for Escape4/9 c8 notsing
I was happy to see an update. I don't think anyone is really out of character, especially considering everything that's happening. Thanks for posting.
I was happy to see an update. I don't think anyone is really out of character, especially considering everything that's happening. Thanks for posting.
4/8 c8 
2ilovecrimedramas
Oh no, they need to catch this person! Is Charlie in this story? Update soon!
2ilovecrimedramasOh no, they need to catch this person! Is Charlie in this story? Update soon!
1/4 c7 1TheElegantFaerie
I am really liking this story so far! I love Don/OC pairings so I can't wait for the romance between them to begin! Though I do hope Don is able to clear Jackie of being a suspect and start to get to know her. :) Please update soon!
1TheElegantFaerieI am really liking this story so far! I love Don/OC pairings so I can't wait for the romance between them to begin! Though I do hope Don is able to clear Jackie of being a suspect and start to get to know her. :) Please update soon!
11/1/2012 c7 notsing
I think Don needs to go get checked out by a doctor, he must be concussed if he's making that many mistakes! I'm glad you updated, this is an interesting story.
I think Don needs to go get checked out by a doctor, he must be concussed if he's making that many mistakes! I'm glad you updated, this is an interesting story.
10/31/2012 c7 2ilovecrimedramas
I love how this is told by a completely different characters point of view. Keep writing, this story is interesting!
2ilovecrimedramasI love how this is told by a completely different characters point of view. Keep writing, this story is interesting!
7/26/2012 c6 notsing
Liz is dead? Did not see that coming. Good chapter, thanks for posting.
Liz is dead? Did not see that coming. Good chapter, thanks for posting.
7/15/2012 c5 notsing
Good chapter, thanks for the update. Thanks also for the personal note. I'm worried about poor Don, kind of sounds like he has a concussion. This story is getting very exciting, thanks for posting.
Good chapter, thanks for the update. Thanks also for the personal note. I'm worried about poor Don, kind of sounds like he has a concussion. This story is getting very exciting, thanks for posting.
7/8/2012 c4 17notsing
Works for me! I have no idea what kind of power a grenade has either. But a lot of questions, like who are the bad guys, what does the mayor's murder have to do with it, and had did Jackie is caught up in the whole mess. I really hope you have some answers, because this story seems promising.
17notsingWorks for me! I have no idea what kind of power a grenade has either. But a lot of questions, like who are the bad guys, what does the mayor's murder have to do with it, and had did Jackie is caught up in the whole mess. I really hope you have some answers, because this story seems promising.
3/15/2012 c3 17notsing
Thanks for the quick update. I don't think it was too out of character for Don. But what's his impression of Jackie? (We know she thinks Don is hot.)
17notsingThanks for the quick update. I don't think it was too out of character for Don. But what's his impression of Jackie? (We know she thinks Don is hot.)
3/15/2012 c2 notsing
This is cute and refreshing. We don't have too many fanfic written in first person, so it's a nice change of pace. And Jackie's so sassy! Loved her telling Don the tampon was stuck, too funny. Thanks for posting.
This is cute and refreshing. We don't have too many fanfic written in first person, so it's a nice change of pace. And Jackie's so sassy! Loved her telling Don the tampon was stuck, too funny. Thanks for posting.