw's a waffle at Erik*
Erik-Why you...*Throws a soda at Gir, but hits Co*
Co-ERIK!*Throws a hot chocolate bomb at Erik, but hit Colin* Whops. :3
Gir-*Stands on table* FFFFFFFFFOOOOOOOOODDDDDDDDDD ! *Throws a waffles at Ed, Edd, Eddy, and FF.
Co-Fun! :3
33crazyone256Co-Gir, why are you making waffles? *Looking at Gir*
Gir-*Turns to Co* BE-CAUSE WAFFLES ARE GOOD!
Co-True buy WHY?
Gir-I LIKE TACOS! *Continues to make waffles*
Co-...*Steals another chip from Colin* Thanks. *Walks away*
Erik-*Rolls eyes that their immaturity*
Co-Any who, I vote we...
Gir-HAVE A FOOD FIGHT! *Throw's a waffle at Erik*
Erik-Why you...*Throws a soda at Gir, but hits Co*
Co-ERIK!*Throws a hot chocolate bomb at Erik, but hit Colin* Whops. :3
Gir-*Stands on table* FFFFFFFFFOOOOOOOOODDDDDDDDDD ! *Throws a waffles at Ed, Edd, Eddy, and FF.
Co-Fun! :3
1/14/2012 c1 11Daethtofools
Can I join the party? I'll bring my Big Daddy, who'll kill anything that threatens me, and hundreds of explosive hot chocolate bombs with a grenade launcher. And also blast through the wall. With tghe chocolate.
LET'S GET THIS PARTY STARTED! XD
- Daethtofools, the Author of INSANITY
11DaethtofoolsCan I join the party? I'll bring my Big Daddy, who'll kill anything that threatens me, and hundreds of explosive hot chocolate bombs with a grenade launcher. And also blast through the wall. With tghe chocolate.
LET'S GET THIS PARTY STARTED! XD
- Daethtofools, the Author of INSANITY
1/9/2012 c1 ScouseJazmin
YAAY I LOVE REVIEWER INCLUDED PARTIES! they're the only parties im invited to...
I COME BEARING WMDS, WATERSLIDES, KARAOKE, MAGICAL POWERS AND RAP BACKERS! (hidden in the boot. Hey, its a party, who knows what might happen?)
SJ: WOOT! PARTY!
Calvin: ... can you leave please?
SJ: umm... I have WMDs?
Calvin: WOOT! PARTY!
Rap Backers: WOOT!
SJ: -_-. Get back in the car.
Rap Backers: But we cant breathe! Two of us have died already!
SJ: Get back in the boot, and I might get you tacos on the way back. If you get back NAO!
Rap Backers: WOOT! TACOS!
SJ: *Magically locks all rap backers inside* MWAHAHA
YAAY I LOVE REVIEWER INCLUDED PARTIES! they're the only parties im invited to...
I COME BEARING WMDS, WATERSLIDES, KARAOKE, MAGICAL POWERS AND RAP BACKERS! (hidden in the boot. Hey, its a party, who knows what might happen?)
SJ: WOOT! PARTY!
Calvin: ... can you leave please?
SJ: umm... I have WMDs?
Calvin: WOOT! PARTY!
Rap Backers: WOOT!
SJ: -_-. Get back in the car.
Rap Backers: But we cant breathe! Two of us have died already!
SJ: Get back in the boot, and I might get you tacos on the way back. If you get back NAO!
Rap Backers: WOOT! TACOS!
SJ: *Magically locks all rap backers inside* MWAHAHA