for The Qunari and the HalfElf11/13/2012 c7 Kitteninthemoonlight
pleasepleasepleaseplease PLEASE continue this story! I just can't get enough of it!
pleasepleasepleaseplease PLEASE continue this story! I just can't get enough of it!
6/7/2012 c7 
2SaarTalan
This..Is.. So cool XD i admit, when I noticed "on Hiatus" and i was like D: *sad face* "MAKER NOOUUU!" (She said it. Seriously. This is the bf Kyle btw.. Giving back laptop now! Before she spoons me to death..) oo he makes me so MAD sometimes! stealing my poor baby from me.. gww.. next time he does it, he will feel the wrath of the.. SPOON OF DOOM! *property of SaarTalan aka Chey aka 'C.C.w.S' (Crazy Chick With Spoon. AHH SPOON! Don't kill meee..) . my bf.. is a dork...
Ehem.. This is awesomely written so far, I hope you can continue writing soon ( When I seen the names of those pplz in the last what.. 2-3 chappies? I was like O.O *runs away screaming from laptop like i'm bein chased by the Spork of Doom* (the S.o.D. is mine btw, and she let me do this so I don't feel the wrath of the C.C.w.S.) and when I came back (she ran out to my car and locked herself in for a few minutes... dummy. she just came back in and seen Just and the Wicked was up. made her 'So Happeh' lolz) I attacked your new one *once again, AWESOME* and then finished reading this .
Panahedan Kadan . *waves* (That goes double for me, I've never seen something so funny as when she ran lol.) *DAMNIT KYLE! make your own acc.. Lazy ass..* ('pouts' But you LOVE my ass..) . *coughs* Kyle.. she didn't need to know That . (pshh your just jealous cause she might try and steal me) ... *She'd bring you back and ask for a refund 'cause your broken.* (...babe...your mean...) *my mama taught me to never lie, sorry hun.)
2SaarTalanThis..Is.. So cool XD i admit, when I noticed "on Hiatus" and i was like D: *sad face* "MAKER NOOUUU!" (She said it. Seriously. This is the bf Kyle btw.. Giving back laptop now! Before she spoons me to death..) oo he makes me so MAD sometimes! stealing my poor baby from me.. gww.. next time he does it, he will feel the wrath of the.. SPOON OF DOOM! *property of SaarTalan aka Chey aka 'C.C.w.S' (Crazy Chick With Spoon. AHH SPOON! Don't kill meee..) . my bf.. is a dork...
Ehem.. This is awesomely written so far, I hope you can continue writing soon ( When I seen the names of those pplz in the last what.. 2-3 chappies? I was like O.O *runs away screaming from laptop like i'm bein chased by the Spork of Doom* (the S.o.D. is mine btw, and she let me do this so I don't feel the wrath of the C.C.w.S.) and when I came back (she ran out to my car and locked herself in for a few minutes... dummy. she just came back in and seen Just and the Wicked was up. made her 'So Happeh' lolz) I attacked your new one *once again, AWESOME* and then finished reading this .
Panahedan Kadan . *waves* (That goes double for me, I've never seen something so funny as when she ran lol.) *DAMNIT KYLE! make your own acc.. Lazy ass..* ('pouts' But you LOVE my ass..) . *coughs* Kyle.. she didn't need to know That . (pshh your just jealous cause she might try and steal me) ... *She'd bring you back and ask for a refund 'cause your broken.* (...babe...your mean...) *my mama taught me to never lie, sorry hun.)
6/4/2012 c2 13MiiYuKira
I love the Wardens! Well- I love your Wardens, their camaraderie is very engaging and loveable!
Your origin character is also very intriguing- and I keep thinking we're talking skyrim here ;D
13MiiYuKiraI love the Wardens! Well- I love your Wardens, their camaraderie is very engaging and loveable!
Your origin character is also very intriguing- and I keep thinking we're talking skyrim here ;D
4/16/2012 c7 Judy
Well done!
Well done!
3/10/2012 c6 Tanyara
I really enjoy reading this, it is so different from most other fanfics. It is really refreshing to get a slightly different storyline with a different character, it is truly an original idea. And I really like fanfics that have other love interests than the game has, it gives it an extra spice not exactly knowing what is going to happen.
Thanks for cheering up a tired vet student in the cold north of Sweden :D I truly enjoy reading this!
I really enjoy reading this, it is so different from most other fanfics. It is really refreshing to get a slightly different storyline with a different character, it is truly an original idea. And I really like fanfics that have other love interests than the game has, it gives it an extra spice not exactly knowing what is going to happen.
Thanks for cheering up a tired vet student in the cold north of Sweden :D I truly enjoy reading this!
2/10/2012 c6 KrystylSky
This is really great - Please keep this story up!
This is really great - Please keep this story up!
1/18/2012 c5 Skye ShinRa
I gotta admit I'm glad I read this. This is going be in my top five favorite DA:O fanfic. I love your creativity, plot, and the way you are portraying Sten. Please keep updating even if it's just for me alone. This is a really awesome story. I'd give this a 5 outta 5. Kudos!
Skye
I gotta admit I'm glad I read this. This is going be in my top five favorite DA:O fanfic. I love your creativity, plot, and the way you are portraying Sten. Please keep updating even if it's just for me alone. This is a really awesome story. I'd give this a 5 outta 5. Kudos!
Skye
1/17/2012 c5 Judy
EXCELLENT!
EXCELLENT!
1/17/2012 c5 HolyCheesus
ooh are her scaled black now because she is related to the arch demon? or it is because she is now tained, can't wait to find out! really excited now that Sten's finally arrived in camp too, keep up the amazing work :D
ooh are her scaled black now because she is related to the arch demon? or it is because she is now tained, can't wait to find out! really excited now that Sten's finally arrived in camp too, keep up the amazing work :D
1/11/2012 c4 Judy
Excellent!
Excellent!
1/1/2012 c3 Judy
Interesting character! EXCELLENT!
Interesting character! EXCELLENT!